Wandering the World as an Evil Demon

I just hope that the main character in the back will not be a real evil one! Nowadays, all kinds of dark streams don't do abortions... It's boring!

Fuck! Are you raising it to death? Send

Nowadays, it's really hard to watch something positive without being like a bitch. The name almost made me miss it. The writing is pretty good. The character of the protagonist is a dead Taoist friend but not a poor Taoist. There are no dangers and benefits, but he is willing to help others. He dares to fight and fight. Although it is a bit outrageous to be in danger all the time and not die, but now I am tired of seeing the prevalence of Taoist protagonists. Let's change the taste.

Keep it up first, wait until the protagonist really turns into a demon, then watch again, the worst thing is to be afraid of being sold as dog meat.

Isn't it a bit cliche to force a girl with a lot of benefits into the protagonist in the first few chapters? It is also said to be an evil system, but in fact it is a good and evil selection system, which is a bit misleading, and the rewards of the choice are better than evil. I can't see where the evil is.

Come on, the author, the book is of a high standard, and the person who wrote it has flesh and blood. I started following Anomaly Paradise. Although the author failed in writing in the later period, the overall creative concept and setting are still interesting. I don't know why it is not popular. This book is also okay. Although it is a bad system flow, the system does not feel outstanding, and it is more the protagonist's own efforts.

After reading a few chapters, the characters that appear are all female, which is very cliche, so read it first and then evaluate it.

Dear author, as a reader who has written novels and watched it from Abnormal Paradise, I would like to make some comments. The way to advance the story should be dialogue, not narrative. Your excessive narrative has no sense of rhythm and is too flat, causing the characters to not stand up and the story to have no sense of substitution. In other words, although the text has been polished, I think the effect will be better if it is more straightforward and highlights the characters and language. Your problem is definitely not the plot, but a fundamental problem with the narrative. Try to establish a character, and then write more dialogues, and the effect should be there.

Does this author like to delete comments? Why are there so few comments?

Well written! I plan to resubscribe, and I hope the author will stop being a eunuch!