People Are in a Weird World, You Call This a Nurturing Game

Understand?

I just discovered this book today and it's very good. I've subscribed to all of it. I gave away a monthly pass and two recommendation tickets.

Thank you, author. It has been two years since my ex-girlfriend and I broke up. She has a new love, but I have never come out. I feel that I will never trust the opposite sex again. But after reading the book you wrote, I feel that a man should not just work and make money, but also spend time with his family. If I can still have love in the future, I will still believe it.

The author's writing about the weird world is very interesting, but when he writes about the real world , the dog shakes his head and even steps on it . People who read it just want to skip quickly. I hope the author can just touch on the real world in one stroke and don't write any more. What? She's so handsome. I want to marry her. Please take care of her, 666. This way of writing is mt taozi. The author will definitely become popular if he continues to write about the weird world, but just write less about the real world. If you continue, it won't be a dream even if you book thousands of orders!

Take away the realistic plot, this is a good book. Coupled with the realistic plot, it is simply a powerful force.

It's not that the writing is not good-looking, the problem is that if you copy each copy one by one, how many people can survive without cheating? Have you ever considered it?

The first copy is very well written, I like it so far. I feel that after the first copy, I am worried about the description of the real world. It is recommended that the author just skip the processing if the writing is not good. It is also very acceptable if not. If you don't handle it well, it will have a big impact, come on!

Does it mean that all the unsightly ones have been deleted?

Author, I found a problem with your writing style. The thief is very serious. But there is a small problem with this issue, that is, this issue only appears in series every 10 chapters. So if you update 9 more pictures today, I can help you point them out.

Writing about the future and the past is a failure. No author can write well, but there are a lot of disgusting people. Will changing the past still be your past? Do you want to change the present and the future you see?

Now Su Bingyao is confirmed to be the heroine, so is the protagonist the successor?

The first dungeon was okay, but the second dungeon was just rubbish. It was a forced intelligence reduction. Goldfinger didn't work this way or that way. When a mob hit the protagonist in the face, the protagonist couldn't even fart? I paid a little for a subscription, but it started to trick readers as soon as it was put on the shelves. I paid to see you pretending to be awesome with cheats, but as a result, you directly suppressed cheats and the protagonist's IQ as soon as they were put on the shelves.

The first dungeon is quite exciting, but the plot is too exaggerated after the dungeon ends. There is no introduction to the equipment, skills and props given as rewards for passing the level. Even the seven-day rest period in the real world is directly mentioned, and then directly enters the second dungeon. The reincarnation space of the transfer station is to understand a little bit when leaving the first dungeon. There is no plot description before entering the second dungeon. The author completely fails to grasp what the readers want to see. The first part is well written, but the later plot is written in a mess. I really wonder if someone else is writing it. The second copy directly suppressed and weakened the golden finger of the protagonist. The IQ of the main and supporting characters was worrying, as if they had lost their minds. The typical high start and low end of this book was a waste of my free reading coupon, so I canceled it.

If what follows is that kind of bad cliché, then it's not worth reading. And you are targeting a single female protagonist. If these two are really cheating, then I will not support it anymore. It's really poisonous.

After reading the first dungeon, I didn't even want to read on. The first dungeon was too long, and the author spent too much energy, making it difficult to relax. Moreover, after the end of the first dungeon, the author's writing was too sloppy. The protagonist's rewards through such a difficult dungeon were all dealt with in one stroke, and so was the real society. The main character The fact that Jiao can return to the previous dungeon to meet Su Bingyao is mentioned briefly. It doesn't even explain whether the experienced dungeon will be reset. The article talks about selling the experienced dungeon guide in the reincarnation space. Since the guide can be sold, it must involve other people being able to enter the dungeon. The dungeon may be reset, otherwise what is the use of this guide? And if the dungeon is reset, how can Su Bingyao in the dungeon remember the protagonist, and how can the protagonist meet her? This is a contradiction in itself. As the only one who successfully cleared the dungeon with the protagonist, Zhao Yingzhi (probably one of the female protagonists), there is always a soul in her body that is ready to snatch her away. After the first dungeon was released, the author did not explain it at all. Such a large pile of "half-parts" of the plot were left there with no beginning and no end. The author did not deal with it and hurriedly started the second dungeon. This is the rhythm of the author who wants to abandon the readers.

