Douluo Dalu: the Rebirth of Huo Yuhao

What is written at the end is about making. The author feels like it was sold to a studio. It is worse than the original work. Huo Guai is even weaker than the original work. It is not recommended to read.

I went back specially to take a look at how Zhang Wei was doing in the competition. The competition started in Mingdu in mid-October 2013, and the competition ended three and a half months ago at the end of January 2014. And this book was written in early June, and I haven't finished writing about the competition in the past three and a half months.

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It's very creative, breaking Tang San's conspiracy to hold Huo Yuhao down, and vividly showing Tang San's sinister ways of controlling Huo Yuhao through unscrupulous means, and showing the real image of Huo Yuhao, not the weak one. Revenge is basically completed, and he only has to fight to the death with Tang San. No more that disgusting stitch monster. Especially in the second continent-wide senior soul master competition, Beibei also knew Shrek's true face. I hope the author can keep writing! Most people say water, but I think it's okay. The story flows smoothly. Don't care too much about other people's opinions and move forward with your ideals in mind!

It's well written, I hope the author can keep at it, come on!

In this book, Huo Yuhao has not been brainwashed by the Tang Sect and Shrek, and he can openly state his revenge goals in the Sun and Moon Empire. However, because of his soul skills, he is more powerfully valued by the Sun and Moon Empire. In the original work, he lives a very depressed life in Shrek Academy, which is in sharp contrast. He also has a group of companions who really love and like him because of his abilities, and a close girlfriend. Comparing the original work, we can find that this time The contest, Sun and Moon, is for Huo Yuhao to gain knowledge and integrate into the team, instead of working hard and cheating for the so-called glory in the original book. Therefore, at this time in the book, Huo Yuhao's mental state is much more energetic than in the original work, and the difference will become bigger as you go to the end. Basically, it can be regarded as the gap between a mentally ill person and a mentally healthy person who is burdened with deep hatred, but knows that this revenge can be avenged, and will be repaid very beautifully.

Shennong Emergency Evacuation: Limited exemption saw chapter 247, and I was really speechless. First, in the core area of the arctic ice field, the ice bear king who is nearly 300,000 years old could not defeat Dai Hao, who was less than level 95. Second, the protagonist was killed in the plot, and two friendly ninth-level soul mentors were directly killed. Third, the strength of the protagonist was suppressed. The five-ring Huo Yuhao, who was level 60 and had no rings, could barely beat Xu Sanshi, who had just risen to the sixth ring, and was suppressed miserably. Fourth, the shortage of soul guides The Shrek Academy in the desert has one high-level spiritual defense soul tool per capita (this thing is rare in the first place, and it should be impossible to have one below level six. Considering all the mental power of Huo Yuhao who can defend the boundless sea + six rings, level seven is enough, and it is likely to go to level eight), which restrains Huo Yuhao. Fifth, Huo Yuhao's overall performance is not even as good as the original work. Sixth, there are a lot of OOC characters, including the protagonist Huo Yuhao and the major supporting characters. Overall review: The worst Tang Clan fan in history

