Versatile Mage: the Strongest Dimensional Mage

Today I ask you a very important question, that is, how is this book? Can you still read it now?

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

Personal opinion: Regardless of whether there is a female protagonist or not, there must be at least a few people who like the male protagonist. Because it is abnormal for the male protagonist to be completely disliked, and it will be convenient for the author later to confirm that there will be a female protagonist, so that it will not be too abrupt.

They are all dimensional, and coupled with their natural mental strength, this is the cheapest protagonist, right? 😏

The mental power of an ordinary person is zero level, and that of a junior magician is one level. Every time you advance to a level, your mental power increases by one level. In other words, a normal intermediate magician is in the second level, a high-level magician is in the third level, and a super-level magician is in the fourth level. (This is a template for ordinary people) There are three conditions for promotion to the Forbidden Curse. One is full cultivation of super level, the other is six realm spiritual power, and the third is huge energy.

The plot of this book is roughly like this. The place where the male protagonist travels seems to be called Douluo Continent. The content is that Tang San regains his memory and becomes the Hokage, summoning the dragon to return to the Qingqing Grassland. Together with Xiong Daxiong Er, he prevents Pig Man and the royal family from occupying the Fairy Castle and becomes an armored warrior. After that, he and Ultraman Tiga obtain the scriptures to destroy Thanos and save the fairy tale world.

New book, keep updating! 🤭🤭🤭

Dimensional magic

Let's write a story with a single female protagonist. I've seen a lot of female protagonists, so I'll just choose Heidi.

Brothers, comment a lot, don't be shy

Dream a heroine Mu Nujiao

The author's writing is okay, but there are three problems that need to be solved. First of all, the pace is too fast. We wrote about Venice in more than forty chapters. There was a lack of transitions and many details were not described in detail. Secondly, there are too many skipped events Many people read the fanfic just to see the protagonist's impact on the world, but this book skips too many main plots, which makes people feel that the protagonist and Mo Fan have no common experience, but the relationship is so good that they directly tell the innate talents of the two departments in one awakening, which feels inconsistent. Finally, there is too little originality. To be honest, if the protagonist and Mo Fan have no common experiences, it won't affect the perception much. However, if they have no common experiences with Mo Fan, and there are few original plots, it can easily give people the feeling of copying a book.

The author has a lot of typos. I suggest you read it yourself before uploading.

Recruit some awesome Leitian seeds, preferably ones with a touch of Taoism, forget about the Lei from Sanqing. (Preferably self-created)

This is a bad result, so I'd better hurry up and open the next book.

You can write it. I saw that the smart phone was pushed over. Just hang on, newbies just have to endure. You can ask fan authors to help you advertise and attract traffic. You just lack recommendations.

By the way, is Mu Nujiao still living with Mo Fan? The protagonist has no contact information and has to ask Mo Fan for it, which makes it feel awkward. 😰

I have a question,,, after a quick look at a few pictures, one chapter can compare to the plot of others' four, five or even ten chapters. It gives me the feeling that I am reading your outline.,,

Recently, the protagonist of these chapters has disappeared, focusing on a hydrology 😭😭😭

After reading more than ten chapters, the plot was so fast that I thought I had turned it on double speed. In fact, the character design of the protagonist is quite good. If you want to focus on the government part of the plot, you can quickly skip the previous part, but when I look at it, the previous content gives me a feeling of incoherence, as if I missed something in the middle. Also, the emotional scenes are too abrupt 😥 I hope the author will continue to work hard and hope it will get better and better in the future!

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The writing is too fast, it would be nice if the pace could be slower.

It's really disturbing 🌹🌹 to recommend this book. New book, use your AU brain to explore the world of full-time mage. Take the perspective of a magic researcher. All readers are welcome to explore the mysteries of magic together. I guarantee my sexual happiness for the rest of my life and will definitely not be a prisoner 😡. Two chapters are updated every day. Please recommend and collect it from all readers.

The author is also brave and actually writes about indigenous people.

I'm stupid, can I get the government with more than 20 tickets? Is the protagonist a senior mage from birth? 🙂

I can't keep up with this update speed.

Why do you feel like the protagonist is like Mo Fan's licking dog? She cares about Mo Fan more than Ye Xinxia and Mu Ningxue put together. It looks weird.