One Piece: Fenrir the Demon Wolf, Offering Up Ragnarok

Don't mess around and give the fruits left by your ancestors to your companions. I said before that I want to give the fruits to my companions. If you give the fruits left by your ancestors to your companions, it is pure poison.

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. . . At first, Rocks didn't say anything when he called you a little wolf cub. The problem is that when people call you a little wolf cub, you are that little wolf cub. . . I was extremely unwell.

The demon wolf Fenrir, who is synonymous with size, wildness, devouring, and killing gods, why did he become a sissy pig's trotters?

The Valley of the Gods was furious, knowing that Heizhuan had not made any preparations, nor had he protected his crew, nor had he warned the natives of the Valley of the Gods in advance. I don't know why I am so afraid of my sister 🤭 She is indeed an immature wolf cub 🤭

Frog fun, Uncle Yule transformed into Fenrir and opened an oyster for me.

The author, Valley of the Gods, is still sick

If you just sell oysters honestly, there won't be so much trouble.

As soon as I came in and saw Ax Hao, I really couldn't hold back🥲

I seem to have read a Fenrir fanfic, and the beasts and Yamato formed the black and white wolves

The first one is Nidhogg, this one is Fenrir, should Jörmungandr be the next one?

Everything I wrote above is pretty good, except for the Valley of the Gods section. I don't know what it's about. I didn't see the main character's role in the entire scene, especially the section where the sand crocodile breaks off its arm. It's amazing.

It's not a problem to be called a wolf cub. Anyway, in terms of status, he is indeed half a generation behind Rocks, and it's boring to say slanderous words among pirates. However, the plot of the Valley of the Gods is really too long, and there is no handling of Rocks' dark turn. Just like the locals, although with their strength There is no way to counter it, and Oda has not fully revealed Im's abilities and the characteristics of the David family, but it is really uncomfortable to see one of his own crew members break his arm. It doesn't matter to ordinary crew members, but Crocodile has a name in the plot, so does he have to make a hook to fit the original work?

It is a good book. As long as the outline and plot are reasonable, it will easily be on the list.

So far it looks pretty much the same. There are just some timelines that need to be revised. For example, during the Valley of the Gods incident, Ganggu Kongdu was already the marshal. It was impossible for him to not be one or two years earlier.

The protagonist of the Valley of Gods incident can let Locke die, but he can't act like a fool. He knows Im's ability, but doesn't prepare in advance. He has no plan at all. He should strategize, prepare in advance, and take precautions. Not at all, just like a reckless man, feeling like he is running rampant

If Kizaru is let go, he will just rush to the street.

The death of the crew has been changed... But then it was written in a mess 💩... You want Locks' body Just like the original plot Just wait until Kapro Roger kills him and then pick up the corpse It's a waste of cards...

Come on and write

The subject matter of this book is good, I hope the author can be more serious and attentive

Radish Ice Fire😍

Uncle Yule, why don't you sell clams?

Excuse me for your precious time, I would like to make some explanations and modifications of my own regarding the most discussed flaws in this book and the problems that arise in the plot of Valley of the Gods. 1. The appearance of the protagonist. This is definitely my problem. I have read a lot of pirate books before, and many authors describe their protagonists in this way. I don't think there is much response, so I just follow the trend and use it. But blindly refer to it without considering the setting of [Fenrir]. This is definitely my problem, and it will change the appearance of the protagonist. (Especially when I saw a big reader posted a picture of Aqua, I couldn't stand it myself) 2. The protagonist did not interfere with the union between Saint Garin and Magnolia and the birth of Shanks and Shamrock. He felt that his daughter had been abducted by Huang Mao, and that Magnolia was a native of his daughter's country. I really didn't think of this at first, I just wanted to use this information to provide some reasonable material for the protagonist's background. As for Magnolia, I set her to be a daughter of the country. The root cause is that in the SBS information in the 114th volume of the single volume, Oda mentioned Magnolia's name, which means "Magnolia". In the One Piece world, naming flowers after flowers is the custom of Amazon Lily and the Kuji Pirates, so I set her as the female pirate of Kuji Island. 3. The problem with the title "wolf cub". I have rectified everything here, only retaining the names of Rocks and some characters that they would shout out when they are angry after being plotted by the protagonist. Initially, I was considering the setting and personality of Rocks, so I used this title for the first time. As for Garp, Roger and others, I took into account the age gap between them and the protagonist. For example, Garp, when the protagonist appeared, he was already 39 years old, a full 19 years older than the protagonist. In addition, they belong to hostile forces, and yelling at each other is of course an insult. In addition, Garp in the original book is similar to Whitebeard. When seeing the younger ones, they are all "brats" or "snot-nosed brats", so there is no good name for them. Of course, I just took it for granted and didn't take the readers' feelings into consideration. This is my problem and I apologize. Finally, the plot of Valley of the Gods has received the greatest response. I accept any criticism you may have on this point. First of all, I will re-write a set of non-killing Rocks later in the work, or change the plot of the Valley of the Gods according to everyone's ideas. In terms of modifications, I deleted and modified the plot of Crocodile's broken arm and the crew's death. Other issues will also be modified one by one in the future. I chose the easiest way to write it, which was to let Rocks die in the Valley of Gods. The protagonist did not stop the black transformation for the purpose of the plot, which led to the marginalization of the character in the process. As for the protagonist not alerting the natives of the Valley of the Gods to escape, not to mention alerting the World Government, the protagonist is not familiar with them. I have stated in the background description that the protagonist has only been to the Valley of the Gods twice (one of which took away Magnolia in a package), and he is a stranger to the residents of the Valley of the Gods.

This subject has been written about many years ago