This book is enough to read in the early stages, but in the later stages, things start to go wrong when you go to Shrek as an exchange student. Especially in the later Mingdu Competition, I didn't expect that it would go from more than 300 chapters to more than 400 chapters. After all, the protagonist's journey from soul warrior to soul saint is only over 300 chapters long. I don't believe the author when he says he didn't add water. And let's talk about another issue, combat effectiveness. The author's suppression of the protagonist's combat power is ridiculous. In my opinion, this is not a question of whether to follow the invincible flow, but that it is logically unreasonable. It can be said that the protagonist has no shortage of opportunities in the original work. The Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion is a martial spirit, he has absorbed the Wanzai Xuan Ice Marrow, he has learned Yi Lao's undead magic, he has also created his own soul skill - Warm Sun in Winter, he has the 500,000-year source of the Snow Emperor's soul power, he has eaten the original crystal of the Star Anise Ice Grass, and the octagonal has also become a soul. The protagonist has the 400,000-year source of the Ice Emperor, and the 500,000-year source of the Snow Emperor. , Yi Lao's magic guidance, Bajiao's one hundred thousand-year origin plus the improvement of the constitution by the fairy grass, Tianmeng Ice Silkworm's million-year spiritual origin, and by the way, Tianmeng's spiritual origin can help Huo Yuhao (the protagonist) increase the life of his soul ring. In addition, there is also the gold of life to improve his physical condition, and the protagonist is also the owner of twin martial souls plus the ultimate martial soul. The total amount of soul power and quality far exceeds that of the same level. In this book, the protagonist directly increases his soul power level to Soul Saint through the Wanzai Xuan Ice Marrow. With the martial soul avatar, his strength should be qualitatively improved. Then the protagonist needs to join forces with the Snow Emperor to kill the weakest titled Douluo. In this process, the protagonist basically acts as a pendant, and his expressiveness is not as good as the original. In addition, I would like to mention that when the protagonist of the Five Rings faced a Contra and two Soul Saints under the White Tiger Duke, he managed to beat the Contra into idiots and kill a Soul Saint. Let's not discuss whether he suppressed his combat power. Let's look at the subsequent plot. After the protagonist enters Shrek, the spiritual defense soul guide is like Like a bad street, this thing that is basically not described much in the original work seems to have become something that everyone has one thing. Even if you don't have this thing, the protagonist will inevitably face the blue bar clearing when fighting, and it will disappear after a few mental shocks. The game says that your boundless "sea" is all for you to let go of like water? If the protagonist has so many tricks and no combat performance at all, it will only make people think that he is a waste. If you give those opportunities to a pig, the pig can fly. At first, the protagonist's body was slightly dirty when he was hit by the second ring and the sixth ring. Later, the protagonist was seriously injured and nearly died after being hit by the sixth ring and the seventh ring. No, if you really want to write a non-invincible style, it doesn't matter, but you have given the protagonist so many dangers and you are not writing according to the invincible style. What are you doing? Do you think that an adult with a gun defeating ten unweaned children in an arduous battle is something worth writing about? And what makes me speechless the most is that the protagonist has so many skills, you can just write it according to the Snow Emperor's three skills. Every time you activate the Ice Emperor's Wrath, it will be the same as if you don't activate it. The second level of the Eternal Frozen Realm consumes too much soul power, and it still consumes too much soul power at the sixth level. But the problem is that your power has never been improved. How come the Snow Dance Extreme Ice Realm superimposed on the two realms only has the effect of lowering the temperature and blocking the line of sight in your hands? You spent several chapters introducing the Ice Explosion skill in the early stage, but it turned out that it was completely useless when the protagonist was fighting those Soul Saints in the Far North. Skills that cost less but have greater power were not used. You used Mental Shock, a big player that you had manipulated to consume mana bars, one after another. And the fourth soul skill, the mental paralysis ray... This skill is really outrageous, it makes thinking slow. If you can make your thinking stop, I still think it is a magical skill. But what is the actual performance of slow thinking? It just makes a normally normal person stutter a little, and you have used this skill more than three times in more than 400 chapters. Why did you write a skill that you don't use? There is also the weakness insight skill. What is the difference between your skill and superfluous? Does mental detection only know the outline of the human body? Logically speaking, shouldn't the refined operation of mental detection be about observing the opponent's weaknesses? Also, in the early stage, you clearly wrote a creative soul power that combines the five elements of light, death, spirit, ice, and life. However, as mentioned in that chapter, there were no three hundred cards in the next, and they were all cheated. As a result, everyone ended up either tied or exhausted and barely won. Electrolux pointed out the magical path for you. So what is the protagonist doing? When fighting, pick out those who cannot be beaten, and then escape. If there is a Titled Douluo following you, the Titled Douluo will take the rear, and then die. The protagonist will cry, and then say that he will avenge you and practice hard. The result is that the 67th-level Soul Emperor has a hard time defeating the Soul Saint City, which is known as the "non-invincible flow". Jing Hongchen was really unlucky when he met the protagonist. Two titled Douluo's subordinates died directly because of the protagonist, and the remaining two also died indirectly because of the protagonist. The protagonist is always confident, and then always says that the protagonist seems so powerless in front of those high-level combat forces. Please, this kind of reflection and transformation plot is enough once. You actually emphasize the high cost of growth. Then I don't understand why the author still makes these plots and arranges high-end games for the protagonist again and again. Then the protagonist cannot beat the protagonist, so the elder behind the protagonist cleans up the mess for the protagonist. Then the protagonist was so moved by the Sun and Moon Empire that he really risked his life for the Sun and Moon Empire without considering his own life or death. The most outrageous thing is that the Tianhun Empire wanted to assassinate the protagonist and Wang Qiu'er. He said that he wanted to see if the Heavenly Soul Empire could kill him, but his words were full of confidence and disbelief in the Heavenly Soul Empire. Anyone who used his brain would know that the Heavenly Soul Empire took such a big risk to kill him, so how could he not be sure at all? Confidence is a good thing, but this kind of risk-taking behavior is purely arrogant. In short, the early part of this book is readable, but the middle and later parts are watery and toxic. It's a good novel, but it almost doesn't look like it was written by the same person.

