Gouzai Yaogui Became a Saint in Martial Arts

To be honest, after reading about ten chapters, I really can't see what the male protagonist is doing, and it doesn't fit in with the title.

It's up to the protagonist to save the human world. Everywhere there are governments cooperating with demons to eat people.

You should at least explain the realm clearly in the first few chapters. It means instilling the improvement skills, and you don't write what realm you have been promoted to. How does it compare to the realm of the fish demon? You have the father of a third elder, and you don't ask other fish demons what levels they have to consider.

Nothing happens, not only does not observe the conservation of energy, but also involves infinite deduction or fusion evolution. Of course you can set it up like this, but there is one thing: if it is too strong, it will easily crash. . .

If you swallow all things as source matter, can you swallow earth and stones? Can manage enough.

The author wrote seventeen books but none of them became popular🔥

The name should be changed, it doesn't match the content.

Pick up

Asking

The first card in the opening, I knew I was going to lose. The standard save the world, this kind of opening is okay, but if you give a better plug-in to start, you will be invincible. If you don't accept it, you will do it, instead of having no ability, you just want to save.

Don't divide a paragraph into several paragraphs. If you must divide it into paragraphs, use only one set of double quotation marks. Do not use a set of double quotation marks for each paragraph.

No brains, barely able to read 🥱

Learned, support!