The Hidden Mysteries of the Great Dao

The writing in this book is okay at the beginning, but it starts to fall into the clichés later on. The key point is only a hundred thousand words. You can just put it on the shelf and trick the pigs into killing it. Originally, I thought it might be weird and mysterious, but it turned out that what happened after contacting the official organization was really upsetting. Also, could the character of the protagonist be tougher? We don't want to see a weak protagonist grow up in that way. You can just be complete and then write your story well. If you don't know how to create a character, just take your time. If you sit there for a long time, what kind of bullshit do you create? He is just a licking dog. If you don't seize the opportunity to change your destiny, the protagonist still licks girls and plays games. It's all her novel. Can you have some imagination?

The previous twenty and thirty-three issues were very well written. But in the end, it's just an ordinary urban superpower routine. This kind of routine is badly written, with no intention at all. It can be said that the first 20 chapters have the rhythm of becoming a god, but in the later chapters, it can be completely felt that the author is simply making money to make money. The writing is a commercial and enjoyable article, which can even be said to be a studio article.

A logical closed loop cannot be formed. If I ask you to translate something important, won't I be on guard against you?

Mainly used to facilitate checking the abilities of each realm. Most of the description comes from the original text, and a small part is filled in based on performance. The seven levels of teaching are sorted from low to high. There is no clear order for pseudo realms (actually it is adjusted according to the length of the description text). The letters of the stars are in ascending order. The deadline is 2023.09.29. The flesh-colored area clearly contains missing information.

Made me laugh

Is someone messing with the author? It seems like someone is trying to hack him. These negative reviews all have the same theme. I haven't read the book yet, which makes me very hesitant. If I don't want to read this book, I'll add it to my bookshelf first.

This book is at least a good book. Some of the inexplicable comments in the comment area are really puzzling. I hope everyone will take their time to appreciate it.

After meeting the official, there is no need to read it. It feels like there has been a substitution, the difference is too big.

The writing before I met the official was really good. After meeting me, I felt like I was a completely different person, especially when I entered some training base, where it was just a blank slate and the plot started. I was really blind to the subject matter.

Was this book written by a different person? Why is there such a big gap between before and after? What is the difference between what is written later and the upgrading flow of those cool articles? Don't have too many like this. I can make it up for you in the later stage. Even girls who play games are also practitioners. Then the protagonist goes everywhere to leapfrog monsters, hide his identity everywhere, save the world, and then contribute some cultivation techniques in exchange for resources. Then write some heroic sacrifices to sensationalize.