Hogwarts Demons

We already have a female protagonist, can we not have something to do with Hermione?

To be honest, the author has so many scenes with Hermione in the early stage and has done a lot for her as the main character. I really thought that Hermione and I were growing up slowly and both sides were slowly changing their personalities. The front part is too easy to seduce people, but in the back there is an original character who is the heroine. It has a very strange sense of fragmentation (┯_┯). And as an old man said in the comments, it really shouldn't have so much to do with Hermione. If the protagonist is only cold and hot on the outside, but he is not as caring about other friends as he is for Hermione, tolerance can even be said to be gentle. In the early stage, it was said that Hermione was lonely in school and was bullied, and the protagonist stood up for him and made friends with her. Later, when the troll was there, the sentence "So, who am I to you?" (I went back and read it again when I was writing the review) It was really hard to understand! I thought Hermione would slowly change at this point, and then it would be just like the last book (ºº ). If they are really just friends, they should meet by chance in the early stage. (If the author does not release the heroine, 90% of the time when others see it, they will say that the heroine is Hermione.) Of course, this is just my own point of view, and the author can just take it as a joke. But the author has made obvious progress in this book. The previous book was like a green apple, beautiful and immature but the plot was a bit abrupt. This book is huge. The writing style has improved a lot. Like a cup of black tea on a sunny afternoon, it is light and refreshing when you savor it carefully, and the plot unfolds slowly and comfortably. I hope the author lives a happy life and that his book will be popular! I will always support it. (A Hermione who is a sophomore in middle school) (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The book is pretty good, but the demon at the beginning looks like a dragon, and it feels like it was forcibly lowered and DEbuff increased.

The classic start is full of magic power, then the magic power explodes, and the magic power is overdrawn and hurts the body. Of course, the most classic thing is that the protagonist, an orphan, has a secret about his life, and then leaves a riddle to be the riddle. After that, the tadpole goes to his mother to find the truth? It's too redundant, and the first three chapters are too discouraging.

The author might as well write about the Dragon Clan. This hp novel is full of Dragon Clan feeling. If you like the Jiangnan style, you can read it. It has a Jiangnan flavor.

Finally, don't join a group. If you join a group, your popularity will not be very high later.

The first few chapters of this book have a literary and youthful flavor, which I can't offend.

Is your Salazar grandfather in Portugal?

Is there any way to live forever in the world of Harry Potter?

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The main character is written without a clue. The author just wrote whatever he thought of. This logic makes no sense.

There is no hp flavor, it feels like forcibly reducing the protagonist's intelligence.

I want to ask everyone and the author, is Hermione the heroine? Multiple heroines are fine.

How should I put it? Salazar is a poisonous surname that reminds me of the first headmaster of Slytherin.

The name of this chapter is really hard to dismiss. Can you change it?

No, I know the original work I was disillusioned when I saw the bar I didn't recognize Professor McGonagall's cat Are you serious? ? ?