Hunter X Hunter: The Evil Spirit Master Begins from Zero

But I still encourage the author's courage. After all, the most important thing is to be happy when you generate electricity for love.

Just my personal opinion. First of all, let's talk about the conclusion. Thoughts after death need to have real material sustenance, but evil spirits do not. Throughout the entire comic, there are Catwoman, Hisoka, and the Second Prince who have after-death thoughts, and their after-death thoughts are all the people with abilities themselves. Xiaojie's own vows and restrictions are not considered to be recited after death, but they can be removed. In addition, there are thoughts placed on other people or items. For example, the thoughts Kurapika left on the leader, and the thoughts placed on various antiques. We found that no matter whether we are thinking or thinking after death, they do not exist in a vacuum, and they all need sustenance. Then the evil spirit, when Melody first saw it, she said it was an evil spirit that was attracted. This shows that the evil spirit existed independently before being attracted, and she did not mean to read after death, she clearly said that it was an evil spirit. Even if Melody is too old to see the afterlife, then other people are not too old to do so, right? Many telepathic people who have met Fuuges say that what is possessed by her is an evil spirit, rather than a telepathy after death. Can they still distinguish this point? The sudden appearance of the concept of evil spirits in Chapter 400 felt very abrupt to me, as if Togashi came up with a good idea out of thin air and then added it to the work. However, this is not surprising. After all, the work has been serialized for so many years. There is no need to be surprised if Togashi suddenly adds something in the future. And whether it was Melody, the eldest prince, or Basho, when they first saw the evil spirit on Fuuges, they were not surprised, nor were they confused about what possessed Fuuges. Instead, they all naturally said it was a low-level evil spirit. What does this mean? This means they have seen it before and understand it. In other words, evil spirits are actually quite common. This also shows that evil spirits and thoughts after death are two different concepts.

Except for the number of Nian teachers in the world who can be counted on two hands, how much originality can you create? Since the original work is not mainstream, it is better for you to write Yu Yu Hakusho fan fiction.

Readers who like hunters and are looking forward to new content can read this book. So far, the quality is still okay. Originally, there were very few hunter fan stories, not many that could be written well, and even fewer that could expand on the original work. The stories the author is writing now are quite interesting, not cliche, and have written new things. Things that were not expanded on in the original work, and were not explained very clearly, can be boldly expanded, which is quite good. After all, some undeveloped plots appear reasonable and not too abrupt if read alone in comics, but when written into a novel, more foreshadowing and supplements are needed for the author to perfect. It can be seen that the author is very careful in this book. He introduces new things in the Cajin chapter as an expansion. He does not follow the original plot at the beginning, leaving time for the protagonist to develop his strength and power. From the protagonist's golden finger and what he has written so far, it is all intentional about developing power. The main function and use of the golden finger is of great help to the development of power. The line of developing power should be written in more detail, and it should even be developed as one of the main lines. Don't feel that The word count is low, these corners are very important. A good story can be a long one and not only interesting but also immersive. It basically describes the daily life well. Many hunter books have been covered in one go. All that is left is to improve the strength and follow the plot. I don't know what the protagonist's goal is. It gives readers the feeling that there is no subject in writing here and there. Moreover, the protagonist's current timeline in this book is still a long time away from the original plot, so it must be filled with original plots. It is suggested that the author consider taking 'elimination of evil' as the core, and around it develop a new extraordinary system that is different from the mental ability and divine character system, but based on the setting of the original work - 'Evil Controller'. And establish a related force or association to develop into an international-level force. In the process, you can conquer new special "Pokémon" to increase your strength. It is useless to you but you can also train your subordinates and enhance the power of your subordinates. (But you must ensure that even if your subordinates control the "Pokémon", you must design a means of absolute control or countermeasures, otherwise it will easily become a poisonous point) , to have more confidence to talk and play with "V5" when I go to get hope in the future. This feeling is very interesting. The author should have some similar ideas. Currently, the concept of "evil master" appears in the plot of the book. Of course, it depends on how the author writes it. It is not mentioned in the article at the moment. I just think this title is very suitable and can make people understand the meaning quickly. As for other aspects of the book, the design is also quite good. The protagonist's telepathy is digitized using Kulu's telekinesis ability as a standard. It is very good, concise and clear, and has a sense of substitution. There are many fans who do not digitize their own mind power or just use the criteria of taking Kulu at the beginning and then don't mention it much. The whole thing is very vague. This will prevent readers from feeling the protagonist's real-time progress and the extent of his cultivation, which will greatly affect the sense of substitution. However, the author handles this well. Overall, I am quite looking forward to what I have written so far, and I am motivated to read on.

The author and the second design should also respect the original setting. The original work clearly states that it is all a manifestation of Nian. The mind-killing master is actually the spirit-killing master

I'm here to see Hunter fandom, not The Exorcist.

People with telekinesis abilities are graded to stretch their hips, and it is too difficult for third-rate and second-rate masters to stretch their hips, even if they are divided into junior, middle, and advanced levels.

There is a problem with this book. The design is very low in word count. . .

Although there are some minor problems, such as a little bit of water, too many settings, the author likes to use absolute expressions, etc., Overall the flaws are not hidden, and it is a novel that can be read in the Hunter fandom area. The author has a good grasp of the details of the original work and the plot is fluent.

The advantage is that the author has done a lot of research on full-time hunters. At least he has read the original work carefully and really likes it. The shortcomings are that the characters are severely stereotyped and the plot design is stiff. If you like the full-time hunter, you can give it a look.