Ruby True Immortal

Does anyone have any comments after reading it? I always feel that the finished plot is a little less interesting than what I imagined, which makes me a little anxious.

Come on, author, it's good to be single

This book does not abuse the Lord, the Holy Mother, or give away daughters. Please feel free to consume it.

It feels like the author cares too much about grades now and seems a bit impatient. There is no need to revise the text. As someone who has written several eunuch books with tens of thousands of words on Maozhan, it is best not to look back at the chapters you have written. Otherwise, you will become more and more dissatisfied with the chapters you have written, and you will become less enthusiastic about the changes, and finally give up on eunuchs. In fact, many authors have become eunuchs because of changes to their texts. For the plot rhythm, you can refer to the books of great gods, such as The Destiny and Life of the Squid, The Misty Journey, Mortals, and even Chen Dong's Covering the Sky and Perfection. However, it is really not recommended to refer to the rhythm of Dao Zheng Zheng or Immortal Jue. The characteristic of these two books is that they pile up plot conflicts with almost no breaks, giving readers no chance to breathe at all, making them very tiring to read.

I want to ask, do you like raising books? I generally don't keep it, so I'll take a look at the author's few more pictures.

Hehe, I saw the new book, cheers!

The author writes so well that I'm afraid of you, eunuch. You have too few words to do this.

Everyone vote for it

Give the protagonist a big cheat

It's good-looking but the protagonist isn't proud or beautiful enough.

When did you start officially cultivating immortals? I gave the protagonist a chance and hoped to become a mortal.

I always feel that there is no first chapter, or a wedge, etc., Which is a bit abrupt.

It's a pity that it's discontinued. In fact, you don't need to be so anxious about the first book. The skills will be learned later. In fact, this book is already very good for a newcomer. You can keep writing and practice writing.

You are too little, many people like to keep books