Under One Person: Inheriting the Sword Soul, Starting the Luotian Dajiao

The author should update soon I feel like the book is going to be gone I hope I can enjoy reading it before it is banned

I haven't finished reading the first chapter, so I just want to say a few words. Is the author serious? Daomen is a general term, including Tianshifu, Maoshan, Wudang, which is Zhengyiyi, Quanzhendao, Danding, Longmen, etc. In the worldview of Under One Person, Tianshifu is Zhengyi, the boss of Daomen. The sect you assigned to the protagonist is called Daomen? Then a sidekick heard it and said, "Taomen? I've never heard of it." You're not good at this homework. Now that you've started writing, you should at least have some common sense, right?

Hey, it was a little bit of fun for my brother to beat Zhuge Qing. If I could write a bunch of nonsense, it would be a waste of all the fun. It would also be a injustice to you.

The author, the setting of being able to use abilities without using Qi is considered a failure. Because in the original work, there was a person without Qi, his name was Chen Junyan. A person like this without Qi, but with special abilities, was assumed to be related to aliens by default, and he was picked up by the alien research organization personnel. In other words, although there is nothing wrong with the setting and the Ghost Sword is related to aliens, there is something wrong with everyone's reaction? Shouldn't everyone begin to suspect that the protagonist is not a normal alien, but is related to aliens? Why do you still suspect that the protagonist is related to the Eight Wonders?

The author's writing is getting more and more boring. The initial description of an individual in Longhu Mountain plotting against everyone in order to survive is not unsatisfactory. The story of Biyou Village is not as good as the previous one without conflicts, but it is still eye-catching. However, the recent chapters not only make the protagonist lose the legitimacy of his actions, but also have no exciting battles of wits. There are only pages that seem to be deliberately disgusting, which is really disappointing.

We need a crane with five swords

It's bland and really boring.

A refreshing article is not like a cool article, leisure is not like leisure, and a plot is not like a plot. To be honest, I haven't seen the main plot for a long time. When the ghost swordsman was a ghost swordsman, the system had tasks to explain, and then the tasks failed and he turned into a mad swordsman (probably the mad swordsman I understand). I don't know what is written in the back. It is obviously a story about overwhelming people with force. After that, the mad swordsman became mainly based on calculation, and it was easy to make drama.

Can the protagonist be more self-reliant? He already has a sect, but he still accepts others as his disciples, and is later threatened by the aristocratic family and the Tianshi Mansion. He can't just be stubborn and keep getting stronger, not weaker than Zhang Zhiwei. The inheritance is revealed as soon as he has inherited it. He underestimates the sinister nature of the human heart.

I don't know why I suddenly felt like I didn't want to watch it.

I want a eunuch, and the next one in order is a wild boar, right?

The Heavenly Master is quite strong, but compared to DNF, which is a skill like exploding stars and destroying the universe, it's still not good enough.

You wrote the DNF too weak. If you really want to calculate it according to your initial template, you will be able to explode the star in the second sleep, and cut down the continent in the first sleep, no problem? It's like a cool article but not cool enough. It's weird and makes me very uncomfortable to watch.

What the hell is this? Do you want to see for yourself what the hell is written?

You won't kill anyone when you fight. You'll talk for a long time without taking action. You'll talk nonsense to everyone. Why are you complaining? People have already attacked you, but you still ignore it. If you really have a name, you won't kill anyone. How about you?

Xia He

I'm begging you, author, can you write some traditional cool articles, don't be ridiculous, how many chapters are there? I just want to see the protagonist kill others, so that's better for you. How many chapters have you not written about fighting? It almost makes you pretend to be round, and the supporting characters are still talking nonsense.

I feel like the more I write in the later stage, the more anger builds up, and I am worthy of being a berserker.

Does the author have a book club exchange group? I will bring you Bakar 🙂

This is the most exciting novel I have ever seen The plot is compact and the characters are vivid The author must be very handsome for the exquisite appearance

Damn you, please update quickly. I haven't seen a book about Ghost Swordsman for a long time.

The writing is pretty good, I personally like it

Come on, come on, come on, the author is working hard to update, it's so uncomfortable to read chapter by chapter.

It's too watery. Can you update more?

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Come on, author, hold on, well written

What's more, I wrote a little bit at the beginning, but later on I became a bit self-indulgent. Humanoid nuclear bombs with a twenty-kilometer attack range will go crazy. As soon as you write this thing, well, the protagonist has not changed his appearance or anything, and then he starts to gain fans. If this really happens, it is no longer possible for everyone to take action. It is time for certain machines to take action. It is impossible for the people above not to be afraid of this thing.