I almost laughed to death when I saw this on the updated book list. Tang San's new book is number 17. You, the fan, are almost catching up. I'm waiting for the moment when I read the original work of the fan, Hahaha, come on! Come on! Come on!

I think the writing is very good. I hope to maintain this style and try to figure out more about Yuhao's character so that I don't write too much. I also hope to stock up on more manuscripts. I hope you can succeed. I will order them all when they are released. Come on💪

The battle pressure was too much. Huo Yuhao, the original soul saint, had the combat power of a titled Douluo. As a result, the level 67 you wrote was almost defeated by 10 ordinary soul saints.

It's really poisonous. In the original book, Huo Yuhao was trained by Tang Sanfang. In this book, he was trained by Sun and Moon. He really can't change his nature.

When I woke up, I saw many close friends coming here. Don't get excited, please calm down. I would like to respond to some of your questions. I hope you can think about it after reading this. First of all, I have read Qingfeng's article, and I was indeed inspired by Qingfeng's placement of Huo Yuhao in the timeline of the growth of the Sun and Moon Empire. I will not avoid this. Without Qingfeng's idea, I don't think I would have written this book, for which I am very grateful to Qingfeng. Secondly, I don't think many of the people who came here have read the article. They just read the beginning and saw that Huo Yuhao did go to the Sun and Moon Empire, so they seized on this to publicize the author's plagiarism. If you define plagiarism here, then I really have nothing to say. The idea of ​​Qingfeng's article is really good. When I first saw it, I was attracted to it all afternoon. But the timeline is correct, but the story is still not the one I had in mind, so I wrote this book. It has been more than ten years since I came into contact with online literature. My first book was The Peerless Tang Sect, which is currently being serialized. After I came into contact with novels, I found that neither TV nor games could bring me sustained pleasure. I was deeply immersed in the magnificent worlds described by the authors of online articles. But the characters they write are always slightly different from the perfect hero in my mind, so I often can't fully enjoy them. Then I also came up with the idea of ​​trying to write something, but because of many chores and laziness, I kept putting it off. There happened to be some time off last year, which should last until July this year, so I started writing this book. Dear friends, if you see this, I hope you can try to read it. Because we all have regrets in our hearts, we can meet here with the same motivation, right? Qingfeng and I only have the same timeline, and the story is definitely a new one. I hope you can abandon your preconceived ideas and don't read with the purpose of criticizing, so that the conclusions you draw can only be those you have reached before reading. Someone also said that the plot similarity reaches 70%. I would like to say that in the first two soul master competitions, like Qingfeng, I followed the main line of the original work. Think about it, is it more similar to the original work? Also, the brother who said he deleted his posts, I remember he only deleted two posts in the past two days. They were all mindless insults. I hope everyone can be more civilized. Above.

No wonder your grades in the book are not good. You force your teammates to death and suffer from daily stress. Your ability to compete is suppressed. What matters is your grade in the book.

Suppressing the combat power and strengthening the hostile forces without logic. This kind of writing can only show the incompetence of the protagonist and the author. The protagonist is aggrieved, the readers are frustrated, and the author cannot earn votes or coins. It is a perfect closed loop.

