I Can Simulate the World of Ghost Stories

I've read more than a dozen chapters so far, and there's nothing bad about it. This is food and grass, keep it first. Then let me tell you my opinion 1. After the protagonist initially captured the county, why didn't he continue to attack other counties or county towns? Don't say anything to avoid revealing that he has already recovered his capital. First of all, this can catch him off guard and collect intelligence to understand the world faster to prepare for the next time. Of course, the difficulty next time should be greatly increased. There are also too many clones of the protagonist at once, and it is easy to lose combat power and so on. (The protagonist still doesn't know that the world will be changed) Second, the world after time travel is called dirty things, not weird. Is it preparation for a larger world or other worlds (just see that the door can evolve and select people), or is the world written by the author called weird things and called dirty things. I feel that the sense of substitution is not as high as weird. Maybe it's because I read too many weird novels. Third, the protagonist engages in ghost talk, and judging from the introduction, the protagonist has become a wise ghost talker. The problem with that door is a bit big. To train people to be weird, either there is something wrong with the world that the protagonist travels through, or it is weird in itself. Is it possible that the protagonist and the door will be against each other later, or that the two will lead weird attacks to other worlds? If you can choose people, then the weirdness of the original world can also be used. Fourth, the door can evolve or be revived. Will other abilities appear? The main world trick should be reviving, and the protagonist should not be invincible yet. Then use the door or itself to control the trick in the main world, or absorb the trick to evolve the door.

The bird is really good, pretty and has no obvious poisonous spots, so you can take a look.

Currently, I have caught up to Chapter 71 1. The paragraphs and punctuations in this book are all normal, and there is no such situation as "adding extra paragraphs before the words are finished" or "random punctuation". After recently being tortured by various books (referring to this aspect), I feel good to see a book with normal paragraphs (a bit ironic, I don't know what to say...) And from my careless perspective, there are not many typos. The supporting role is IQ Online 2. The character "Liang Xiangsi" in this book. Maybe if he explains a little too much, some readers may feel impatient. Even if it is due to his personality, you can try to reduce the part of his explanation (retain the necessary parts, or let other characters speak without violating the character's setting?). I don't know if there will be any changes in the future, because I followed the previous version 3. Will there be large-scale strange events in the middle and later stages of reality? How to introduce special agencies and organizations? Do you rely on Zhang to laugh? Is the fate of the protagonist or behind the scenes? (If the protagonist is involved, I estimate that the probability of half ending may be higher.) How should the plot weight of real and simulated content be handled? This is quite important. 4. The protagonist of this book is "Zhang Xiao". The extraction of official personnel may not be friendly to some readers, especially this kind of upright good guy, who is even involved with the protagonist. Is it possible that he could have guessed that the protagonist's sleepiness has a hidden agenda? Not just being involved in strange events, but possibly being pulled into a similar space like him? Is it possible for him to guess in this direction? Or is it dark under the light? Or should we use him as an entry point to get more and better contact with the officials? (To some degree) This character could be a failure if written poorly. 5. Is there any connection between worlds one, two or even more? Is there any chance that a completely ordinary world will appear (but the ability will be greatly weakened, and the control power and conversion efficiency will increase? Similar to the effort value?)? 6. The role of "flower compatible". To be honest, my current evaluation of her is only... She is full of buffs... She has school violence and mental problems... This situation is not uncommon, but she gives me a sense of lack of... "Realness", which makes me feel that this character is a bit empty. 7. The content is quite satisfactory, with nothing outstanding and no obvious omissions... Personally, I think the subject matter is not new... But there are really too few readers... Come on, the above author! If your grades are too bad, then...→1→

In fact, I feel that some chapters do not need to be explained scientifically with so many unclear words. Who doesn't understand that we are making trouble👻? It also takes more than half of the chapter to explain things like biomagnetic field👻, except that the number of words is completely useless. When everyone watches a basketball game, they just want to watch the players play basketball, not the players dribbling and saying: "This basketball is round, what kind of air is filled in it..." Who cares! ! There is no need to use half a chapter to cover something that can be covered in one sentence.

It's so miserable. Of all the books I've ever seen, this is the worst comment section.

The introduction and content are not very similar, maybe because I only read 20 chapters. But is the protagonist really a weirdo? There is no introduction to the protagonist's own killing rules at all, it's like writing whatever comes to mind. The protagonist is not like a ghost story, but more like a ghost pretending to be a ghost story. The author could change the title and introduction of the book. I feel that the ghost is more suitable for the plot of the book. Overall, the author's writing is quite good, but the distinction between ghost stories and ghosts is not clear enough.

I don't know if it's the plot or the writing? It gives the impression that the plot is very bland and unattractive, but the idea is a good one! Just not attractive enough.

Okay, wow, there are no obvious shortcomings, and the idea is good, much better than some, a high-quality newcomer? Or open a small account? Hey, I can read it There was something I wanted to ask about the content, but I forgot about it because of my brain. . . .

Could the person who created the illusion directly imply that he would lose control of his body whenever he wanted to report to the officials, or that he would run away whenever he saw the "master" and officials? Losing control of the body, and the fear of not being able to call for help even though hope is right in front of you, is much worse than killing someone at once.

The protagonist of the true and ghost story is not a human being, but he is a human being in every aspect. Do not enter unless it is the flow of darkness.

I don't see the grotesque versus the grotesque, I just see killing, killing, killing.

According to normal development, the protagonist and the person he chooses will sooner or later become murderers in the real world, gaining strength by killing people and creating fear. At the beginning, they all said they gave themselves a reason, this is a different world. . . . . I always feel that it is normal development for the protagonists to eventually become villains in the real world! ! ! !

The book is not bad, but it feels like there are too many words. I don't know if you feel this way. I don't see much plot in each chapter, so I just write my inner thoughts.

The idea is very good and very creative, but I just feel uncomfortable. 🥺🥺🥺 Maybe it's because I can't accept taking action against innocent people. The situation in the novel seems to be correct, but I just feel uncomfortable.

May I ask? Author, does this book have a female protagonist? What is the protagonist's behavior? I just came to ask.

It's not a ghost story at all, it's a ghost.

Write more protagonists, the protagonists are all transparent

I wonder if there is a female protagonist? There shouldn't be any emotional scenes in this type of thing, right?

The book is very good, but there is no one there, which is a pity

It's a little weird, that is, some of the plots are very confusing. For example, in the latest update, it would be better to change politics to royal power. It does not mean that it must be royal power. If the modern city in the second door comes out, there is no sense of violation. But the first one is a place with an ancient background, and suddenly a politics comes out. It feels weird.

It feels so awkward to be dirty all the time.

I think I heard someone say this is behind the scenes? Wherever there is a behind-the-scenes leak, there is me. Let me try the poison.

What is the author's design for the male protagonist ꒰˶ฅ́˘ฅ̀˶꒱ა

Can that cell ability link fear and dopamine secretion? Skip the excitement of "haunted houses" and "escaping from death", and go straight to the more frightened you will feel, this way your exposure may be lower.

I am pretty good at writing, why is there no one?

Looking at the introduction, it looks very similar to my weird simulator.