Hogwarts' Demonic Disciple

Since there's already a female lead, can't we avoid having anything to do with Hermione?

To be honest, author, you gave Hermione so much screen time in the early stages, and did so much for her as the main character. I genuinely thought the story would unfold gradually with Hermione, and that both of them would slowly change their personalities.

The book is good, but the beginning makes the demon and the dragon seem the same, and it feels like the debuffs are forcibly reduced and increased.

The classic opening is brimming with magical energy, followed by a magical overload that damages the body. Of course, the most classic element is the protagonist's orphaned past with hidden secrets, leaving a riddle for the protagonist to solve, and then the tadpoles searching for their mother—is it all superfluous? The first three chapters are incredibly off-putting.

The author should write about Dragon Raja instead. This HP fanfiction is full of Dragon Raja vibes. If you like Jiangnan style, you can check it out; it has a Jiangnan flavor.

Finally, don't join a group; if you do, your popularity won't be very high later on.

The first few chapters of this book have a pretentious, artsy vibe; you can't mess with that!

Is your grandfather in Portugal, Salazar?

Is there any way to achieve immortality in the world of Harry Potter?

The protagonist is written in a nonsensical way; the author just wrote whatever came to mind, and the logic is utterly nonsensical.