One Piece: The Heroic Spirits Descend

I think the protagonist shouldn't have been involved at all. The protagonist should have stayed behind the scenes, letting the Heroic Spirits cause trouble and trigger major events. The protagonist only needs to provide guidance. The protagonist could have simply acted as a god, summoning these Heroic Spirits as background figures. His direct involvement seems to have ruined the prestige of many of the Heroic Spirits, making it too far removed from the original story.

In short Even if Ramses II and Gilgamesh have loyalty, are they still Ramses II and Gilgamesh? A king cannot be a subject.

The character designs of the Heroic Spirits have been ruined, especially Ramses II; his initial act of loyalty was just too... Out of character.

Is the strength of the Heroic Spirits in this book based on their established attributes or their star rating?

Personally, I feel the author shouldn't add Pokémon yet; they haven't even finished developing the Heroic Spirits... Suddenly adding a new concept, will they be able to maintain the plot's flow? 😅

Don't summoned heroic spirits have their own memories or personalities? I understand Ramses II's loyalty, but he was, after all, an Egyptian pharaoh, and considered the incarnation of the Egyptian sky god, the strongest pharaoh in Egypt. How could his personality be so weak, and how could he treat pirates—who should be considered slaves—so easily spoken to?

The worldview is too broad; it depends on how you write it. Let it grow first. A good book isn't afraid of being nurtured; if it dies, it just proves it wasn't very good.

Cleopatra 😘

Don't let it be the same old characters licking straw hats, Ace, or Whitebeard.

Overall it's pretty good, but I'm worried the author might mess it up.