The Cultivation Master of the Elven World

Hatsune Miku

Let me state in advance that I have not read the author's previous books. This book is obviously going in the direction of a spiritual master or Teacher Lu, but in reality there are still many shortcomings. 1. The characters are flat, especially Pokémon. No matter what elf novel, the protagonist group of elves will always have something different from ordinary people, whether it is personality or ability, this one seems to have none. For example, among the 10 little lucky eggs, you can arrange a good and energetic one to massage special Pokémon, and another one with a built-in charm effect to soothe the grumpy ones. 2. Words with local characteristics like "" should be used sparingly in conversations. 3. In daily articles like this, it is better not to talk about buying and selling Pokémon. You can express it in another way, such as "The breeding house cooperates with the hospital, and the hospital is willing to receive 20 auspicious eggs cultivated by the breeding house every year." In addition, there are some problems with the writing and rhythm arrangement, which feel a bit strange. I can't say specifically. Finally, if you have an outline, if it doesn't work, just open another one. Best wishes.

Caidou

If you have any wonderful ideas, please share them here. No need to be restricted by game settings, please feel free to inspire inspiration that game animations and other novels cannot! For example—— Charizard, is it reasonable to learn fire-breathing moves? The Gardevoir illustrated book can create black holes, so it's okay to learn the black hole moves, right? The Carp King climbed the waterfall and successfully learned to climb the waterfall. Is it normal? Bite the land shark to learn the dance of the dragon, the king of leave overcomes laziness, Kirby uses sleep while sleeping... The lightning flashes 1000 times, breaking through the limit of moves and learning amazing speed! Crazy plants? I will descend directly from the tree world! Ask the elves to write down your inspirations and whims! ! !

General in skirt with fair skin, good looks and long legs

The writing is quite good. Compared to the previous book which was all about fighting, this book is more focused on cultivating elves. Of course, there are also many battles. Daily cultivation of elves accounts for 50%, battles between elves account for 20%, and conquering elves accounts for almost 10%. The remaining % Twenty years were spent writing about genius monsters like Red, Green, Ash, Xiaomao, Shinji, Raiji, Teru, etc. I personally felt pretty good about it. After all, the author's last book really made me mentally exhausted. From the beginning to the end, I had to rest for several days. (The protagonist's plug-in allows the protagonist to easily cultivate a championship-level elf, so the protagonist should conquer more elves and cultivate them. Author, please bring out your collecting habit!!!!)

After reading more than 10 chapters, let's talk about the problems. The protagonist's attitude towards the elves feels like a tool. There was too much emphasis on cultivating cheats earlier. Ignore the description of elves. In order to complete his own plan, he even frantically conquered a large number of Pokémon of a single race, regardless of the wishes of the wild elves. I hope the author can treat elves as a character in the future. In fan books with high Pokémon scores, the protagonist's Pokémon are described in a very three-dimensional way.

I beg you all to read the new book. Only by reading can you have a better future! ! ! Nowadays, various recommendation lists and the like attach great importance to pursuing reading. I beg you to pursue reading! ! ! Especially Tuesday's data is very important, it determines whether it can be recommended! Please also read the book! ! ! Midnight thanks!

😭

Does the main character have a female Larulus? That would be very beautiful and sweet, right?

I've had enough. There's this thing about Pokémon having a female protagonist. And it's great that Jirachi no longer has to sleep for thousands of years.

Groudon learns to fly - fly - walk - walk - walk but not fly - not fly - can't fly

Tyrannosaurus

I hope... I can still see you when I wake up... Talk... Keep my word...

Support, I have gained some weight and am ready to watch it slowly. It's not too much to be more refined

Refining

When will it be released 😁

From that year until I finished reading [Rebirth of Fengyuan: I choose the Fire Chicken] written by [Fried Sauce], it has been a while since I saw such an exciting battle in an elf novel. The last sentence is "If you want to die, then come to me!" I feel like my whole brain is trembling after a long time! ! ! ! ! !

15 pictures is enough

Sirona

When I saw the catalog and collected so many mythical beasts, I knew it was almost finished 😅

Essence

What about the update? Author 520 was abducted?

Change your name to a fancy one to attract more people. Your name won't attract more people.

Except for a bit too much gossip, there are no other problems, Liangcao

Pokémon

This book has poor grades, is it cut? Are you ready to update that one?