The Dark Sun Hangs High

Well, the author's book obviously relies on the plot to win, at least so far. The magic system is not outstanding, but it can be explored in depth. The world view is very interesting, and it is best to have a rigorous and detailed setting on hand. To be honest, the plot can be improved, such as the shaping of character arcs, the portrayal of common people and the portrayal of upper-class characters. Otherwise, it feels a bit like a trend of labeling, flattening and facial makeup. I hope the author can continue to maintain the current excitement.

I feel that from Chapter 1 to Chapter 58, one season of an American TV series can be made. Chapter 58 is like the season finale. The pace is very good and it really gives people the feeling of watching an American TV series. And the author's writing is very pictorial, such as the two buildings in Salem City with completely different styles. The colorful side looks like Toussaint in The Witcher 3, and the solemn side looks like a Gothic-style European city. The entire fantasy worldview feels like it stands upright. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent development of the story, and monthly tickets have been provided hahaha.

It looks good. This writing style must be someone who is new to this. Come on.

I have read it for more than 180 years. The first part is still a bit mysterious, but the second part is boring. I just choose one of the Grammar stories and games. The author also needs to write down his views on history and zz in the book. The result is that it looks like a fantasy version of the old man who carries it with him. . .

Speculations on the identity of "Theseus" Theseus is the messenger of the eternal land, the invisible god of destiny, the weaver of comic dramas, the eulogist of the lost gods, the father of the forgotten ones, the lord of thousands of faces and changes. At present, Theseus's obedience can correspond to the two identities of the protagonist. The identity of "Planner" is seen from the perspective of the indigenous people. "Planner" casually determines the fate of the era. Doesn't the ability to weave all kinds of joys and sorrows correspond to the name of the God of Destiny, the Weaver? Is the messenger's "sanctuary" in the Eternal Land the Eternal Land? And the abilities possessed by the Shuge identity, the will of the Poseidon, the prosperity gift of the Mother Goddess, and the ability of amoeba transformation correspond to the singer of the lost gods, the Lord of Thousand Faces and Changes. Moreover, the "dream" the protagonist has had is about the "Ship of Theseus", which corresponds to the protagonist's first time to change his body when he travels to Shuge. It may also imply that our protagonist will replace his body into the current "Theseus" in the future, and also about whether the future me will still be me. "Theseus" confirmed that the fate of the world after traveling was indeed woven by the protagonist. He attributed the fate that the protagonist is experiencing now to the protagonist. This was woven by the protagonist. Then the protagonist's "great achievements" in weaving fate are already the god of fate in the eyes of the indigenous people. The identity of "Theseus" is undoubtedly inextricably linked to the protagonist. Every element of the protagonist is reflected in Theseus. The name Theseus also has a style that comes from the earth. Theseus's name implies his own essence - something that constantly replaces himself. What is uncertain is whether Theseus will be the protagonist in the future, and what is uncertain is whether "Theseus" can still be regarded as the protagonist.

Now that I have read Chapter 280, I feel that the plot description is too wordy. The supporting characters, environments, and inner thoughts of the characters that are not important in the plot are too complicated to describe, resulting in the fact that the main plot has been advancing, but the progress is very slow. There is no clear or readable climax in the whole work, and it is very bland. The protagonist has no highlight, and the character exchanges have no unforgettable part. It is really very bland.

The first 100 or so chapters are really good. The world view gradually unfolds and the interesting power system is innovative. But the quality dropped significantly after the Rats in the Wall copy, and there were big problems with the pacing between the war and the rescue of Salem City.

While listening, I had a vague dream. I originally wanted to write down the dream, but unfortunately the plot became more and more blurry as I thought about it, and only this draft was left...

Hey, why did it become a military article later? I'm convinced.

The front part is very good, but the back part is really stinky and long. The small events are too long, longer than me reading the materials. There is no physical and mental pleasure at all, and it is more boring than reading the materials at work.

To be honest, in the current environment of Qidian, there are very few books with such a strong flavor of Western fantasy.

Did the author get so excited that he forgot about the main plot and the readers? The first copy was fine in the city, but after going out, he couldn't stop it. It felt like the author wanted to write a lot of things, and then released them all at once, causing the previous main plot to be blurred.

The rats in Ernst's apartment can no longer be seen 😅

The writing is very smooth. It is obviously not a novel world view, but the contradictions, mysteries, and urgency established from the beginning urge readers to continue reading. Looking forward to the first climax, and also looking forward to the direction of the book after the first climax.

It looks good, but with the frequency of updates and the results, I'm afraid of tj.

I hope we don't use technology to replace magic and other bad things. That would be too boring.

I hope book lovers can read it more when they have time, thank you! 🙏

Brother, please insist on finishing it. I'm scared of being punished. Order a copy of The Eunuch. Your book is so good. Please.

Is this book Eunuch yet? Really a eunuch? Like a prisoner? No eunuch? Like a prisoner

It's a pity, it's rare to find a good book with a subject that I like.

I just started watching, I hope there will be more plot behind Sally🙂

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