Versatile Mage: Starting from the Natural Synergy

Isn't it thankless to go to the national team? Just to feel refreshed, others continue to improve, and the protagonist wastes a year of training 🙂. The protagonist is written as if he is mentally ill. He has fully cultivated all three systems, and only needs the Xinghai Tianmai to advance. To put it bluntly, it is written to follow the plot, and there is no need to think about new plots. I don't want to watch it after seeing this 😥

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It's quite poisonous. 1,000 Slave souls raised his mental power to level 5, and it was so ruined. He also built a demon hunting group. His teammates are not young people with potential. I guess they won't be able to keep up when they become intermediate mage.

I can understand the protagonist building a hunting group, but you want to find a few people who 1. Have no strength, 2. Have no talent, 3. Have no background, 4. Have no funds, 5. Have no information channels, and are strangers who have never been seen except for one whom they have met a few times, and they also exposed their trump cards when they first met. It's hard to judge. If you recruit just a few people in the school, they will be better than this.

There is something more 🐢 from the same fan, all the female protagonists are written in France, they are of the same origin

If you don't know how to write in daily life, you can add a heroine to make it easier for you to write daily. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, forget it. I personally prefer to have no female protagonist. If the male protagonist does not have the help of an important female character in the early stage (in order not to be a white-eyed wolf), it is best to have no female protagonist and multiple female protagonists. Because of the genius flow, there will definitely be more than one person of the opposite sex attracted to your talent. If you don't write about the help the heroine gives to the protagonist in the early stage, no matter how you describe it later, you will have the feeling that the heroine is with the hero because of her talent (if the relationship is not pure, then there is no point in writing a single female protagonist). It's even more disgusting for the heroine who wrote the order to have an affair with other women. The protagonist of the genius genre must leave everyone behind except the protagonist. There is no need to write the heroine as a vase or the protagonist as a nanny. If you want to write a single female protagonist, you must either lay out the relationship in the early stage and make the readers feel that the female protagonist is worthy of the male protagonist treating her like this.

Fortunately, you kid is smart and didn't treat Mu Ningxue as the heroine.

There are so many poison points here. 750 Slave remnant souls can rush from the 3rd level to the 5th level. At first I thought it was level 4, and I thought the author had finally become more normal, but it turned out to be level 5 😅. Brother, do you know a word: qualitative change! The remnant soul of your slave is not in the advanced stage, nor is it an essence. How can you reach the intermediate level, which is equivalent to the warrior level? In the original book, the old wolf transforms into a warrior and has to buy the warrior soul. You might as well just swallow all the souls of the slave monsters There is a saying that quantitative changes lead to qualitative changes, but you are so powerful with less than 1,000 slave souls, why don't you go to heaven? What kind of stardust veins can I buy with these ten million? I can just pile up the remnant souls of slaves without thinking and just go to high-level spirits. The high-level mental control of the original work directly shoots the dead warrior You also know that there are mind stones in the whole magic to enhance the spirit, so everyone in the original work knows that there should be less of these things and the settings are scarce, so that the writing will not collapse and show the power of high-level spiritual realms. After all, the average high-level mage can only have a level 3 spirit at most. You are already at Intermediate Level 5 in Chapter 26, how can you get better later? The analogy is that spirit seed fragments can be synthesized into spirit seeds, but your spirit seed fragments want to be synthesized into soul seeds? The qualities are different, brother, you should at least use soul seed fragments to synthesize them. By the way, the most important thing is that you just opened such a big hangup in Chapter 26. You spent 750 slave souls to "hardly" upgrade to level 5, and then you transferred the Stardust Magic Weapon to earn 30,000 and wrote a lot? What does it mean hanging up to this It's so big, but what is 3w doing here? It's so big that it doesn't give corresponding layouts, and the layouts are smaller. By the way, Cautious Hidden Skills are also hidden from readers. It's Chapter 26 of Chaos Awakening, so I went to the library to find out more about it. The thunder element is already at the mid-level, but your chaos element is not for external use, nor is it shown to readers? Since we are outsiders, we won't read it.

Why not create a soul contract to gain popularity?

Very boring, no passion at all, and still trying to form a hunting group that drags me down.

The author wanted to write about Xiao Yan but ended up writing it as Xu Sanshi

After going to the national government for two years and fighting to the death, I was still feeling aggrieved. If you don't go to the government and wait for two years, you will be promoted. If you continue to work, readers will make money and you won't be tired, cold or hard at all.

The demon-hunting group is so useless, it totally feels like the protagonist is carrying soy sauce... And it takes up a lot of space.

Brother, I read your book and it's better than other Quanfa fans, but I don't understand your hunting group. You've already reached a high level and have fully cultivated. Why do you still need this hunting group? Also, you have to take them with you every time you go on a mission. It's very difficult. You have to have no strength, no background, no background, and the talent is very tacky. I'm speechless for your soul-sharing money. This is all mine.

