I Became the Stand-In for the Son of Destiny

It has an invincible beginning, an extremely toxic plot, and an absolutely terrible ending. The female protagonists and supporting actors in this book are all very good, and they are of all types. They are just a few older ones. They are not necessary. In addition, for the ending, it is really better to just say that the protagonist cheats and defeats the boss. It is really uncomfortable to read. This book is just a piece of chocolate-flavored shit. If you don't want to be disgusted later, I suggest you not to fall into the trap. It is really expensive and the ending is broken.

First of all, congratulations to Uncle Chang'an for his improved performance. The fried chicken is a high-quality product. The "excellent" Wanding is just around the corner. Secondly, I would like to borrow a sentence from the pre-burial book to win new life: "After the hurried double funeral, this book has the appearance of being "conferred as a god"" Why do you say that? Because this is an objective fact, and the increase in grades proves everything. How to say: Is it necessary to write a memorial to write this book? Someone once told me that QD's books were all YY, and I scoffed at it. Now that I have seen this book, I scoff even more, it's imitation! ! "Masterpiece" What a masterpiece! ! This book is so "excellent". "What book, the male protagonist tj, not a single one was rejected! I gave up" "What book, have these recent pictures shown that spring has arrived, Liu Bei! Goodbye." I want to say that the above comments are all praising! ! ! "Masterpiece" Because                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            has been made

The book is quite good, but there are too few.

1. The funniest thing about this book is the appearance of this "immortal cultivator". To be honest, if you don't know how to write, don't get involved in fantasy. Why not just write about the city? I have to write about fantasy, but I don't understand fantasy well. Writing non-trivial things really leaves people speechless. (Especially in the fight against pornography in the world of cultivators, it's so embarrassing) If you write like this, it's better not to forcefully wear the skin of a cultivator. 2. The protagonist is a complete punchline, and the whole book just keeps jumping around and doing all kinds of tricks. This is really a bad impression. The protagonist gives people the impression that he is a Neptune who is lying and getting screwed everywhere. Is it easy? Pleasurable? Daily? Isn't that how Shura Field was written? 3. The protagonist's emotional problems with the heroine. It's okay to use the system as a guide to conquer each heroine, but you can't write the protagonist as a hero just to conquer them for rewards. Developing feelings during the process of conquering, and giving out sweets while conquering is the real content. The so-called system rewards are actually for the protagonist to conquer and give out sweets. On the contrary, this book reverses the priorities and neglects the basics, making the protagonist look like a stallion. 4. The narrative rhythm is wrong. The development of each heroine, hey, I can't say it's stiff, I can only say it's forced. If you want to say development comes naturally, I think Green Tea is the only one. It always takes various unforgettable experiences to create emotions. Can you write wonderful stories and deep feelings while you are stuck in the sect? I can only write about a scumbag who cheats everywhere for profit😅. That's all. In addition, there are quite a lot of seniors in this book. I am too lazy to compete with my seniors, so I will compete with you.

I have just finished my second taste of tea, and I am looking forward to Chang'an's new work (ps: Jiang Manyue will always be a god, I love it so much, kill the madman and add the hero's first blood, the empress of the palace)

Guys, I studded. Believe me, I will definitely win this game, and Lu Qingming will definitely be in the palace. I will reward you with 10,000 first to show your determination.

Betting on whether Chang'an can recreate a million-word glory

What should I do if I want to stab the male protagonist to death after reading the first 5 chapters? The smell of scum.

Let me tell you, now I am a junior junior sister Now I want to bite the protagonist to death. How do I describe this character in the book written by Chang'an ? The one who gets the most stomachache in the end is her Obviously she was the first one I met, and I was always by his side, and I kept lending him spiritual stones. Why did he get together with the Saint? Then who am I? (That's all)

What kind of retarded plot is this? The protagonist used the Sky Frost Sword Intent during the competition, and then said he couldn't lie or it would be difficult to explain later, and then turned around and tricked Susu into taking the title of the dog-licking saint. Is this deliberately disgusting? You don't really think it's fun to damage a girl's reputation, do you?

