Honghuang: The Myriad Worlds Are All My Customers

It started with a modern witticism, and I was speechless. Really, didn't you think it was a joke?

The protagonist with a cunning philistine mentality.

The idea is good, but the layout is too small and I feel like I won't be able to write it for a long time.

It's written very casually and won't last long.

A running account, with a long span, little interaction, many poisonous points, and flawed writing. Let's cut it and write a new one, refer to the shop owner and so on. Don't make the span so big all at once. You've already done it now, what will you do in the future?

Actually, I really didn't understand. For the first loan, whether the system gave the thing or the protagonist gave it to him with his own things. If the system gave it to him, then the protagonist really got it for free, and the system also gave him a task reward.

If your loan company lends someone 30 million and asks them to pay back 29 million, are you doing charity? To borrow money, you have to have this thing before you can borrow it. You don't have to pay it back if you borrow something that belongs to you. What the hell?

The writing is too poor and I don't see any desire at all. I'll continue to look for the next one.

Xiao Yan has cultivated to the point where the Great Master doesn't even have 1,000 years. Your loan of 30,000 years of cultivation is still just a peak Dou Zun?

This writing is very boring? The system found Xiao Yan? How to play if you find Luo Feng in the late stage of Devouring Starry Sky? How to play the ancient saints in other world lines? Just like the chat group of the heavens? I look at it without feeling! It has three goods, and it gives people loans without having anything? Where are the things? Systematic? The system is so awesome, the protagonist is invincible at the beginning, and is invincible in one chapter. Chapter 2 unifies the Great Wilderness, chapter 3 unifies the map outside the Great Wilderness, chapter 4 unifies, chapter 5 unifies again, chapter 6 the great road cannot be promoted without ascending, and chapter 7 ends. I started reading and thought the new theme I was writing was boring, but I found that it is not my type! At least the protagonist's starting level should be stronger! The golden fairy is not too much, the first peach tree! The Golden Immortal can transform into Lian Lianbao and kill the enemy, so what kind of bloodline spiritual plant will come? With the Jinxian cultivation level, the brain must not be simple, right? Some ordinary exercises can't be made up yet? Isn't this the activation of funds? Hey. The beginning is a loan, the protagonist is really awesome! What I met was in line with the settings of the Zhutian chat group. The protagonist knew everything and the group members were all novices! (May I ask everyone in the Zhutian chat group, which book is popular?)