Mortal: Zhang Tie, I Have a Sign-In System

The writing was okay at first, but as soon as I arrived at the Mo Mansion, I was so addicted that I couldn't stand it anymore. I had a lot of swindlers, and I was still a servant. Why not find a son-in-law and make a three-year agreement?

I'm really convinced, this plot couldn't have been written even if I had a cerebral hemorrhage for ten years, the Mohist plot is extremely poisonous!

If you have a system, don't hang around in front of these acquaintances. You can cultivate your three spiritual roots faster than your heavenly spiritual roots. You really think those people are fools. Didn't know you had a problem. I didn't know you had the opportunity. I don't want to kill people and seize treasures. If you are powerful, you will not collect your soul. Who will teach you the laws and rules? In the face of immortality, only selfish people can live longer.

Human nature is poisonous! While talking about Han Li, he really regarded Han Li as a friend, while taking other people's elixirs to practice, but in the end, he wanted to run away by himself, and he didn't even think about reminding him. He had to consider whether to give him the wood-type Changchun Kung that was useless to him! Author, have you ever had any friends?

The chapter in Mo Mansion is inexplicable, and the protagonist's attitude jumps repeatedly there. First, he used words of obsession towards Mo Fengwu, a 14-year-old little loli. Then he had a crush on Mo Fengwu and tortured her mother.

Let's cut it. Zhang Tie also has a character problem. What he cultivates as an immortal is that he is the only immortal, and what he cultivates is loneliness in the world. As a result, many of his followers are Taoist couples and concubines flying around. Let's see if this is the case in the good original works. All female cultivators are taboo in fan fiction.

If you have to play something awkward, if you want to ascend properly, you have to experience a space storm, encounter a true spirit, betrayal, and live in a foreign land. Can't you just ascend smoothly? Unappetizing

I can't stand it anymore. I feel like I just scribbled around 150 to make up the number of words. In the early stage of forming the core, I started with Man Beard 55. Man Beard is the first physical cultivation in Luan Xinghai and is the strongest in the middle stage of Nascent Soul. His strength is five levels lower. This kind of performance must be considered abnormal by everyone. Everyone ignores it. Han Li is wanted and he dares to run all over the street without changing his appearance. There are also the extremely Yin Old Demon and Wu Chou beside him and they say they can't take action. Just after saying that, Man Beard starts with 55, the protagonist. When talking to Han Li, he said it directly in front of everyone.

Brother, you should first travel to the 1960s and grab a heroine with space, and then come to the mortal world. The farming space plug-in that all the heroines of the farming novels in the 1960s had is much more powerful than the little green bottle. There are spiritual root fruits in the space. If you eat them, the spiritual root production will be limited, and then in the mortal world. All beauties are trained to be of the same level as themselves. When fighting, a group of beauties come together, and the sky is full of magic weapons, magic, flying swords, and spiritual pets. For example, during the Qi training period, the three sisters of the Mo family are kidnapped to farm for you. You give them spiritual roots to accompany you in cultivation, and they can serve you and accompany you to show off in the mortal world. . What do I think? It's much better than forced retreat. Hahaha

I didn't even finish reading a chapter. The author's description of Zhang Tie's psychological activities and all kinds of despair was really intoxicating. There are still two years left, what are you afraid of, and the fact that you can't tell the Qixuanmen is even more nonsense. After Doctor Mo goes out, you can just make up a reason and go out. The Qixuanmen will not take care of you, and you are not a disciple of the Qixuanmen. Just say that Doctor Mo is looking for you.

It's a huge poison, especially when he was in Jiayuan City. I don't know if putting a bug on him has karma in the setting of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. And what do you think of torturing him, Si Niang Mo Fengwu? If you want to torture him for a week, it's okay. If you keep tearing him apart at night, he will definitely die if he can't bear it. Kill, and if you become a servant, don't abandon who you abandon, and you are still cultivating immortals. I don't know that strength is the respect, and you have been pretending to expose your identity as an immortal cultivator. No one dares to say anything when you live in Mo Mansion. They are still very happy. They have been practicing for seven or eight years in a Qi refining period and they are still in the system.

I could barely watch it at first, but when I saw Mo's betrayal, I was disgusted. After reading three chapters, I still haven't dealt with Mo. If I don't kill him, the women in the harem won't think about it. They knew before entering the passage that there was something wrong with Mo, and they still gave the core to Mo? After leaving the tunnel, wouldn't Mo be killed with Han Li's character in the original novel? Well, I guess the author is going to arrange some coincidence, and then continue to lick the ink. It's rubbish and abandoned.

The protagonist's outlook is a bit different

I gave up after seeing Feisheng's betrayal. It's too poisonous.

The system has been suppressed in the card realm. Zhang Tie. Do we just have to have Zhang Tie and Han Li hang out together? Could it be that I can't continue writing without Han Li? Don't always follow the protagonist in fan fiction. What's the point? Everyone else has read A Mortal's Story of Immortality. What's the point of writing a plot based on the protagonist? How many people like to watch it? The protagonist was scared to death of Dr. Mo at first, so if it didn't work, he would publicize Dr. Mo's immortality cultivation technique, or Han Li had the little green bottle, so he would be sure to publicize it, no, didn't Han Li have Han Tianzun to protect him? I don't believe that no one will kill you, Dr. Mo.

Most of the common problems among ordinary people's fan fiction are that they can't handle the plot of Mo Mansion well.

Is this what is called watching Mortals a dozen times?

The plot of Mo Mansion is inexplicably small even though everyone has become an immortal.

Cultivation of immortality is cultivation of immortality, don't write emotional dramas, there is no need. It's so poisonous to see Mo Fengwu being able to become an immortal

The best book written by Zhang Tie! Come on!

The world of immortality is basically filled with handsome men and beautiful women. I don't know why these fans always insist on the heroines and supporting characters in the original work. . .

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The protagonist feels her heart and soul for Mo Fengwu. Then when she sneaks into the spirit world, she betrays the protagonist and throws him into the turbulence of time and space. This part is a real failure. Also, with Han Li's cautious character, he discovered Mo Fengwu's anomaly in advance. Why didn't he tell the protagonist? After all, even one wrong step in the turbulence of time and space will be fatal.

So many people have written stories about mortals cultivating immortality. I would like to ask, has anyone written about the immortal world? If you write about the spirit world, there is no problem. If you write about the fairy world, who is the real enemy in the end? It must be the protagonist in the book, Han Li. Why? Because if you want to be number one in the fairy world, you must follow the law of time. If you want to follow the law of time, you must have the little green bottle, and Han Li, the Lord of Reincarnation, will not agree to it either.

Recommend a very nice mortal novel

I don't know if the author will write about the fairy world.

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Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]