One Piece: The Heroic Spirits Descend

I think the protagonist should not be allowed to die. The protagonist should let those heroic spirits behind the scenes to cause trouble and start some big events. The protagonist only needs to activate a guiding role. The protagonist can completely be a god and summon these heroic spirits to serve as a background. In person, I feel that the character of many heroic spirits has been completely ruined by the protagonist, which is too different from the original work.

In a sentence If Laer and Jinshan are loyal, are they still Laer and Jinshan? It is impossible for the king to be a minister

The characters of the Heroic Spirits are broken, especially La Er. The allegiance he showed up was too... Ooc too serious.

Is the strength of the heroic spirits in this book based on settings or star rating?

Personally, I feel like the author shouldn't add Pokémon yet, as the Heroic Spirits haven't been finished yet. . . A new setting is suddenly added, can you grasp the plot?

Does the summoned heroic spirit have no memory or personality of its own? I understand that La Er is loyal, but after all, he is the pharaoh of Egypt, and he is still considered the incarnation of the Egyptian sky god. The strongest pharaoh in Egypt, how can he have such a soft personality and treat pirates as slaves? It is impossible to speak well to slaves.

The world view is too big. It depends on how you write. Keep it first. Good books are not afraid of raising them. If you keep them to death, it will prove that the mud is not good.

Cleopatra😘

Stop being like Straw Hat Ace and Whitebeard.

Overall it's pretty good, but I'm afraid the author won't be able to control it well and the writing will collapse.