Shengui: Start by Planting the Longevity Fruit

I find that many times the protagonist is passive and not active. Especially the plot aspect. I feel like the author doesn't have the creative ability in this area. The main character expresses very little emotion, which is just as well. But, don't pig's feet have character? For example, indifference or indifference

These authors are too poor at math

The promotion is too fast, and the protagonist's sphere of influence does not match his strength. If you don't want to expose the magic, then don't cause so many troubles. Moreover, the protagonist's state of mind is too contradictory. He wants to save the world, but he doesn't want to cause trouble, and he still has a little bit of the Holy Mother's heart. It's really uncomfortable to watch, and it feels chaotic.

It's really fun to watch. It's one of the rare books that doesn't overpower the main character.

An immortal person should be able to be as stubborn as possible in the early stage, but in the end, there is a plot where someone appears to be a saint. . .

Abandon it, pig's feet are playing both sides. I rely on my own weirdness, and others can't even take advantage of others.

This is not elementary school literature, this is kindergarten

Brother, please stop filling this paid chapter with water, okay?

I can't keep the golden finger in my mind, I'm always afraid that people will know the secret. This hole has been stuck in my mind like a thorn. The more I think about it, the more I think about it, the more I can't stand it, so I withdraw.

The protagonist feels... Like a robot. Anyway, I don't like reading these mindless articles! No humanity, only mechanics

The power system is a mess, and the male protagonist's character is also bad. You rely on being weird, why are you pretending to be a good person?

Your writing style is too stiff and too boring. There is absolutely no desire to watch it. Not to mention subscribing.

The structure of this book: Gou Dao flows from the beginning to the behind-the-scenes flow, then to the protagonist flow (all kinds of troubles come to the door), to the front flow (the mouth is silenced), will there be a muscle flow later? ? ? !

Run quickly, it's full of water after it's put on the shelf! 😡😡

After being put on the shelves, it is not as good as before it was put on the shelves. The more you write about it, the worse it gets.

I really don't understand this division of realms. Can the author explain it separately?

Isn't it limited to free? Why are all the chapters paid for? Liar?

The protagonist is not a good person either. These are the inconsistencies in the protagonist's cognition and are also areas where he loses fans. It is recommended that the author add a few sentences to restrict evildoing

Book in full, come on

Writing nonsense after Chapter 70 is not like the emperor's official being granted a title of honorary officer casually.

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The subject matter of this book is okay, but the author fw, wrote it blindly. If you read the first few chapters, you will know how uncomfortable it is. Ten thousand taels of silver, hahaha666

When writing a book, can you read it yourself first? The logic is wrong. At the beginning, there were no mortals in the county. Once the protagonist upgraded to a supporting role, he became inhuman. The same person ended up being upgraded faster than the protagonist.

The author's name is the same as mine...

Three golden chapters and three watery chapters, I don't know why.

What the hell did you write? With three statues of gods you can blatantly kill people?

Is this how Blood Buddha Seed is written down?

No wonder no one has looked at what you wrote.