I hope the heroine is Wang Qiuer, and the auspicious beast of fate should be with the son of luck.

Thanks to everyone's love, this book has entered the second round of recommendations today. This is my first time writing a book, so I wanted to try out fan fiction first to practice my writing. I really didn't expect that so many people would like to watch it, and I was a little bit happy, hehe. Originally, I said that I would just let it go, but since I have passed the first round, let me ask for a follow-up study. I hope you will support me more! Thank you very much. I will definitely write it well and try to live up to everyone's love. By the way, one more thing. As soon as Ma Xiaotao came out, I think a lot of people were discussing single and multiple female protagonists, and quite a few people cared about this. In fact, I have already thought about it, but I'll do some statistics below this post. After all, it is written for everyone to read, so readers' opinions are still very important. Everyone leaves a message under this post. There are still many comments. I will determine the follow-up arrangements according to the situation. Finally, please read again! Thank you for your support!

I'm really speechless, Xu Tianzhen is full of poisonous points. Doesn't Yi Lao have any ability to modify memory? Just let him watch. Shrek is also outrageous, so you let Ma Xiaotao succeed? You really are not willing to kill a woman, right? It would be outrageous to start weakening the sun and the moon now.

I think in the original work, without Huo Yuhao's help, all the Shrek team members would have been killed by the evil soul master's corpse explosion, right? I feel that if Huo Yuhao hadn't helped cheat in this competition, Shrek would have lost this time!

This is Huo Yuhao's most flattering fanfic that I have ever read. The original work is not so frustrating Even the girl-turned-version of Huo Yutong is better than this There are also ninth-level soul masters who are killing each other. What do you mean by cheating on the physique of your teammates? What are the following chapters? The Second Ice and Snow Emperors are as if they don't exist. In other books, the level 40 or so Ice Emperors can win the title, but here they don't even have the title. Can't the Holy Spirit's Gold be obtained with just a breath? Huo Zhongshang will not be able to survive here Don't mention it anymore...

Whether it's water or not, the key is that the combat power has collapsed, and Huo Yuhao's Six Rings looks better than the original.

336 Is so vicious. Even if she knows she won't lose, she still likes Qiu'er, so why would she say that she would agree to date someone else if they win. It's really poisonous... You swap the genders, and a woman confesses to the male protagonist, and the male protagonist says that she will go out with the male protagonist if she wins. Then what do you think of your previous relationship with the female protagonist... You die from the poison. If you don't have a relationship with Qiu'er at this time, there is nothing wrong with you. If you have a relationship and say such things, it's just a sideshow, right...

I'm really convinced. I play games every day. Why don't you go write for Tang San? After all, you understand the essence of Douluo.

It was so bad that it killed several titled Douluo within a few years. tmd, is this the Holy Son of Holy Spirit? Xuanzi can't even do it, but you're awesome if you did it. Instead of sending Shrek's people to the West, he sent his own friends to the West first. What kind of evil star? When will you be able to realize your potential? A level 9 soul master has used level 9 soul guide shells, but only a few resources have been exploded The other side doesn't even have a super Douluo, just a few bans, and they haven't noticed you yet. What rubbish? Does your soul-guided cannon have a full attack range within the attack range of a Titled Douluo? The scope is so small, and it has exhausted the soul power of a titled Douluo, why is it so useless? Not as good as an ordinary ninth-level soul guide.

Can the author just have one female protagonist? Please don't have a harem, not even two, I really can't stand it. Meng Hongchen is very good. I don't understand why there is another Wang Qiu'er. Moreover, Wang Qiu'er has a trace of Tang Wutong's consciousness in his body. Under Tang San's control, wouldn't he be able to merge with Wang Dong'er? After watching it, I feel that Meng Hongchen is so aggrieved.

This is not refined

It can be said that they were among the first batch of people to start writing about Huo Yuhao's fans. The author can't grasp the traffic.

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I would like to ask the experts in the comment area if they have any recommendations for better sun and moon lines. Want to see a change of taste.

As a fantasy novel, it is too ordinary. It is too overwhelming and the plot is too intellectually depressing. But as a second creation in Douluo Continent, it is a rare masterpiece. There is no way, most of the others are just history.