The Fourth Scourge of the Necromancer

. . . . Sweat, author, how do you plan to increase the population with your upgrade speed and mental methods? You must know that the fourth natural disaster will be useless if the population is wiped out. According to your upgrade speed, it is very difficult to break through Wandu. A game without hundreds of thousands of people is embarrassed to say that it is a game. Also, how can players upgrade so powerfully that they are not really just skeletons? How can they be so strong?

Although in order to pursue reality, the article has become bloated. Whether it is making traps at the beginning, building temples later, or casting blast furnaces, there are only a few chapters. The two mages created by the protagonist (Zhou Mou, Orthopedics Uncle Qian) have not seen any advantages over other players so far. My suggestion is 1: Add unconscious skeletons and other things for the two mage players to drive, instead of forcing them to promote the plot. Just read the title and you will know what this chapter is about! ! ! 2: Increase the combat power of NPCs on the undead side. 3: It is not advisable for the protagonist to become a supporting role that promotes the plot. It is 40 chapters. Not to mention designing an epic war with humans to seize equipment (just write attributes). Players can wear it and take off. They are still farming on this island.

Without quantity, players lose their meaning.

To be honest, if you can, you can add some combat missions and make some characters good at fighting. Now there are only a few characters who have no personality or distinctive traits except for life occupations (the one who impressed me the most at the moment is Uncle Mogu 🙂 in the second grade, and other Zhou people and others should be considered to have sufficient characters but too uniform). The new players are just coolies and don't have any outstanding guys. There is also hope to add some battle scenes.

There are no big bugs, but the plot is very bland.

I have no desire to read your introduction! Endlessness is a natural disaster. If you improve your individual strength, it is no longer a natural disaster.

The novel is good, but the progress is too bland.

Is there no heroine? There is no heroine! 🥺

The biggest question is whether using the player's soul will cause permanent harm to the player.

There's actually nothing poisonous about it, it's just so ordinary that I have no intention of reading it.

Come on, don't become a eunuch just because you have two eunuchs

The writing is really good. Various characters appear and have their own personalities. If they don't jump in the later stage, they will definitely become gods.

Please give Noi a character card

Seeing it now, I feel like the monthly ticket is a bit of a loss. All players are ready. What's the point?

There is a question, what if there are so many human corpses and they are resurrected later 😰

Is there any novel that uses the undead as players' bodies?

It is impossible to work part-time

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Not trying to criticize, but I'm just wondering, do skeletons have five senses? It doesn't even have a sense of touch, and the picture is probably [black and white TV plus night vision goggles], which is considered a high-end configuration in a skeleton. In this case, no one would be willing to worry about it. Let's talk about the plot of the soul contract. Even if the original soul is replaced, a new soul will be inherited (can be explained by the golden finger setting). I have an idea💡 Why is it not the player's information that interferes with shaping the skeleton's soul, but it actually directly pulls the player's soul, and the previous soul dissipates directly or goes home.

After spending a whole new year, I hope there will be the undead battle scene that I am looking forward to 😏

Otherwise, let's push it together 😰

Brother Hui is here for a visit : The third book

Brother Hui is here for a visit.