Elf: Trainer Shinji

Very well written, I followed it. I hope Shinji will be slower to regain the elves. The current elves are just short of a team doctor or assistant. It is better to take the elite route. I also hope that Shinji will treat his elves better. I am not saying that he is not good to the elves, but he can be better. There can be more interaction between Shinji and the elves, and the interaction between the elves and the elves. Elves are not fighting tools without feelings. Of course, I know what kind of character Shinji is, but after all, the protagonist is not the original Shinji. Even the original Shinji will grow. In this way, I hope that this book will get better and better as I write it, and I look forward to the day when it will be finished. Of course, a longer book would be better.

If you are short of characters, then build a building. Anyway, there are many book friends Yunsheng Traveler looking for the Phoenix King Pokémon: Zoroark, Gyarados, Four-jawed Echinosaurus, Flame Chicken, Fossil Pterosaur, Hudi, Kirby, Geely Egg, Lady Huajie

All the monthly passes are given, can the author add more chapters 🙂

Here's a small suggestion: for a protagonist like this to develop improved moves, he should have a good grasp of them. Unlike other characters who use practical moves, the protagonist uses magic modifications and then abuses them, which feels very brainless. Of course, the current overall direction is still very good. Come on💪

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At present, I think the pinnacle of elf literature is The Fifth Heavenly King. The descriptions of emotions in it are truly touching. I hope you can do the same.

😎 Both his temperament and his knife path are cruel and ruthless. The continuous attacks are like thousands of waves.

To sum up, this book is actually delayed by sit-ups-like updates. Personally, I feel that he is not much worse than the elf leader. The writing is smooth, the plot is compact, the training has personal characteristics, and the imagination is big. It is not the same as just combat upgrades, guarding poison without brain-blocking bugs, or even a low-level elf guarding the kind that can resist the ultimate move of a mythical beast, just like the game. The only shortcoming is that there are too few, basically only the main line is written. Although there are some daily ones, they are not outstanding compared to the main line. It would be much better if this book could be written with more than 3 million words. Not just getting stronger, getting stronger while participating in the original plot, traveling to one area after another, meeting one character after another, and defeating one out-of-control mythical beast after another

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Boscodora

After reading the chapter about Gardevoir and her daughter, I suddenly felt that Shinji's approach was no different from that of Pokémon hunters. It may also be that I only saw the transfer of Larurus back to the breeding house before posting, and did not see the follow-up arrangements. If I made a joke, I would like to apologize in advance. You pursue your dreams, and in order to compete with the champion of the king, you must select the best. It is right to pursue the elves who are talented and willing to make progress. This is what the first Sapling Turtle did in front of you who was unwilling to join the team. If you don't agree with my philosophy, it's no problem. If you have different paths and don't work together, just let them go. Then things changed later. How did you do it? Send out all your Pokémon to catch them to see their talents. Take away the good ones and release the weak ones. The rare ones are sent back to the breeding house for breeding. What's the difference between this and Pokémon Hunter? It's just that he wants both good and bad, and you only want the good. If you kidnap your daughter, the mother comes out, beat her up and take her away with her, there is no difference except that there is no middleman to make the difference. We all do this in the game, but when writing a world, the elves in it should all be alive. The author also distinguishes it in this way. From the moves, world view, battles, and characterization, everything tells me that this is a world of flesh and blood, but the protagonist's own behavior is somewhat incompatible with this world. In contrast, the protagonist is not like the cold-faced and enthusiastic young man who works hard for his dream, but more like an impersonal slave owner who treats the elves as commodities or slaves.

Shinji's past

Where is my turtle? Where is the big turtle?

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While relying on the power of Pokémon, and at the same time using arrogance to dominate Pokémon, isn't this just negative material in the Pokémon world? It's already enough to be a protagonist, but how can this be a time traveler? If he were a capable person like the big beast, I would still understand. What the hell is a mere trainer?

Yueyue Bear

What do the original elves retain? What new ones have you conquered?

Hidden things like talent are not as intuitive as playing games. Pokémon are creatures with huge contrasts. There are often very ordinary Pokémon but are extremely strong, or they perform very poorly and are abandoned and become very strong after meeting a trainer. This characteristic of the huge gap between surface strength and actual development should be well known. This kind of idealism is like opening a blind box. How did Shinji establish a character that only needs good Pokémon?

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Snow Witch

I tried my best, but found so many, but there are too few pictures of Yueyue Bear.

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Dragon King Scorpion

The most special and magical mobile phone!

If the author wants to open the next book, he should continue to do Pokémon fandom. The author's writing is quite good. Provide ideas for the author "The male protagonist was reborn into the world of Pokémon. He was born in an orphanage. He has little background and capital. He works on a cruise ship in the Fengyuan area and is a miserable crew member. The male protagonist (who has not awakened his past life memory) works hard to save money to buy high-quality Pokémon and become a trainer. During an ocean team attack on a ship, the male protagonist was involved. He thought he was drifting on a desert island, and he had the ability to see the state of Pokémon (a golden finger such as the Observation Eye). He then began to collect resources, conquer the Pokémon on the desert island, and then left the island to start traveling..." This is my personal advice to the author, that is, Pokémon fandom does not necessarily have to start with (new trainer) . Rather than ordinary people, I prefer to see small characters becoming important figures through their own efforts. Referring to (Boss Itaki) is more realistic and more growth-oriented 🙂[fn =31]🙂 There are also issues about the male protagonist's parents In the world of online literature, the description of parents is the most troublesome because (in the real world, most people don't actually have that perfect relationship with their parents. This is the case in most cases in China. There is little communication between parents and children, tense relationships, etc.) Of course, if the author can write well, then there is no problem in describing parents and relatives 😌 I also hope that if the author sees it, he can reply to me. Do you have any ideas for writing a Pokémon fan? In any case, I, a social creature, will still read and support the author Thank you

It's really cool. The results are emmmmm. When will it be finished? I'm so excited. The first time I read your book was because of the reward from the Qingquan boss 🙂

Author: In what month will you publish your book?