There are some big poisonous spots, and there are constant small poisonous spots, but the book is not bad and it is a pity to abandon it. Therefore, it is recommended that readers with weak poison resistance can read the book before going to bed, so that when they see the poisonous spots, they go to sleep and they don't feel poisonous when they wake up. It is effective in personal testing🤣👍

The further you get to the back, the more you lick the dog. I'm convinced. I can't stand it anymore when I see Lu and Qin blackmailing the protagonist for the treasure.

It's really hot to see that the sect can't even guarantee the protagonist's personal safety, so it just wants to trade the protagonist's treasure, and it's an honor for the protagonist to leak a little bit of dust to the protagonist. I am the protagonist and I jumped out of the car and left. The protagonist is yellow hair, not a licking dog and a boiling sheep.

I feel like it's a bit boring to watch. The main character looks like a dick with a sperm head. Every chapter is thinking about these things. At first, it was interesting to watch Shura Field and some daily life, but now I feel like the main character is crazy.

I feel a little cute if Little Green Tea can get in touch with the heroine.

Deleting comments is a fool's errand, and I won't let you talk about what I wrote 💩

Does Big Green Tea have a pout? Let me give you a happy word.

In the early stage, Junior Sister Pei's love for money and her naive character were really likable, but later on the plot gradually became more and more interesting. Anyone with a little bit of intelligence can see that the female protagonists' IQs have collectively declined. Little Green Tea took the initiative to become the male protagonist's dog licker without realizing it (the male protagonist was the dog licker originally). I quite liked the original Little Green Tea, but the author deliberately lowered Little Green Tea's IQ, which disgusted me. Qi Hansu deliberately gave Gu Changsheng his first kiss in order to make his best friend die. Do you think this is ridiculous? I don't think there's anything wrong with Junior Sister Pei, she's just naive. In general, it is a plot about Gu Changsheng licking the heroines and trying to fight between them in order to level up. The heroines get to know each other in order to make each other die, giving Gu Changsheng a plot for nothing, but I think it is okay if you watch it casually. {"TopicId":"995007324090269696","TopicName":"Book review activity"}{"TopicId":"1033428034865004544","TopicName":"Any reading during the summer vacation"}

The emperor's uncle can see it, but the plot cannot withstand scrutiny and the protagonist's pressure in the battle is too strong.

The engagement between a daughter and a daughter is really messy, you don't even think about the setting, you can't stand it anymore. Be a human being

I couldn't stand it after watching the beginning. I approved a layer of skin for cultivating immortals. The problem is that this skin is too thin and too unsophisticated.

I just don't understand why Lu Qingming had such an attitude towards the protagonist before he was out of trouble? The protagonist doesn't have any opinions at all?

She's scheming and loves to pretend. It's too vulgar. If you take a female character and eat a set, your IQ will be lowered.

I don't understand. After the Mirage fucks Qin Wuyi, Qin's role in the scene is completely gone. The ending doesn't mention the side story. It doesn't matter if you eat the rice or not, but don't you mention it at all?

Is Lu Qingming a man or a woman in everyone's eyes? How many images are there? If she is a woman, why does everyone think Susu is her fiancée? If she was a man, why did everyone recognize Lu Qingming as soon as she came back from the ancient road? It feels like there is a bug.

This Qin Wuyi arrogantly asked the male protagonist to do this and that without giving him any reward. The little green tea's father directly gave him his skills when they met for the first time. This Qin Wuyi was really a prostitute for free and didn't even bother to give a good face to the male protagonist.

Lu Qin and Lu Qin lack the most basic respect for the male protagonist. They simply treat the male protagonist as a human being. The male protagonist is also a licking dog with no self-esteem.

Filial piety is the first of all good deeds, and all evils of sexual immorality are the first. Defeat the virtues of ancestors, bring harm to future generations, harm ourselves, and the harm is endless. I hope that everyone in the world can realize its harm, quit sexual immorality, and be safe, healthy, and in harmony with the whole family.

The early stage was good, but the later stage was not good, especially Qin Wuyi's handling. It was so bad that it made my liver hurt.

Is there any issue with this book being converted into a clean version?