Devouring the Lord of the Starry Sky

It's really good. It has the taste of swallowing, and it has gone its own way. It is not limited to the original novel. When I see the back, I have a feeling that someone is better than someone else and is better than someone else. Those who learn from me will live like me and die like me. This novel is someone who learns from me and is better than others. The growth experience that is completely different from Luo Feng's but also similar to that of Luo Feng avoids the pitfalls of most fan fictions. The arrangements and opportunities of Goldfinger are also reasonable. There is no need to snatch Luo Feng's opportunities but he has opportunities that are stronger than Luo Feng's. He is not a dog licker and is not hostile. The arrangement of the protagonist is reasonable. I would like to call it the number one devouring fandom! ! ! ! ! ! !

In the Devouring fandom circle, there is a big boss named "Nagisa Kaoru Devouring the World". He posted a review of the Devouring fanfic in different book circles. However, this book was not listed in most of the posts because he said he did not like the author's style. Many people will take a look at his posts and will definitely browse the fanfics mentioned in his posts. However, because this book is not listed as a recommendation, it has lost a lot of exposure. I think this is unfair to the book. I basically went in and browsed through the Devouring fanfic that the big guy reviewed. In my personal opinion, this book is better than most fanfics, and it is one of the best among Devouring fanfics. Here are just a few points briefly listed below: 1. The protagonist's training route is novel and basically original to the author, and he no longer follows the original route in a cookie-cutter manner. 2. The positioning of the protagonist Luo Feng in the original work is reasonable: Basically, fan fiction will create a genius who is more evil than Luo Feng, and his strength greatly exceeds Luo Feng. Therefore, the character of Luo Feng is basically dispensable in the fan fiction. At the same time, since most of the protagonists and Luo Feng were born at the same time (take participating in the Cosmic Genius Battle at the same time as an example), they are de facto competitors (competition for the number one on earth, competition for the number one genius at the same time, competition for the inheritance of the earth's lineage). Of course, in most cases, Luo Feng is dwarfed by the protagonists of the same person. The protagonist of this work staggered the competition with Luo Feng and formed a partnership with Luo Feng. The protagonist does not pursue "beating Luo Feng at all times and everywhere". Typical examples are: 1) The protagonist has stated several times at different stages that his willpower is not as good as Luo Feng's; 2) The protagonist's clones did not seek to crush Luo Feng's clones. For example, when conceiving the third clone, they did not necessarily find a stronger one than the Blood Sea, but chose the World Tree, which was slightly inferior to the Blood Sea in the original work. Although the protagonist is stronger than Luo Feng (as a fan fiction protagonist, this is natural), he is basically the same level of powerhouse, and the two are basically neck and neck. For example: the diameter of Luo Feng's true god's small universe is 1 billion light-years, while that of the protagonist is about 1.3 Billion light-years, which is basically the same magnitude, and subsequent breakthroughs will also be in this ratio. So, the protagonist and Luo Feng came to the Origin Continent at the same time, and they have been fighting side by side to conquer the world together, instead of leaving Luo Feng in a soy sauce state. At present, the protagonist and Luo Feng, along with the Original Ancestor, Giant Axe, Chaos and others, have established a territory in the Origin Continent. The Original Ancestor, Giant Axe, and Chaos are not without any sense of existence, but are playing their respective roles. Therefore, the Origin Continent chapter is also particularly exciting and worth looking forward to. It can be read as a fan or a sequel to the original work. (From this perspective, the author's golden finger is actually not very open, is it? In any case, he just created a fan protagonist who is slightly stronger than Luo Feng (about 1.3 Times), which is already very restrained). 3. As a fan who has already written about the continent of origin and reached the later stage of the plot, the author has always maintained a frequency of updates, with a stable update of 2 times a day, and one update has 4,000+ views. Just look at other fans who have written in the middle and late stages and you will know that it is common to update every three days, so it is very rare to be able to maintain this frequency and intensity of updates! The author deserves praise for his spirit and diligence, right? Currently among the Devouring fanfics, Lord of All Things is the best. Its advantages are excellent writing, clever conception, and profound connotation. Unfortunately, the hook was too big, so that I couldn't write it in the later period and ended it in a hurry. Among other Devouring fans, there are basically very few that write about the Origin Continent. Even those that do write about it are very brief and very fast-paced (not to mention Luo Feng), and they are not as detailed and exciting as this book. Therefore, as long as the author can maintain his standards and continue writing the Origin Continent and its sequels without unfinishing it, I believe this book can become the best among Devouring fandoms.

