Under One Person: at the Beginning, Lu Linglong Begged Me for a Massage

First of all, the writing is a bit unclear about what the protagonist does. He said something incomprehensible to Lu Jin, and then he was protected by the Lu family for no apparent reason. Also at the beginning, the protagonist's predecessor was beaten to death by Quan Xing, then Quan Xing was caught and executed by the company, and then the protagonist was resurrected. In the end, Quan Xing threatened the company to kill Quan Xing at will? Killing Quanxing means he is innocent by default? And the company also blamed the protagonist afterwards? It made me look confused😅

It's too wordy, and many of the plots are too blunt.

As soon as I saw the title of the book, I went to the comment section to see what the great sages Akaashi had to say😏

After reading the comics recently, I finally understood the meaning of the opening. Aliens interfere with ordinary people and follow the law. When the people involved are aliens, there is no death penalty. The maximum penalty is the destruction of meridians, so the opening is awkward. The company's trial results are like setting a precedent for the death penalty.

No, buddy, let me know where you are.

Catch-up reading is very important for new books😭

I subscribed to some of Nm and drank it. It was all water. Liao Zhong also said that he would be given three days to see Chen Duo's illness. What next? I thought it was to treat Chen Duo's illness and then go to play games together and massage him to improve his strength. Now he's talking about a sect that plays drugs. You can't push the plot like this. I don't see how much improvement is made by improving the strength. Instead, the protagonist's information keeps spreading, and then the protagonist finds his own source of information. You decipher one chapter, decipher the key points of 2 sentences, and the rest are all water, and it makes it so tense... It is better to just write a relaxing daily novel, which can improve the strength, and position yourself as a female. You honor the senior brother, build a network, and finally go to the entire Chinese medicine center for massage. If you don't improve the strength, who will improve the strength, and make a group of urgent...

I feel like the protagonist is very arrogant and cares about his own plans. Village Chief Ma doesn't reveal any information at all.

In chapter 54, the protagonist's strength is a bit low, and the plot has already begun. . . The protagonist is a bit bad

I hope the protagonist's strength improves quickly, otherwise the plot will start to look like crap if it's not strong enough. In the original novel, there were too many masters at the beginning of the plot.

It's not cool at all. The writing is not bad. Write a cool article and let us know what's wrong? Still want to grow slowly? Want to write a long story? I'm running out of patience

The writing is a bit messy and I can't understand it.

Inexplicable plot, ridiculous plot

Exploded, really exploded! The latest news from one-person comics, Duan Muying has been reduced to a fertility machine, Grandpa Lu Liang is the heir of Duan Muying, Qu Tong has been Duan Muying's maid and has lived for decades, it has been confirmed that she has both hands! ! !

Well, after seeing the latest chapter, I want to tell the author some things that I think are problematic 1. Author, in some places you describe the character's inner activities and what he said are in double quotation marks, which will be indistinguishable when reading. In some places, the psychological activities are written directly without quotation marks and are indistinguishable from the narration. 2. Your writing rhythm gives me the feeling: I am watching animation, the character said a sentence, bang, you pressed the pause button, and then began to explain to me the purpose of this sentence, the reason for saying this sentence, and the possible consequences of this sentence, it is like you wrote out your creative ideas. After the explanation, click, cancel the pause, the characters continue to talk, and within two sentences there is another pause, and so on. It feels like you are not watching animation, but watching animation analysis and explanation. This leads to the fact that there is very little effective information about the characters in each chapter of the novel, and most of it is text analysis. The last thing I feel after reading a chapter is water. Well, this is all my personal subjective opinion. I hope your novels will get better and better as you write them🤓🤓

Not bad, has its own main line and ideas, worth watching

Why do I always pursue second place?