A Hero's Journey That Begins with the Hunt

Even though he knew that the other party was a professional-level killer, his physique was still inhuman. Still hanging out in school? And you don't know the four major evil arts in China? What's even more ridiculous is that you want to hide. Do you think what the creator wants to see is that you have no purpose, no plan, and can't even dress up in fancy clothes? Keep running, and then you win? Without adding the decisive factors of the character at the beginning, will there be a big explosion in the final showdown? If you can use Chinese makeup to confuse people at the beginning, then lay out a plan, and use a back-up at the end, the beginning will be wonderful.

Has the author's (beating the mandarin duck system) been deleted?

Congratulations to the author for publishing his new book. Your hard work will definitely pay off.

The writing is good, but the setting is unreasonable, and many settings contradict the plot. For example, the protagonist is a police academy student, and he misses a week of classes without any trouble, and other similar plots. There is also a mercenary who can kill mercenaries without any preparation plan, and uses electricity... This is very speechless. Since everyone knows how to hide, he doesn't have his own defense plan in seven days?

I feel that the writing is very good, the plot gradually deepens, not brainless, and there is no stalling at the beginning. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, work hard!

I couldn't stand it after watching the beginning. An ordinary person can start moving immediately. A person who exercises every day is still an anomaly. How could it be possible that the electricity leaked from an old hotel and the water in the water was so dead that it couldn't be used. . Too poisonous

After watching a little bit, I couldn't bear it anymore and said goodbye.

It's too fake, book review section. Originally, this subject matter was acceptable, but what was it about? You clearly knew that there was a very vicious and not-human guy who wanted to kill you, and you knew that you would be fine if you escaped for seven days. You also made preparations in advance and stayed in a place where you couldn't find it for seven days, but ended up running out on the fourth day. Do you still think that someone else might be playing tricks on you? ? ? What did you write?

Generally speaking, novels set up a rich plot and then supplement the plot. But here the author makes a setting to promote the development of the plot. It's not impossible to do this, but you can't do it all! He was said to be a scumbag at first, but in the next second he became a veteran of criminal investigation analysis. The reason is that the protagonist 10 is a fan of this field. 2. This fan went to a relevant university, and then he is a scumbag! It's like a person who likes painting went to a relevant university and was called a scumbag in Krypton, and then one day when his painting ability was needed, he became a big guy! So how did you become a bad student? Or do we have different views on bad students? Of course, none of this matters! It's just a mission with a magical plot. The duel lasts for seven days. In order to prevent the protagonist from being killed, Liu did two things! I bought a steel plate and a mobile phone. The steel plate is used for defense and the mobile phone is used for surveillance! This is no problem. I originally thought I could see a wonderful battle of wits and courage, and then. . . . The plot of mobile phone surveillance turned into a joke with an old man, and then the plot was gone. Then in the toilet, a murderer with rich mercenary experience who could turn into a lizard man used 220v household voltage to seduce and attack a scumbag college student and beat him to death with his roar! Emmm there's nothing wrong with it! After all, the protagonist has a good rest every day and dreams about his lizard cheat every day!

To be honest, buying data like this will easily get you blacklisted, Amen