It is very innovative, and it can be seen that the author has carefully coordinated the plot and changes of the original work.

The cosmic class is equivalent to cannon fodder when standing outside the territory. There will be no steps to evaluate the combat power. They will act according to the legion. Generally, 10 or 100 cosmic classes are organized into a team. The captain is the domain master, and so on, followed by the army, with the military leader immortal as the leader. Only if the individually authorized world leader starts, the world leader has the right to choose to join a legion or a team.

Territory Lord kills Immortal? This is too outrageous.

Let me talk about my recent feelings. I feel like this book has slowly changed since it started writing about the God King. I said before that the plot progress is slow. In fact, the main reason is that the plot has no ups and downs and no exciting points. Moreover, the author now feels that the god kings are just cabbages. There are thousands of god kings at every turn. The source world in Lord Snow Eagle only has a few god kings in total, bro. Even if the continent of origin is special, as long as it's not original, it can't be that special, right? Moreover, in the original text, Zhongyuan only created the Jiexin Continent. There were not even a thousand god kings in it, and there were not as many ultimate realms as your continent of origin. Don't you think it's weird? Of course, the writing style is still good, but it just feels like it's not as good as walking around the source worlds, or you feel like writing about the inner world by following the rules.

Damn it, a universe-level cannon fodder in an extraterrestrial battlefield is divided into ordinary, elite, and general. There is no need to fill up the word count.

I would like to ask, what is so exciting about this book? Many reviews of the book say that "fans are number one", but at first glance, it can only be said to be a scam. I tried adding bookshelves a few times, and then they disappeared at the speed of light. No one thought this opening chapter was very brainless. Can't you read it?

I'm speechless. When a cosmic-level warrior goes to a foreign battlefield, the death rate is so high. In the original work, both the cosmic-level and domain masters are equivalent to cannon fodder. In a legion, you must obey the arrangements of your superiors. The mortality rate depends on who the military leader is. Those who love their subordinates are better off. When encountering radicals, the legion's casualties will definitely be serious. You can't be immortal even at the cosmic-level.

It's too licking, and it has completely become the nanny of the human race. The Golden Crow and the Golden Crow haven't written anything, the prehistoric monster clan hasn't written anything, and the inheritance of the Eastern Emperor hasn't written anything. I'm here to see you fight in the world, not to see you being the nanny of these aliens.

I have a habit of devouring my fellow fans, always wanting to add something of my own to it, and then make it completely different. The Devouring fanfic has been so modified that it doesn't have that flavor anymore, and it even forces the protagonist Luo Feng to give away treasures, even if they don't want them. I'm speechless,

Swallow the four things that determine combat power 1: Basic strength 2: Law perception 3: Law application 4: Weapons. Basic power: The level of realm, genetic level, physical strength, mental power amplitude, divine body amplitude, soul amplitude, and the secret method of divine power burning all affect the level of power exerted. Law Enlightenment: The Venerable and others have not fully comprehended a superior law, but the Venerable has completely comprehended a superior law. The Lord of the Universe has fully comprehended two superior laws or a complete fusion law. Needless to say about weapons. Principle application: The levels of secret methods are divided into low-level, ordinary, top-level, peak, and ultimate. This is a division based on the degree of application of the law under the same understanding of the law. There is a huge gap between the immortal level enlightenment without fully understanding the higher laws and the ultimate secret method created by understanding the two higher laws of time and space. In the original work, Luo Feng created the 3-style ultimate secret method "The Ten Thousand Stars Sermon Diagram" when he broke through immortality. This is the ultimate secret method of immortality. After breaking through immortality, he was chased and killed by the overlord of the universe on the original star, and he had no power to fight back. However, when Luo Feng created the Ultimate Secret Technique of the Lord of the Universe "Golden Light", he had not broken through to the Lord of the Universe at that time. His understanding of the law, basic strength, weapons and immortal level had almost no changes. He relied on the golden light to kill the Overlord of the Universe without using a second sword. The author did not understand the difference in levels of secret techniques. When there was not much difference in basic strength and weapons, he relied on the immortal-level ultimate secret technique to kill the Lord of Sirius. This was simply outrageous. The author took the original work of Chaos City Lord as saying that the Lord of the Universe generally creates the pinnacle secret method, and the Lord of the Universe generally creates the ultimate secret method, and did not take into account the differences in understanding the laws and different secret methods. And the author has always believed that the amplitude of the divine body is a means of explosion, and the protagonist's secret talent is a means of explosion, but when it comes to the Lord of the Universe, the amplitude increases hundreds of times, so this is already a routine method for Master of the Universe level battles. The ones that everyone has are no longer described. They are all available by default and used by default. The author acquiesces that no one has it, and only the protagonist can activate the talent amplification, and other universe masters can use the divine body amplification. I gave up the book after reading Chapter 277. I don't know if there will be any improvement in the future, but I really can't stand it anymore. I don't have the courage to look forward. I'm afraid I will die from the poison!

