Wandering the World as an Evil Demon

I just hope the main character doesn't actually become a demon! These days, all the dark fantasy stories without human elements... It's getting boring!

Holy crap! It died while I was raising it?!

It's so hard to find something positive and not overly sentimental these days. The title almost made me miss it. The writing is pretty good; the protagonist's personality is "better to die than see others die," and he's always willing to help others when there's no danger but there are benefits. He's daring and fearless, although constantly being in danger and never dying is a bit absurd. But these days, we're all tired of protagonists who rely on survival tactics, so this is a change of pace.

Let's wait and see until the protagonist truly becomes a demon before reading. I'm most afraid of something being a bait-and-switch.

It's a bit cliché to force a seemingly beneficial female character onto the protagonist so early in the chapters. Also, the claim of a "demon system" that's actually just a good-versus-evil choice system feels like a bait-and-switch tactic. And judging solely by the rewards for choosing good, it's hard to see where the "demon" aspect lies.

Keep up the good work, author! The book is well-written, and the characters are vividly portrayed. I've been following it since "Abnormal Paradise," and although the author's writing style deteriorated later on, the overall concept and setting are still interesting. I don't know why it's not more popular. This one is alright too. Although it's a common system-based novel, the system doesn't feel particularly prominent; the protagonist's efforts are more prominent.

After reading a few chapters, all the characters are female; it's very formulaic. I'll read on and then judge.

Dear author, as a reader who has written novels and has read from Abnormal Paradise, I have a suggestion. The story should be driven by dialogue, not narration. Too much narration lacks rhythm and becomes too flat, making the characters undeveloped and the story unimmersive.

Does this author like to delete comments? How come there are only a few comments?

Well written! I plan to subscribe, and I hope the author won't abandon the story!