Superman: Beginning with the Man of Steel

After seeing the latest chapter, you actually want to learn fighting skills from Batman? The super brain is gone? It's useless at all. Should a flying superman have to box on the ground like ordinary people? No matter how good your skills are, if your reaction speed is faster than yours, you can't hit, so what's the use?

The previous writing was okay, until that Luo Qingqing appeared, writing about a heroine in the American comic world at the age of 11? Or original? Destined to pounce

Another superman with a useless super brain

There are always people who don't believe in evil and insist on superman practicing martial arts and practicing one by one.

Instead of developing high technology, we copy chat software! The author is a talent.

Why didn't Clark know about Pig's Foot's abilities for all these years? Are you thinking Superman is too stupid? Is super hearing and everything just a decoration? You don't even reveal that your girlfriend is such a good friend as Superman? Don't you want to use your ability in the future? Have you been pretending to be an ordinary person?

Why would Superman, who can fly but fight in three dimensions, learn to fight while standing on the ground?

The original heroine is extremely poisonous, primary school students should write a book

I also backed away when I saw it was an Asian girlfriend. You are already dressed as a white guy, why are you Asian? You are still an original Asian. Can't you just talk to the white girl in peace?

It's so annoying, you have this kind of protagonist again, why does it matter to you that aliens are invading you? What happened to the people in the dead center? Without a war, how can there be progress? Look how much of today's technology was developed during World War II? So many technological ideas and blueprints were made at that time. I really think I am the savior. It's amazing.

It's poisonous. I don't know what made it on the list. The author should read other people's books. Look at the books in front of you and learn from them.

When I saw Chapter 30, other book friends talked about super brains and other issues. After reading, I found that the author had supplementary explanations. Whether you can accept this is up to you. But I really can't accept Luo Qingqing as the heroine. After all, she is the heroine. As she is now, it's not at all This book can't handle it. The characters are too weak to hold up the heroine's role. The whole character is hollow, with no background and no distinct personality. I can't see any use for this character. It's a complete failure. I can't ignore her while reading. The author is completely thankless! As a fan fiction author, when I am not strong enough to create new characters, the heroine can completely choose the original character. There are too many choices. I really can't figure out why I want to create this heroine. This heroine touched my poisonous spot and she died suddenly and retreated. I look forward to the author's next book.

When I saw the protagonist collecting three mother boxes for experiments, I knew something was going to happen. He was not cautious at all. He risked his own life and experimented with the mother boxes for some boring reason of space travel. Then he suddenly disappeared without even saying hello. I was so irresponsible to my family and friends. I was most annoyed by this kind of forced time-travel drama. It was inexplicable and just random!

The brain is so powerful, why can't it release its mental power? The function is too single. The degree of development of Superman's brain may not be as high as imagined. The utilization rate of ordinary people's brains is less than 10% of ordinary computers. The utilization rate of Superman's brain evolved into quantum supercomputing may also be less than 10%.

Except for Naruto fans, everyone else who has physical contact with children seems to be 404

If you don't know how to write about emotions, just get a kidney

Someone said before that this is Superman without a super brain. Let me clarify, it's not that he doesn't use a super brain, it's that he doesn't use a brain.

All three books have been cut... No wonder, at this level, it is difficult not to cut them

This copy was opened inexplicably and left.

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The most taboo thing about fan fiction is the original heroine. If you have an original heroine, then you might as well read the original novel. This novel is destined to be a hit on the street.

Express your personal opinion In general, it's okay, but the protagonist is a bit too naive and too immersed in his own utopian world. Also, if it is created by a fan, the personality of the original character is very different. In the case of Batman, he wants him to teach kung fu and be a subordinate. It's impossible. Batman will doubt everyone, including himself. If you ask him to learn from him, he will only think about how to catch you and then hang you up and beat you. This kind of plot is okay for urban entertainment. There are too many DC relationships and are too complicated. If you want to write it, you can only read it as a cool article. My personal opinion is purely personal. Whoever is right is right.