The original work of "Swallowing the Stars" has 4.6 Million words, and you have reached 5 million words soon. Congratulations🎉 for becoming another fan novel with more words than the original work 👍👍👍

It's okay to cheat, but it can't be too outrageous.

Another inexplicably strong type joined the spiritual master. The spiritual master in the original drama boasted that he was invincible at the same level, but what he showed was that the apprentice and Xing Zhou Luo Feng showed more combat power than the same level. In the later genius battle, are the psychic masters very strong? On the contrary, the weakness is obvious. In the later cosmic period, the competition is entirely about the understanding and application of laws. The spiritual master is invincible at the same level and is a joke.

The writing is really watery and long-winded, and the first few golden chapters are watery and long-winded.

Since the two main deities should be thousands of times closer to the perfect genetic level of the Golden Crow clone, according to normal special life, they will be world masters as soon as they are born! Then, because the human clone only has a trace of essence and blood, its energy absorption is not as good as that of the Golden Crow clone. Just follow your settings! Then there should be a way to go to the Ancestral God Cult in the inheritance memory of the Golden Crow clone. Directly find an ordinary immortal enslaved by the Realm Lord to take you there. Special beings can directly join the Ancestral God Religion without the Ancestral God Order. They are cultivated by the Ancestral God Church. The human beings can wander around the earth or the human race territory! After all, if you want special life clone materials, the Ancestral God Sect has the most! There is no need for both clones to stay in the human territory. It is a complete waste of the origin of the only special life!

There are several poisonous points that I don't want to read down. One is that none of the collected blood crystals seem to be fused. They were collected from Luofeng wool. One is that although he has a lot of wealth and the treasures on his body are worth several thousand treasure points, he is still a great divine body and has broken through the universe, but he has no plans to rent or buy the original treasures. One is that he only knows how to ask for things but not how to give back. After becoming a disciple of the giant axe, the protagonist has hardly communicated with the original teacher, let alone giving back. The same goes for the master. In the past, he collected a bunch of wool, and the place to enter an important secret realm of opportunity was obtained with the help of the master, and there was no reward at all. Then it can be said that the original will of the universe loves the protagonist very much. When breaking through to the master of the universe, he did not take the path allowed by the original will to use the original treasure, but used the chaos clock to forcibly fix the passage to increase the progress of the transformation of the divine body. When he felt the original will of the universe, he did not show any expression at all. Brother, you are true, you have received so many benefits of the original will, but you are not polite when you stand up and kick. In addition, the protagonist has no control. If the Lord of Chaos City had not stopped him, he almost killed all the Chaos Beasts outside Chaos City. I don't even want to say it anymore.

Why is there just one person in the comment area who is swiping the screen 🙂🙂🙂. What a silly cup

If the four major ethnic groups meet and fight, they will be killed, and the three ethnic groups will share it fairly. Do you think this is the difference between good and evil in other fantasy novels? The extraterritorial battlefield that swallows the stars is what I would rather destroy if I don't get it.

The original work cultivates to the perfection of the God-Emperor. Both together. Not as many words as you wrote.

Immortal Killing the Lord of Sirius is so outrageous, I feel like my combat power has dropped.

Very good, very innovative, and a different route from the previous Devouring fandoms. I look forward to getting better and better as I write more.

Is it interesting that the water is still water after several years?

When I saw the middle stage, especially the realm beast, there was too much nonsense in the narration. There was a section like "Haha, he is worthy of being the Lord of Eternity. He is so powerful just as the Lord of the Universe. You are worthy of this arrogance." (I asked you earlier if you dare to block it - why don't you dare). Oh my god, you can say this and the realm beast can jump! Don't look

Why do I feel more and more watery in the later period? I repeat my words too much.

It's not too much to ask for perfection.

There are typos and omissions at the end. Some readers reminded me, but the author did not change it.

The author is not very good at dealing with the hostile forces of the Cosmic Sea, the Holy Land and the Divine Eye Clan. He said before that he could use the world beasts to destroy him, but he didn't do it. I doubt the word count of water.

The author writes very well! Welcome everyone to click on the homepage to view my new works~