Douluo Dalu: Huo Yuhao's New Beginning

In this book, Huo Yuhao isn't brainwashed by the Tang Sect or Shrek Academy's ideology. He can openly state his revenge goals within the Sun Moon Empire, and his soul skills earn him greater attention from them. This contrasts sharply with his repressive life at Shrek Academy in the original novel.

Shennong takes emergency evacuation: I've read up to chapter 247 of the free trial, and I'm speechless. First, in the core area of ​​the far north ice plains, the nearly 300,000-year-old Ice Bear King couldn't defeat Dai Hao, who was less than level 95. Second, the protagonist's plot resulted in the deaths of two friendly level 9 Soul Masters.

This book is fine to read in the early parts, but things started to feel off later on when the protagonist went to Shrek Academy as an exchange student. Especially the later Mingdu Tournament, where the fight jumped from over 300 chapters to over 400—I never expected that. After all, it only took the protagonist over 300 chapters to cultivate from a Soul Master to a Soul Saint.

Seeing this on the new book chart almost made me die laughing. Tang San's new book is number 17! Your fanfiction is almost catching up! I'm waiting to see the fanfiction completely crush the original! Hahaha, keep it up! Keep it up! Keep it up!

The power level was suppressed too much. In the original story, Huo Yuhao, a Soul Saint, already had the power of a Title Douluo, but in the 67th level you wrote, he was almost killed by 10 ordinary Soul Saints.

I think it's very well written. I hope you can maintain this style. Also, try to understand Yuhao's personality better so you don't mess it up. And I hope you can stockpile more chapters. I look forward to your success. I'll subscribe to all of them when it's published. Good luck! 💪

It's really toxic. In the original novel, Huo Yuhao was a dog that was trained by Tang San's side, but in this book, he's a dog that's been trained by Sun Moon Sect. He just can't change his dog nature.

I woke up to find so many friends who had come to visit me. Please calm down and don't get agitated. I'd like to address some of your questions here, and I hope you'll think about them carefully after reading this. First of all, I have read Qingfeng's article, and I was indeed inspired by Qingfeng's placement of Huo Yuhao in the Sun Moon Empire's timeline of growth.

No wonder the book's performance is bad; the forced deaths of teammates are a daily occurrence, suppressing your combat power and ultimately affecting your book's performance.

Suppressing combat power and illogically strengthening enemy forces only reveals the incompetence of both the protagonist and the author. The protagonist is frustrated, the readers are annoyed, and the author earns no votes or coins—a perfect closed loop.