I Can See Danger Warnings

Let me talk about my feelings. There are only 5 danger warnings in the first chapter. This is too frequent. It is so dangerous in the sect. How can ordinary disciples survive? This is the same as many simulation articles. All dangers are directed at the protagonist. It will be fine for others, but the protagonist will die. He will die purely for the sake of death.

When you see this name, you can imagine how tired the male protagonist is. It is impossible for a normal person to have so many crises. You are deliberately writing about crises for the sake of writing. Seriously.

I've read the first five chapters now. Let me tell you a little problem. The protagonist is inside the mountain gate. Are the dangers encountered a bit too much? And many of these dangers are particularly dangerous. Like a broken arm? Death! I had vomiting and diarrhea for seven days. Fight with the leopard! Is there too much danger within this mountain gate? There are elders from the master's sect. I have a fellow sect member who is also an immortal cultivator. Even if the leisure level is low, there are so many dangers within the mountain gate. Even if there is more danger, the consequences are too serious. Although it is said that novels cannot pursue reasonableness, hey, I always feel that it is unreasonable.

One word: water; two words: long-winded. I don't know how I persisted in reading these dozens of chapters. Although the content and plot are a bit contradictory, I can still read it. It is this matter that can be understood in one sentence, but it is broken into half a chapter and written in half a chapter. One sentence can be repeated ten times in one chapter, and it can be written in seven or eight chapters. Author, is it because of your personality that you are naturally so long-winded, or are you trying to reduce the number of words?

Spiritual fusion gives birth to a child. 6. To read this book together, do I have to read your last book? ? The content is okay, but the operation is disgusting. This is what I think, you can see for yourself.

What a world, the Immortal Qin Empire, the stunning empress. Don't be afraid to kill yourself! Then you can't control it and collapse! Write well, be down-to-earth, and don't create so much messy crap. Is a good book a bigger world than it is? Why write so much game background?

I really don't understand. An empire allows everyone to practice magical powers, but then the protagonist doesn't practice, and the supporting characters don't practice either. So why write about him? Why not just make a paper human Taoist soldier who doesn't care about magical powers? Don't understand

Can the main character's name not be the same as the last book?

To be honest, the bullshit I wrote was not a waste of my two hours. Did you go and read it yourself after finishing the coding? I suggest the author read it himself first.

It's too deliberate and completely abnormal

It's too lax. Are there so many dangers in the Tao Sect? Also, Ladle can also come in. Not to mention those with high cultivation level. At least he can come in. Can such a low-level person come in? Unless this is a rubbish Taoist sect, but the problem is that there are more than 8,000 people with such rubbish.

If seeing danger is a golden finger, why is it ineffective in Juguifan? I wrote it to myself

Can you please stop writing the spell? There is a reason why your book got poor grades.

The world has been invaded, it is too dangerous, we have to survive. A few years later, the protagonist Wu Di came down the mountain and everyone was gone. The protagonist can let himself go every day

I feel like the plot is good, but the background is a bit nondescript, isn't it? Sometimes the East and the West need to be mixed. It's not like you mix it. It feels too messy. Let's see if we can mix the background later.

The Xianqin Empire is just a subordinate of the Taoist Heavenly Court. Since there is the Xianqin Empire, there is the Great Song Immortal Dynasty. The real Buddhas of the Three Pure Ones and Three Worlds are no longer visible to the Xianqin Empire. The conquered gods continent is just a subordinate world of the myths of various countries. A real myth cannot be conquered but will be conquered. The Xianqin Empire tried to conquer Greek mythology and was probably shot to death by Shi Ananka.

Speed ​​up updates, if you have a head start, you will be popular

Everything is fine, but it's too short, I guess it's about 70W-80W🔥

I haven't started watching it yet. In the introduction, the master and his senior brothers went down the mountain and didn't come back, so the protagonist and his senior sisters are the only ones left on the mountain?

I can't stand it anymore when I see Xian Qin and Zheng Ge, hahahaha

Fortunately, I read my old friend's book review, which scared me and ran away quickly.

If the author wants to write about invincibility, he should give it a label of invincible writing, so as not to waste my time and feel that his combat power has collapsed after it is put on the shelves. It feels like he can be invincible just by lying down and doing nothing. There's nothing interesting about it.

Whether this quiet and inactive training system can be upgraded depends entirely on your understanding. A sudden undead natural disaster occurs at the beginning. It is difficult to write such a big scene. It requires a lot of writing power to bring the big scene to life. The protagonist is still so slow to upgrade. I can't see where the fun is

I don't understand why I don't use the stuff I sent to the protagonist, and keep it until it expires?

The author writes very well. I think it's very interesting to read. I hope the author will update it soon. He will update one chapter in a day.

The author talks about a trilogy. Who knows which trilogy it is?

What happened to the Level 3 person the protagonist met more than twenty chapters ago? Why didn't he believe it? ? ?