Pirate: My Domineering Power Crushes the Four Emperors

The writing is okay. I have a few minor reading points, but the plot at the beginning is not good. Isn't it good to choose a cheating Devil Fruit and let the protagonist eat it and kill everyone? Why should a minion eat it? Instead of expecting a minion to eat the fruit and attack by surprise, why not let yourself eat it and kill them head-on? Put your hope on a minion. I really didn't expect it.

After reading the latest chapter, let me share my personal views. The author probably wanted to write a realistic pirate novel like the One Piece Code, but at least so far it has not broken out of the framework of a chuuniu hot-blooded shounen manga. The overall look always feels awkward, and many plots are not well arranged. Now this book gives me the feeling that a little kid is pretending to be serious, pretending to be an adult, and pretending to be cool. He obviously wants to be a mature adult, but he still behaves like a child. But fortunately, it is still the early stage, and there is still hope. My suggestion is to write less about the East China Sea. Now that we have reached the Grand Line, we should first find a place to stabilize and develop our power with peace of mind. Do business where it is necessary, recruit people where it is necessary, and practice where it is necessary. Later, we will let the protagonist enter the new world through various plot arrangements. If I continue writing as I am now, this book will be completely different.

Has the protagonist never watched One Piece?

There are so few comments, have they been deleted?

After reading the comments, there are no results. That doesn't make a difference.

After seeing Chapter 181, I summarized it. You can skip it from 134 to 181. After it was put on the shelf, I said that I couldn't understand it more and more. I know what the author wants to express, but the writing style and logic cannot support it. The most important thing is that this is a pirate story, and what you wrote is off topic.

Are you sick? The pirates went well and went to the pirate country like Baroque.

He also subdued Aaron. Fortunately, I read the comments later, otherwise I wasted my money.

The pace is too slow, too slow, I can't stand it

The Smoke Fruit is really rubbish. The fruit's ability has no output. People who know how to be domineering can still defeat it. Wilge beat Bai Lie into a dead dog, which proves how rubbish the Smoke Fruit is.

What are you writing about? It's so long-winded. It's outrageous that people from Earth traveled across time and space without knowing Sauron.

After two months, I am here again. This book is finally back on track. Although there are some minor flaws, they are not major problems. Overall, it is still very well written. Keep up the good work.

When setting the overlord color of the protagonist, the author can refer to Wu Gengji's colorless realm divine power. The colorless realm divine power matches the overlord color perfectly.

The name was chosen too casually, haha, it looked like a juvenile novel in The King of Salted Fish. When I clicked in, I found that it was relatively slow to heat up. It was not a brainless and refreshing article. Fortunately, it was not watery. It was rare and I collected it.

The pacing is too slow and long-winded. Normally, a One Piece fanfic would be almost finished after 1 million words. If it were longer, the pacing would be bad. You've only just finished the Shichibukai with 700,000 words. The pace is too slow and the main reason why you can't get good grades is because it's too watery.

Luo Liba, rubbish, rubbish book

A chapter review said that you want to be a eunuch, is that true? Can you finish writing this book?

Among the four emperors, Shanks is special. When blind Fujitora meets red hair, he is restrained to death. When the three generals met the red-haired one, all the color and elemental transformations were abolished, making it impossible to play.