Moonlight Life at Hogwarts

Sorry, because it is my first time to write a book, so I don't grasp some parts very well. I don't ask for your understanding. It's too hypocritical and fake. Everyone is out to do things. Why should you forgive me? This is wrong and too hypocritical; But I still hope that everyone can pay more attention to me, give me some recommendation votes, give some rewards, etc., So that I can order more meat dishes when I am at school, and I can order more skewers when I go out for dinner with my friends. I don't have to be so tight. This is good. To borrow the words of an old gentleman: I would like to thank you all for being able to tolerate me and prevent me from doing evil in the world.

I have seen the free chapter end. The first half of the fanfic is pretty good, but the Elf King and the like are a bit of a drama... It feels like I have a layer of Harry Potter skin on the outside, but a lot of it is my own secondary content 😥 The heroine Hermione is just a bit different, but it is different from the original work. It's a bit much, but it's unexpectedly cute. What I can't accept personally is that there are too many girls close to the male protagonist of a single-female novel. With this kind of development, you can either start a harem and don't care whether it will ruin the original work. Anyway, Hermione's character is already so different from the original work, so what do you have to worry about? No matter how you look at it, it is impossible for that elf to be a family relationship. After living together for seven years without any blood relationship, it is impossible to say that it is not love... Even if I like Hermione and have only known each other for more than a year, how can it be compared to the elf who has been there for seven years? Just like the Anna you wrote, I can't see any sense of camaraderie with the protagonist in her. To use this method to set off the protagonist's infatuation with Hermione is quite poisonous to be honest 😐 I was defeated first! !

Hermione

It's too immature, and there are too many poisonous points... If you have a good appetite, you can take a look

Has the author ever been in love? Don't get me wrong, I'm just curious.

The update is too slow 😐 I strongly condemn it. As I get older, I like sweet daily life.

We were born in the quagmire, pursuing the light, we pursue the power of courage, we are Gryffindor/dog head∪･ω･∪

Let me tell you book friends who want to get into this trap. The first thing you should do when you get into this trap is to turn off the paragraph bubbles and end-of-chapter comments, because there are always some disgusting people who are speculating on others with the greatest malice.

Not bad, and Hermione's bitch is quite good

Very well written! ! Anyway, I like it! As long as you don't have a palace, that's fine

The writing was okay, but I didn't understand Hermione's plot. Why did Voldemort teach Hermione how to curse? Moreover, from the current situation, Hermione has become mentally unstable and started to go berserk.

Look what I found, I didn't even notify you when I published the book. In addition, it is gratifying to be able to persist in writing a completed book and have it signed. Congratulations.

I was so confused when I saw Chapter 33. The plot of the King of Elves is very abrupt, and the interactions with the four giants are also inexplicable, and then the evil god or something appears, which makes me dizzy. The author probably wants to expand the world view, but it feels strange if it has no beginning and no end.

How to say that, it's okay to say that I can watch it, but I feel uncomfortable watching it. The more I watch it, the more I feel that pig's feet are licking dogs. As a reborn person, since I am not familiar with Hermione's class, don't feel so aggrieved.

What have you written in these recent posts?

Under normal circumstances, would you let your girlfriend carry a very dangerous thing? Shouldn't it be destroyed immediately? Why keep it?

It's quite interesting. I found the story of the Elf King boring so I skipped it. Later, when I went back to China for vacation and encountered different system forces, the story was good. The only drawback is that Hermione can't see it? With very little interaction with her, her intelligence should be able to sense that something is wrong.

Am I the only one who feels that Penelo written by the author is a bit annoying? . It's like there's no social distance

Judging from the name and introduction, it seems that the author wants to write a HP romance novel, but have you ever seen any romance novels that give the protagonist a mission to save the world? There shouldn't be any people who can still have sweet love while their own world is about to be destroyed, right? Why give an 11-year-old kid who has just entered the magical world a task to save the world? Not to mention saving the world, from the feeling of sadness when seeing the Ravenclaw statue to the appearance of the silver-haired girl, as well as the presence of demons and allies of the devil, it all reveals that there will be a big disaster in the future waiting for the protagonist to save. With this kind of crisis of world destruction, how many people can talk about the beauty of the sweet moonlight without taking it seriously?