I found that as soon as the author describes the heroine, his writing style improves greatly. This is really... Reasonable!

It's so difficult for the protagonist to rely on Goldfinger. It's hard for other players to survive until they die.

Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! To be honest, the writing of the novel is okay, and the dungeon design alone is okay, but it pursues intensity and climax too much, the progress is too fast, there is nothing excessive in the middle, and there is no gap between the dungeons. It feels like I am just completing the dungeons for the sake of completing the dungeons. After reading three or four hundred chapters, I am completely chased and beaten. It is too depressing to watch. The connection between the refreshing points is not good and few, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. You want to imitate the fast pace of the global college entrance examination, but also have laughter and curses interspersed with it. What you have here is weird, cultivation, love, dungeon clearance, rewards for successful clearance, and post-reward digestion stages. None of them are completely written. They are all very crude and the more I read, the more I can't stand them. It's so weird that it's all template-based in the end. Training is just adding points and stacking data. The emotional descriptions are either XXOO or some very awkward emotional descriptions. The dungeon is also simplified because of the golden finger. The subsequent writing is more and more template-based. In addition to the concept and ideas, it's not bad, but the specific writing is just average. Moreover, the whole article has been written for four hundred chapters and there is no specific main line. The front is written in the context of a chaotic heart. It cannot support so many chapters at all. The reason is too simple and it does not say how strong this thing is. It has an effect on those world masters. It just keeps robbing and plotting. Even a strong person wants to steal the protagonist. It is uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, every copy by the author emphasized that the protagonist in the design has a high IQ, but it feels that many of them are just for self-pleasure. From the perspective of onlookers, the embodiment of these strategies is not clearly written. It just feels that many of them are coincidences. At this time, it will feel very embarrassing.

A weird wife who suspects you of cheating, you actually run around doing tasks with a female classmate. If you are seen, do you think you will fail the task and die?

Zhao Yingzhi can win 3S even if she relies on the protagonist to win the entire game? Is 3S so worthless? It only takes 3 seconds to clear the level.

Let me ask you something, if you knew that you would die if you went to eat at restaurant A tomorrow, and you would die if you didn't eat tomorrow, would you choose to find another restaurant? The protagonist of this article is a magical creature that passed by Restaurant B on the way to Restaurant A and went straight to Restaurant A without entering.

There is something wrong with the numerical values ​​and combat power settings. A physique of 4,000 or 5,000 can still be injured by glass cuts and bullets. There is something wrong with your combat power settings.

After reading two dungeons, I thought the infinite flow, weirdness, and huge world view setting were quite interesting at first. Unfortunately, the author was too hasty in writing. There was no horror atmosphere as it should have, and the excitement of an upgrade novel was missing. The protagonist's IQ was also very weak, and his subjective initiative was very poor. He claimed to become stronger, but in fact he made very passive choices, and there were many illogical places. I can only say that I could barely read it when I was short of books.

You can still see it from the front, but you can use the water from the back

The first dungeon is really exciting, well, I understand all the subsequent dungeons

After finishing the first copy, the level of the second copy dropped sharply. Not only referring to Goldfinger being suppressed, but also saying "horrified, horrified, horrified", which rarely appears in the first dungeon, and has appeared several times in less than three chapters of the second dungeon. The plot is horrifying, seeing players being horrified by knives, listening to inferences and horrifying... Those who don't know thought that there are newbies who scored SSS scores on the first pass of Hell difficulty with Goldfinger hanging on the wall. There are others... It's a good beginning, what a pity.

Let me tell you, there is a crappy thing that randomly pulls people into the dungeon. If they cannot pass the level, the city where the person was taken away will be run out by the ghosts in the dungeon. This is what you understand. Then, the difficulty of the first dungeon makes dogs shake their heads. If there is no protagonist aura to follow, everyone will die after entering. 😁😁 How did the author let the previous people survive?

The book is good, I recommend reading it

It's always watering, it's going to be watering, it will never end, tmd, I won't watch it anymore

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