The King's Avatar: King of Mechanics

I think the female protagonist issue can be omitted if it is purely an e-sports novel, or even the female character can be written less. But if you want to collect CP for a supporting character, I will bangbang it twice

Should the author change the team? Lan Yu will always belong to Sword and Curse. The protagonist has no chance to get ahead. If he doesn't change the team, the protagonist will be like Yu Feng. He is obviously the number one mad sword but not very popular and is not the core. In Blue Rain, fans will always remember only Sword and Curse. No matter how strong the protagonist is, it is impossible to change Lan Yu, so just There is a team change, one person becomes the core, and there is enough pressure to make significant progress. If the protagonist only stays under the umbrella of Yu Wenzhou and Huang Shaotian, he will never become a great player. In addition, in the ninth season, Blue Rain will have a super newcomer Lu Hanwen, the successor of Ye Yu Shengfan, and the protagonist's survival will be further compressed. The author should think about it carefully

I have read more than 100 chapters so far. The article is good and I am willing to subscribe. To make a complaint, the reason why most full-time writers persuade me to quit is that writing online games is a bit disgusting. If you are so strong, why don't you become famous professionally? Is it so satisfying to work anonymously as a free online game laborer for Ye Qiu? If I just read online game articles, I won't watch "Apex Player"? To be honest, I don't think full-time online game design is that good. If it only told the story of Ye Xiu's creation of the union, I wouldn't have read the rest I prefer the exciting competition in the professional arena, which is what I like most about this novel. The character design of the male protagonist is really good and very distinctive. The design of the mechanic is also very clever. All the supporting characters are online. The game design is also very clever. I hope it can be maintained. The problem is still the female protagonist. Compared with the male protagonist, the current two female characters can be said to be more transparent than transparent. There can be said to be more than 20 female characters in Full Time with unique characteristics. Even if you think these are not enough, it shouldn't be that difficult to design unique characters with the author's pen, right? The current two female characters are too bland, and their professional connection is too shallow.

I would like to advise you that the front part of this novel is okay, but the back part is a little bit toxic. There are not many people writing novels like The Master. If you really want to read it, you should read the first one or two hundred chapters. I have already given up on the latter part. I am posting this to help those who want to read it and tell me that this novel is still a bit toxic.

I followed it from the first chapter until now. I don't know why, but the protagonist of the novel is so frustrating. I really can't stand it anymore. I paid for every chapter. Don't say that no one forced me to read it, and don't say that I am hypocritical, let alone that I teach authors to write books. I just want to say that if you suppress for the sake of suppressing, there will definitely not be many people reading

The protagonist is too young and the female characters are too old

If you don't like it, it's okay to give up. Don't limit yourself because of things you don't like.

Luo Xingzhi.

Yes, author, machinist, please write well and don't be a eunuch.

Go see Jiahui... It's so troublesome...