I Am the Dragon King of the Well in the World

Can you give the little loach some brains? The halo of intelligence in other books is given to villains and cannon fodder, but the halo of intelligence in this book is given to pig's feet! Now I see that the little loach has changed from a cute and cute person to a mentally retarded child! I don't ask the little loach to be smart, I just ask that its brain not be filled with mush! Oh my God! I really can't stand it anymore when the little loach continues to be so stupid!

My personal suggestion is to let the protagonist learn more things, and not to have too many good things that he doesn't recognize. If there is any conflict with the follow-up, just follow the author's own opinion

Angular acceleration

The word count is about 2k, one chapter, two chapters a day, and I am currently on chapter 4. I hope it will remain stable. The writing style seems to be quite comfortable. There are no poisonous points at present, and it is not like the common bad system that is directly given to Goldfinger without any brain. It would be better if there was a little more depth about the special characteristics of the protagonist.

Why can't I find a place with limited exemption at my starting point? Where can I find it for free for a limited time?

The author's ambition is a bit big! In fact, many people read this book because of the theme of dragons, and they are rare Eastern dragons. Most dragon novels are about Western dragons. Unfortunately, the author actually said that he would not write about dragons. Another point is the treatment of Buddhism. Even if you want to denigrate Buddha, you must have a famous teacher. Although denigrating Buddhism has become common sense in the novel world, you still need a reasonable reason. The author's approach is a bit too far-fetched.

I think the rest is fine, but why do I feel like the protagonist's IQ is getting lower as the writing goes? Now I don't look like a time traveler, but more like a little monster who has just become a spirit, with an IQ of only ten years old.

The author likes to be played and deceived by women. The protagonist is a true virgin who is willing to sacrifice herself to help others. I can say without mercy that the protagonist has given up every opportunity and has not improved at all. The protagonist can rise to one realm. Others and a servant can rise to several great realms. All kinds of unruly and willful women play tricks on the master. The protagonist held his face and licked it, and even smiled after being slapped. The key point is that the protagonist likes to be played with by women, and likes to give his things to other women in various ways, especially the more powerful the woman, the more the protagonist likes to be played with, deceived and used by her. The protagonist is a licking dog. Of course, maybe the author has this interest.

In the first few chapters, I felt that Xiancao was good-looking. In the middle, I think everyone may have a different view. I felt that the protagonist was too out of touch. I didn't like this kind of character. Personal opinion. Let's take another look.

When I saw the protagonist eating and cheating his friends in the monastery but not receiving any due punishment in the end, I couldn't stand it anymore! The protagonist was helped by the mountain god to steal fruits together, but he didn't consider the mountain god's situation and picked every fruit. He was greedy and was found to have put the mountain god in danger. At the same time, it also eliminated the possibility of the mountain god stealing fruits in the future. It can be regarded as tricking the mountain god twice. Sun Wukong has to pay a due price for stealing the ginseng fruit. The protagonist can escape easily after stealing the fruit. This is not a correct value. It cannot be said that the protagonist will grow up in the future. After all, he was so mature before.

Let's practice Taishang Zhenyi's seven-turn and seven-transformation dragon technique.

To be honest, copying documents is embarrassing. And it feels forced

I thought it was a pure Shinto novel, but after reading some chapters, it did not describe the grandeur and majesty of Shinto at all, nor did it describe karma. This book gave me the feeling that Shinto is compared to a big company. The protagonist is a cleaner who picked up a bunch of keys while cleaning. In the dead of night, he secretly took advantage of the company.

Is it okay to not be a scoundrel and still build a memorial arch? While criticizing the aristocratic family for generations, at the same time have thousands of loaches under your command (it is still obviously unqualified). Isn't it just a loach family from now on? The protagonist is still proud and not ashamed.

Why is the protagonist becoming more and more like a child, giving all the benefits to others, while giving away everything to himself without benefit? I couldn't understand the point about saving the Dragon Earthworm Ancestor, so I licked some flesh and gave it to that guy three thousand earthworms, and then came back. In order to prevent the Dragon Earthworm Ancestor from dying? For what? ? ?

The loach should turn into a black dragon (invasion and deletion)

The title of the book is Well Dragon King, but it doesn't transform into a dragon???

At the beginning, the protagonist is a bit eccentric, but as he goes on, he becomes more and more eccentric. It is said that he is reincarnated in time. One moment, the protagonist looks like a 45-year-old child with a mental retardation, and the other moment, he looks like a worker who has just entered society and is working as a greaser in the workplace. The role positioning is very strange. There are only a few normal characters in the book, so I gave them up.

The double standard is so powerful that on the one hand it attacks the aristocratic family and calls it a cancer, on the other hand it develops into an aristocratic family itself. As soon as the protagonist has the power, he will give orders and all the members of the family will be recruited.

This is what pig's feet look like in my mind, hehe

This is a comedy, right? The character doesn't match the subject matter, it's too childlike, and it looks like a pirated copy of The Adventures of Little Carp. It can be on the same level, but this is the starting point, not children's literature.

Is the author planning to change the animation? It's too young. If the author changes the animation, I have already thought of a name. It will be called The Adventures of Little Loach 🔨

Why does it feel a little childish?

After reading a hundred chapters, the content is very good, but I feel that the protagonist is mentally immature and sometimes a bit too childish. I understand that the author wants to write that the protagonist knows little, so he does not seem smart, but knowing little does not mean that he must be childish.

Why is the protagonist becoming more and more mentally retarded?

I finished this book and cut off the last few chapters. Isn't it disgusting?

There is no clear main line, the story lacks continuity, and the content comes out one after another. I think the author most likely has no outline. Dong Ze travels through thousands of years to do great things, and then travels back to the original timeline without realizing the significance of his previous actions, just like Zhang Wuji turned into a wanderer again after pretending to be cool in Guangmingding. As a reader, I feel like I have been tricked.

To put it simply, the protagonist has no brain. Those who want to see the protagonist have a brain can go ahead.

Ah this? Otherwise, it will be completely unfinished and settled, and it will be like this.

The most disgusting thing is the law of time. What is time? Time is the movement of matter. Time and space are one. Only when there is space and matter can there be time. You are not even an immortal. Can you manipulate time and space?