A few hundred servant souls can reach the fifth level of mental power. If you are given tens of thousands of slave souls, you can directly reach the 9th level of mental power 😰 Forget it from level 1 to 3. After level 4, you should have some souls or even some warrior-level ones. Otherwise, it will appear that the mental power is easy to increase, and sooner or later you will have a breakdown.

When I read Chapter 4, I started to set up a new setting of combat power. The original work always consumes magic power to release magic, and does not consume mental power at all. The strength and weakness of mental power are related to several times the power of dimensional magic. . . If releasing high-level magic also consumes the same amount of mental power, then elemental super-level mages, who do not cultivate mental power, release a super-level magic and are directly drained of mental power and die.

I like it. For me, it doesn't have any major negative points at the moment (some people may think the protagonist's upgrade is too simple and unreasonable, but I can accept it). It's not over-leveled or stupid. The protagonist has a brain, a firm goal, self-discipline, and a clear plan for the future. His IQ is above normal, but Occasionally there are some inexplicable little plots (for example, two chapters are spent describing the beast fighting competition, but all passersby have no protagonist. There are also two chapters spent on meaningless friendships, and the protagonist is marginalized and has no sense of existence.) Liangcao, if there is no female protagonist or a single female protagonist, it is Liangcao+.

I feel that the writing of Mo Fan is too bad. Mo Fan in the original book was not that bad, right? Whether it's strength or character, it's still okay, right? Can we arrange a plot where Mo Fan's strength increases after he corrects himself?

In other novels, the protagonist is a nanny, but the protagonist in this book is good. She is a nanny for several NPC characters who did not appear in the original novel. It is a good thing to build a monster hunting group. The problem is that with a few scumbags, I don't know what to do.

It took 5 months to write a competition, and it was really good.

Not as good as the previous one. It's not a purely mindless novel. Although it conflicts with some settings in the original work, it is understandable. I also read other people's comments about why you shouldn't bring a mid-level mage to fight monsters when you reach a high level, or about having too much water. I just want to say that this is the starting point, millions of words are the norm. The only bad point, which I personally feel is more discouraging, is the handling of some numerical values. For example, the one who uses broken parts to increase mental power feels a bit unreasonable if you use it too little. I feel that my IQ has been insulted. There is also the one who gambles in school competitions. In the previous book, it was relatively normal. This book is about letting oneself go, investing 30 billion, and the odds are 1 to 10. Is this the national football team playing Brazil? The key point is that you have mixed it up with your hands, and you have no money, so it feels like the writing is a bit perfunctory.

How come you have already completed high-level training and you still have to take your teammates who are at the second and third levels of the intermediate level together on adventures. The one in front of you can still run away with an intermediate level when encountering the monarch level. Don't you think the gap is a bit big? Now I went to the desert and encountered a super-level enemy. Although the combat power is high, it can't be so outrageous. A high-level full cultivator and three intermediate-level enemies face a super-level enemy. When did super-level enemies become so easy to deal with? Moreover, the description of this super-level does not look like someone who has just been promoted.

Between three and four stars, most of the second-generation writers are not good at writing because they cannot continue writing if they do not follow the original work. The key point is that the writing is still poor. You don't stick to the original plot, but in the final analysis it is still a second creation. In addition to the magic reminder in it, the characters of the original work are also an important point in watching the second creation. But your plot is almost all original, but the development of the plot is similar to that of the original work. There is not much fundamental difference. Whether it is youth campus or outdoor adventure, it is just the same as written over and over again. If there are no characters in the original work, why watch a second creation?

The kind that casually exposes the props in his hands, and they are very valuable.

It is too easy to improve mental power. It only takes less than a hundred residual souls to go from the first level to the third level. According to your setting, the residual soul level is only 10,000. You can only combine two essences for the little loach. Another point, you have just entered the second level, what does it mean to buy materials that break through to the intermediate level? Why don't you use the money to buy something else? At least some magic equipment to save your life, right? It's like you are in the third year of junior high school this year. If you don't buy the real questions for the high school entrance examination, what's the point of buying a book that must answer the questions for the college entrance examination?

Very few updates. . . . At least two chapters a day, don't be so sloppy.

What's the use of those roadsides in the hunting group at the beginning besides doing odd jobs? It's hard to understand the purpose of forming a special group and putting these items together at the front. It's really not as good as the main character starting to go out to hunt monsters at mid-level and use shadows to solve various problems.

It's not like the common system, but the victims. Chaos has invaded all the systems.

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It's been a long time since I've seen a French fanfic with a single female protagonist and a genius flow. What I like most is that the protagonist can synthesize spirit seeds and soul seeds, instead of always obtaining resources by completing tasks like the original protagonist.