I'm a Mercenary in Oceania

Has the author changed? Others are getting better and better as they write, but your writing is getting worse and worse. Your writing is straightforward and as bland as water. You also imitate others' harems and stallions, but your writing is not very good. Looking at harem and stallion stories, some are better than yours. Writing about women is not the highlight of your book. Writing about natural scenery and adventure is. Also, the gold finger is a bit wide open, which is too embarrassing. The gold finger is not used carelessly.

It's a pretty good life in Australia, why do you keep talking about Douyin? Compared with fans and big V, it's not real at all

Come on update,

Hi everyone, I am a clown who is not crazy yet. First of all, thank you all for taking time out of your busy schedule to read my novel. Secondly, I would like to apologize to everyone. The updates up to today are only half a month old, which is what I wrote before Yang Yang. Therefore, if the content is not to your liking, I really have no way to change it. I am still confused now and I really don't have the energy to change the content of the outline. Secondly, let me explain the issue of the video contract. The protagonist has a very good relationship with his elder brother, and the protagonist never wanted the money for the video. His idea was to help his elder brother. If he could make money, he would keep the money and give it to his parents later. If he couldn't make money, he would just shoot the video and let his parents watch him. He never wanted to ask for the money. Then let me explain the horse-changing thing. This is not the first time that the protagonist has brought something out of the new world, and it is not the first time that he has said that he is a magician. Moreover, there is a magician named David in the West, so in order to avoid being suspected in the future, it is better to find out the magic skills now. Finally, I wish everyone all the best in 2023. If there is anything you don't understand, you can comment at any time and I will try my best to reply. But please don't make noises and say things that are not good-looking and vicious and you want to withdraw them. It's not necessary. I can't keep you if you leave. On the contrary, your messages are very offensive. Although the assistant will delete them, I can still see them in the background.

Did the author ask a gunman to write it? It's like an assembly line thing. The most obvious one is the abuse and indiscriminate use of transition words! The sentences composed in this way are awkward and stiff no matter how you read them! These words exist throughout the text, such as: immediately, then, directly.

Come on, update. You can't rest even if you are exposed to the sun.

The eldest brother has a bit of a poisonous personality. While you were telling the brothers to separate, you gave most of the income from the video to the eldest brother. From the article, I feel that your second brother is the one who really cares about you, right? From the description in the article, the eldest brother and his wife are the kind of people who are very clever and careful.

Having a big brother to share the money really poisoned me.

Change into a horse? Author, do you want to give me poison or do you want to end it? Author, can you think about it carefully?

The writing was pretty good at first, but then several women appeared who were described as unreasonable, and the plot was too abrupt, so I was persuaded to quit. Really visual fatigue!

6. It's the first time I've seen a novel that only allows good reviews, and it also has reviews locked. It's the first time I've seen this function.

Not only your voice is loud, you can see the bonfire 20 kilometers away, and your eyes are also 👌

The two protagonists just don't want to achieve results. It's too difficult to achieve results.

The writing is okay, but the golden finger is a bit baffling! It's not developed, alas, it's just for fun!

This book is full of plot bugs. Can the author be more careful when uploading new chapters?

The golden finger you use is considered a poisonous point.

This book can't talk about water, it has to talk about the sea... The text changes between two chapters cannot exceed 40%...

Author: In the later stage, you can write about waiting for the moon or Mars to build a base or something. After all, you bring a new world with unlimited resources and a large enough area. Open a planetary immigration company and bring 100,000 or 1 million people to immigrate to the moon to do scientific research. If you don't go to the stars and the sea, isn't that a waste? After all, you will become the richest man on earth in the later period, and you will have 3,500 children. It would not be bad for each of you to set up a castle, build a manor, or directly buy Australia and turn it into your private territory in the later stage. 😁😁😁

Is this preparation almost over? How about doing space rescue, exploring the moon and building a base, building rockets and aircraft, and exploring Mars. With money and such a big space, we can immigrate a group of people to the moon, open a solar system or galaxy, and interstellar immigration company.

Is it almost time to finish writing this?

Seeing this, are you almost done?

Author, please update! No books to read

Are you planning to directly colonize the moon? Instead of playing with them, just build your own lunar base, develop, develop, and prepare for interstellar farming? Are you going to get a potion to restore your youth first?

The content I read these past few days seems boring. Is the author preparing for a 70-day competition to write 2 chapters a day and 150 chapters?