One Piece: Idling Away in the North Blue

The biggest problem with the author's writing is that it jumps too much and often goes off topic. The protagonist is missing for more than ten chapters. After reading for a while, you don't know who the protagonist is.

. . . . In fact, I have read this book back and forth several times, and every time I can't read it until I get to Chapter 10. . . . . How inexplicable. After a while the protagonist disappeared. The writing is really inexplicable. . .

I want to be high-spirited too much, and sometimes I have a memory, and sometimes I don't know where to jump. The main character is not explained clearly, and the supporting characters are not clearly written. It is always cloudy here and foggy there, and the connection and backtracking are confusing. Are you writing a fan novel, or are you writing about Wang Wei?

The author himself must be Yang! No nucleic acid test was done, but the body temperature was 38.2

Are you writing a history book? The protagonist can't be explained clearly, let alone the supporting characters, and the plot is even more confusing.

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The time and place must be written clearly in advance. There is also the author's ability. If you just write it without introducing it at the beginning, we will all just guess. I feel speechless, I can't live here and write so much.

I feel like the previous timeline was too messy

I seem to see what the future will look like in the book I wrote 😭

It's been so long and there's still no update