Versatile Mage Thunder Tutor

How to put it this way, I always feel that the author's writing is weird, and there is a very awkward feeling. It's the kind of thing that originally followed his own path, but he insisted on relying on the original work, and then the writing seemed to be completely different. Including when he wrote the ancient capital, he joined the Imperial Guard Mage Group at the beginning, and then was kicked out, and he felt very regretful. As a time-traveler, to be honest, it is difficult for everyone to have a sense of belonging after time-traveling. They must put their own lives first, and then others as second. In this book, the author did not report to the country for helping the country, but later reported it, and was kicked out of the mage group, saying that he did not report the knowledge. Then the protagonist said that he felt a deep guilt. Even if he went out, as long as he picked up good things, he would feel guilty at the thought of not helping. You are so guilty. Ah, you feel guilty. Being able to help is a matter of love, but not helping is a duty. After all, your own life is the first priority, and you have already reported it to them to make preparations, so they did not think about your life. As a time traveler, you are not from that world. They have helped enough. The important point is that after you found the Holy Spring and reported it to them, they confiscated it and handed it over before you even used it. As a result, the super level has not been generated. They have no guilt about this and come to talk about your problem. I really don't understand what they think. Overall it's still a bit toxic

The setting of Teacher Gudu is very good, but the author's writing skills are too immature. He often talks to himself and is seriously self-excited. The part where he was kicked out of the Imperial Guard is a bit inexplicable and not satisfying enough.

The ideas and creativity are very good, but I feel that the author has no idea how to develop himself and the plot, so he can only try his best to follow the route of the original novel in a way that I don't know how to describe, and the route is very rubbish and has not been followed well. I feel like this novel won't go far.

It was fine at first, but then it turned into a lunatic. The Earth Holy Spring was a bit inexplicable. At this level, can you not even afford a container to store heavenly materials and earthly treasures? ! Of course, if you want to say that the holy spring requires special equipment to store it, then forget it, but the demon part behind it is also crazy. It is almost a super-level person. Can you not even afford a magic storage device? Still naked 😅 I was even speechless later on. There were so many flaws in my performance report that I didn't know what to say 😅. Moreover, I was kicked out of the Guard Mage because I was afraid of the Black Vatican. I turned around and pointed at the Black Vatican. What do you think? This is not the way to add a protagonist by trying to surround him The timeline is also a mess. The disaster in Bo City has just ended. Mu Bai just jumped to the Mingzhu Qing Campus to be promoted to the main campus after entering the school. Has he been eaten in the past two years? This book is too awesome to offend, so the comrades behind it quit.

The setting is good, but I can't distinguish the priorities. It's written by a blind person.

Author heroine, you wouldn't just write about an old woman, would you? You can write more female protagonists. For example, Concubine Bran, Heidi Irene, Asha Ruiya, Qin Yuer, Mu Nu, Jiao Ding Yumian

Zhou Min didn't write all of it, is it a bit too much? I can barely accept the enhancement. After all, the original work has no resources and is ranked third. Why does Zhou Min need so much pen and ink? Mo Fan has completed the intermediate level (he dropped a level) and she can reach the intermediate level. It's pretty good. I really don't understand. It is better to write about her than to write about those few followers or something original and effortless. If you don't accept her, why do you have to write it? Everyone who looks at it feels sick

Is it multiple heroines? Who are the heroines?

Who is the protagonist? Mu Bai? The surname is Xu? Gu family? Lu Huan?

😍😍Potential to look good

It's very, very, very awkward. I don't recommend reading it. Just kneel down and lick it. The writing is very fucking disgusting.

It feels like the protagonist is inexplicably attracted to the girl from the Gu family, and she is too much of a mythical girl from the Gu family. Always following the woman, I have a sub-emperor backstage who can come out, and it can also serve as a deterrent to others. I always feel that the women from the Gu family want to be the protagonist, and their configuration is much better than the protagonist. Even if she were to be the heroine, she would be a bit overshadowed. For French fans, this will make people have a bad impression of the protagonist.

In fact, there is no need for the protagonist to follow that woman all the time. After all, the protagonist has a sub-emperor backing, and it is possible to become an emperor in the future, so there is no need to be so aggrieved. And in terms of combat power alone, the protagonist has surpassed most of the forces, so the military has not shown any indication, at least providing some resources or something, so that it will not be like now.

The more I watched, the more upset I became, so I gave up watching it.

It's very well written, why isn't it popular?

The writing is good, the three views of pig's feet are very upright, and can compare with Mo Fan.

It is not wise to create your own heroine in fan fiction. If your heroine has no merits, it is even more disgusting. You don't have to write a list. If you create your own heroine, think of the self-created heroine a little later.

Come on💪💪💪

Update😭😭

It's actually a eunuch. I just came from a website and plan to come and have a look. It's a pity.