Cultivation of Immortality: from Insect Master to Immortal Sect Taoist Ancestor

Insects, I wonder if the author still remembers the five insects in the real and fake Monkey King in Journey to the West? The "Five Insects" is not a Buddhist term, but the ancient people's understanding of living things. The ancients divided animals into five categories, namely feather insects (poultry), caterpillars (beasts), and intermediary insects (later often called beetles, referring to insects with shells and aquatic animals <such as shellfish, Crabs, turtles, etc.), Scale insects (fish, lizards, snakes and other scaly animals, including winged insects), and worms (also called worms, which means hairless, refers to frogs, earthworms, etc.), Collectively called "Five Insects" (from Baidu).

First, the author of your golden finger-made insect, can you use your brain more and give it a nicer name? I don't ask you to be like Master Gu, where the insect has a system and a story background, but the bunch of diseases in the fairy tales are always a little tasteless; Second, can you name it better? My bugs should be written more clearly about class promotion and mark the classes; Thirdly, the golden finger 100 spirit stones to change the longevity of the bugs does not look very good. It is written like refining Gu, or combining the cultivation method with the cells in the body, or combining the search for strange objects, which is good.

The eagle is called the Little Divine Phoenix The phoenix can live for 70,000 days without hurting its eyes, but the eagle can be seriously injured for 70,000 days per day

The plot after going down the mountain is difficult to describe in one sentence. It's not that it's not good, but it just doesn't match the previous style of painting. The front is the style of immortality and immortality, and the back is the fantasy style.

The male protagonist is still at the fourth level of Qi training, and he is still the cannon fodder at the lowest level. Now his cultivation limits the development of the plot. The civilization of cultivating immortals also takes a technological approach, which makes it even more difficult for you to write about.

Lots of typos, rubbish novel

After it was put on the shelves, I kept talking about it, and the water flooded the golden mountain.

The third chapter is not very well written. You know that he will die from lack of water, but you still kill him. When you kill him, you know that he may have a backup plan, and you still show up in front of the enemy. In the end, you win the war mainly by bombing. The randomness is too strong. I suggest you modify it here.

The combat power and economy are not logical at all, the theme is okay, but the hang-up is too big.

What's going on in Chapter 125? Why are there so many typos? I'm tired of catching bugs from the beginning, so I'm too lazy to catch them in the next paragraph (¯―¯٥)

I have finished reading the updated version in front of me. To be honest, although the author's writing style is not that good, there are a few minor flaws in it, but overall I feel that the flaws are not concealed. The main flaw is that the author did not add two sentences to explain some places. If he had added it, there would be less misunderstandings. For example, if you often use the Mantis Beast to do things, you will find out whether the protagonist will find out. The author may have thought that no one would say anything about the Beast Control Sect, but he still got criticized. In the first two or three chapters, where the protagonist faces the enemy, he is clearly in a secret realm, and the enemy has also been hit by the attack, and the blood spurts out. After waiting for a few minutes, the enemy is gone. I think it is good and no problem. After all, the protagonist with a golden finger will win in all frontal fights, but he was criticized again, and he was said to be like a villain who talks too much before killing. . . Therefore, I suggest that the author add a few sentences to explain some places. This will reduce a lot of bad reviews, and at the same time, it can also add some words, and get the best of both worlds In addition, let's talk about the advantages. The world view of this book is quite grand, and the settings in it definitely used some thinking. It is rare to have new ideas. Because nowadays, when writing novels about time traveling and cultivating immortals, whether they are human or demon, Golden Finger is almost a panel system realm-breaking bead. For a while, I couldn't think of the fourth kind. In novels about time traveling to adults, the plot basically goes from practicing martial arts in the mortal world to ascending to the world of immortal cultivation, to fighting monsters and upgrading sects in competitions, or working as a casual cultivator to rely on one skill to survive. I almost vomited after reading these. But the plot of this novel is different. It makes my eyes light up when I read it. Anyway, it's pretty good. I got the takeaway and went to eat.

Why is it not updated on the 2nd day after it was put on the shelves? Is it because the data is hard to discard?

Spoiler alert, the author has 600,000 words in manuscript, so feel free to dive in

The villain dies because he talks too much. The male protagonist has been beeping with the villain in the first three chapters. He can obviously assassinate, but he insists on competing in front of that person even though he knows that that person has back-up plans.

Why does my recent writing feel so weird, like it was written by an AI?

Is it the kind of anime insect master?😰

The protagonist is using the mantis to cause trouble, can others really not find you? I'm speechless

Isn't it the Buddha's view that there are forty-eight thousand insects in a bowl of water?

The previous update promise is too scary, the author should take it easy

Pests and diseases? Insect disease! Just reading the introduction made me think of some interesting things: Yin-sniffing worm Parasitic dragonworm Yes-sounding worm Misty silk life Ghost mother worm (In fact, I kind of want to write about Bo Na, but after thinking about it, I'll forget it)

After reading the introduction, I would like to ask the author whether longevity worm plus neurosis equals heartless worm? ?

Why are there so many typos in recent chapters?

It's a bit interesting. I just feel like I'm just amusing myself. Now I'm just pretending to be banned. With such a low level of cultivation and so many resources, isn't it enough to take off? Those overhauls are all fools, they don't feel anything unusual...

The spirit and spirit of the Fairy Kingdom are progressing together. Then you can kill a high-level person with a single spirit, which is unreasonable. In terms of pure combat power, shouldn't we look at magical powers?

There are a lot of typos in photos 147-155. It seems to be a draft. The author will check it before posting.