Pirates: the King of the World Emerging from the White Town

Very watery. 10 Points for a chapter is basically a bunch of bullshit. Not recommended to watch.

I haven't watched it for a long time. Judging from the strength of the protagonist's Golden Finger, it's almost a thousand chapters in. It's not like One Piece World hasn't been promoted yet.

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I don't like offbeat alien plots

Sure enough, it's like what I said. The things you gave are too good. A 4-star gift adds a skill to the original product.

To be honest, I think it's unreasonable to get items even with a two-star rating. You need at least three stars or above. After all, some items are more valuable than your points.

I like it very much, please update it!

Why haven't I read it in a while? Holy shit, I've finished two books. They're really great.

The overall plot and system feel like separate stories, which are a bit abrupt, but overall it's good to watch. It would be better if the progress of the plot can be combined with the system. Come on next time.

The protagonist is tough and white-eyed, refined and self-interested. The key is not to look at the form. It feels like Brother Ming is following the protagonist. He is pretentious and slutty. The plot is so disgusting. He is prostituted for nothing. I have always been thinking about how to betray him.

The backstab from Oda, those who wrote about the navy are probably numb, the navy has become a complete clown😅

Nnd, I am chasing two books, one is a pirate manga, and the other is a Zhantong manga. As a result, Zhantong's one hits Judiciary Island, and Pirates' one rushes into the palace. It's crazy. It's against the rhythm of heaven. I'll destroy your country here, and I'll attack your Judiciary Island there

Those fights with Hawkeye were embarrassing as hell. I particularly admire the protagonist. The protagonist has a lot of messy powers and is not a pure swordsman at all. The eagle eye admires you for being stupid.

I've been keeping this book since it was released, and I ordered it all without even reading any reviews. I regretted it a bit after reading it. There are too many plots in another world, and they are basically Japanese comics that I have never read. I won't say what the writing is and what the plot is. It's a hodgepodge of one-sentence stories, and it's a comprehensive manga with the theme of One Piece (currently the main line is pirates, and Projection of Another World has completed its mission, and the length is getting longer and longer). It is especially suitable for those big guys who have read countless books, so I'd better just keep reading. In fact, I really don't want to comment, but I panic after vomiting a few words. Finally, I wish the author a prosperous literary career and reach a higher level!

It feels more and more boring. I feel obedient from the beginning of the girl killing, especially when the ice attribute immunity kills Des, I look confused😳, and then I become less and less motivated.

Killing the navy is still He's subordinate. There must be scum in the navy, but if he kills indiscriminately, what is the difference between the protagonist and the scum? And don't tell me to stop reading if you can't accept it. I'm just curious. If you go to the supermarket to try some, the stuffing of the buns is shit. Will anyone walk away quietly?

There are so many skills that I feel like I can defeat the Four Emperors. I am still following Mingdi.

My suggestions are: firstly, don't subscribe to copy-type chapters, so as not to disgust us, and secondly, I suggest you, the writer, not to be a eunuch.

To be honest, the character description is very different from that of Pirates. Originally, Pirates were all fearless, but Doflamingo turned out to be submissive even before he was beaten. He was scolded in the face by a teenage Jack, and he was still thinking about negotiating. Moria was in a fight anyway, 8 Brother Ming, who awakened his overlord nature at the age of 10, did not even dare to taunt the opponent or declare war. He dared to face Whitebeard in the face of war. Brother Ming did not expect that the gap would be so big before the fight. In the end, he was ridiculed and he did not say a harsh word. So where is his character charm?

There are so many messy bloodline abilities, like a garbage dump, won't the genes collapse?

The plot is on the verge of collapse. The dungeon world is attacking hard, and the local pirate world is struggling to get ahead. The most important thing is the power system. Both Demon Slayer and Esdeath can stand in the first echelon. It is difficult to be a major general in One Piece. The main force is all kinds of bad skills. The various dimensional power systems are mixed and there is no protagonist. Basically, it collapsed after three hundred chapters.

，，： The protagonist is described in the article as a thirty-year-old elite who achieved several small goals in his previous life with the help of his parents. Time travel to the child of Frevanth. Regarding some doubts, my idea is that the character lacks some of his own judgment. For example, it might be interesting for him to come up with some judgments about the use of the system in other aspects. For example, his hatred for the navy is because the navy blocks news and questions the navy's inaction and disorderly actions. However, I do not see his hatred for other people (the following is what I read from other fans, and I am not sure whether it is the original comic text. I welcome corrections). For example, the source of "platinum lead disease" is the use of aluminum by nobles? (Can't remember) has become a trend, and the production of aluminum is the largest in Frevans. Will the protagonist find out the reason and plan to take revenge on the world's nobles who promoted this trend? Or is the protagonist's country being blockaded and retaliating against the rulers of neighboring countries in the North Sea who blockaded other countries? From what I saw, he actually already has the power to use the power of the Don Quixote family to avenge at least the royal family? But I don't see any feeling that the protagonist bears the hatred of his family and country? Is the memory integration incomplete? With so much hatred for the navy, it seems like there is no plan to take revenge on the Celestial Dragons? I think the protagonist should have the courage to deal with all the objects that caused the disaster in a systematic manner. As the protagonist of a cool novel, you still need to have this courage, right? What I see the most is that the protagonist's brain circuit says time and time again that he wants to replace Brother Ming and rely on Brother Ming's power to develop, but in fact, this seems strange to me. The protagonist gives me the feeling that he has an inexplicable hostility towards Brother Ming. Of course, it is normal to be a little hostile if you want to replace him, but when you are weak, you are really in awe of the strong and feel like you are dancing on the edge of a knife. Of course, the author also emphasized that "Brother Ming is very tolerant to his family." Can I understand this as the survival wisdom of the protagonist? In addition, I don't know if the character is going to be established. The protagonist gives me the feeling that his plan is to replace Brother Ming in the future, inherit the family, and inherit his underground power. Regarding the outlook of the protagonist, I always feel that it is not up to par with his system, nor does it match the King of the World in the title. It feels like I want to be the second generation of Ming Ge, which is not very good. Ming Ge is not very good in the underground world, and there are Yonko Lingling and Kaidao above. What can you do if you set a small goal? He said that I would punch the Four Emperors and become the Pirate King. There is no end to human ambition, thief hahahaha... The protagonist does not have the feeling of a black beard, and does not show the forbearance and skill of a hero. Many characters feel like they are just shells. By the way, this is also the least emotional place. Why do you come to watch the fandom? That is of course because the content of One Piece is not enough. I want to continue to watch the world of One Piece, and I also want to see some collisions of different contents, that is, some imagination. But in this aspect of the author, you can feel that there is not much One Piece flavor in this book. I have been reading the One Piece fanfic for the past two weeks. I saw the One Piece fanfic last time. It has about 100 chapters of content, and it has the flavor of One Piece. This is very exciting. , When I saw this book on the shelves, I felt that it didn't have much of the flavor of One Piece. It was more like a Western fantasy novel wearing his skin. This is a big flaw. If you make a fanfic of One Piece in the second dimension, it is already very niche. If you still can't grasp the basic base of Haimi, it will be even more embarrassing. The third one is probably a matter of writing style, but these are just minor details. In fact, they are also a lot of spoken language content. Why do people like me pay attention to this kind of fast reading speed? Because when I am reading, I will find that there are no memorable points in the article, and then when I go back and read it bit by bit, I will feel that the article is not three-dimensional. However, this may also be a common problem with online articles. After all, the author has to output a lot of content every day, so it is understandable that it is not refined enough.                                                                 There are a lot of strange things said above, but actually this book still has merits. From his insertion point, from Ming Ge's ship, it is actually good, including the system and system rewards, but it always feels a little awkward, and it feels like a middle-aged person writing a book is not refreshing, but the character is not sophisticated enough. He wants to express his wisdom, but in fact he does not feel very wise. It feels like there are too many mistakes and many flaws. In addition, some of the bad taste of female characters in it are always annoying, and they always talk about 404 and so on. In fact, it feels unnecessary because you don't have those detailed descriptions. Of course, the author is familiar with the content of harmony, so it is just a suggestion. Ah, there is no need to write like this. This does not reflect your humor, but looks very greasy. But you are describing the psychology of the character. However, the protagonist was only 11 years old at the time. Even if you say that his mental age is 30, your writing is very greasy and dramatic.       ，，，1000，，，，，， I don't know the follow-up development, so in fact, friends who are new to the game can be more tolerant of the author. If you read more, there will definitely be surprises, otherwise he wouldn't be able to write such a long story. Let's look forward to it. (I sent the above using voice-to-text, because if you write by hand, your ideas cannot keep up with your brain, so there may be many typos. I just feel that this book is a bit pity, a bit useless, and a bit attractive.)

There are too many worlds to write about, and the abilities are too mixed, and they are too complicated to be perfect.

It's almost time to abandon it. The whole process is hydrological. If you say you have unlimited flow, then you should write it carefully and make it longer. However, each copy only has a few chapters and only one node. The plot is not detailed and it is gone before it enters the state. The main world of One Piece is even more untouched. You can tell what you are doing just by looking at the title. Moreover, you have to go to the copy after writing two chapters. The copy has no plot, the main world has no plot, the priority is not divided, and the rhythm is terrible.

The current problem is that the abilities are too complex and the plot of the different world is too weak. I really have no motivation to pursue it.

I won't subscribe to any chapters anymore. Writer, please take your time and play by yourself.

One of the biggest problems with books with this kind of setting is that I want to skip when I encounter a chapter I haven't read. But there are only two chapters a day and I can't skip it. I can only wait. After a long time, I lose interest in reading.

What I wrote earlier is okay, but after Doflamingo arrived in Dressrosa, I couldn't watch it anymore, and his combat power was severely reduced. In particular, Dover can't accept being without Jack. Dover has awakened his fruit, so he can't beat Jack? I also feel that the protagonist's combat power is a bit suppressed. With so many abilities, apart from not being able to dominate, I think he is no worse than the Yonko. He has the ability to transform and have gourmet cells, plus he can transform into a dragon and eat the Dark Fruit and the Shadow Fruit. What's the result?

It's coming, there's new gay stuff to read!

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