Uchiha Madara's Salty Brother

Regarding the question of salted fish. Actually, I thought about it seriously. How can I put it this way? There was really nothing I could do about it in the beginning. There was Hei Zetsu, I had a father, and there were enemies. If I were to do nothing in this state, there would definitely be more people complaining about it. I don't have the qualifications, right? However, after the strength begins to emerge, the protagonist will enter a real salty state, because he is qualified and is no longer afraid.

There are still decades left before the village is established. Where will the jounin and genin come from?

Tailed beasts should not be distributed at all. One country's dominance is the best way to achieve long-term peace and stability.

The writing in other places is pretty good, but don't keep emphasizing that the woman's cooking is unpalatable. It appears once or twice and I think it's funny. But if you keep saying it, it's really boring.

It's obvious that the author has some ideas, but it's a pity that the writing style is so poor.

Ah ha ha ha ha, an apple. I was still thinking about what an Apple is, and suddenly I took a screenshot. The instant noodles almost spurted out, and all I could think about was an apple.

Is the author going to teach Mr. Madara to practice the Eight Gates? Look at these weight-bearing things in the early stage. Xiao Li was also specifically mentioned. I'm doubting this. Will he die if the Six Paths Class opens the door to death? This issue can be studied. Then when the tailed beasts come to the clan, they will train a few more Mangekyoukai Susanas. Each of the 8 tailed beasts has a powerful Susan? Tailed beast defense problem solved. There is no need to worry about the attack problem. Not many people can resist the tailed beast's attack. Then the issue of pupil power needs to be carefully considered. After all, the kaleidoscope is not blind forever. How to add it is a question. If 8 tailed beasts are not wasted. At least 8 kaleidoscope classes must be formed. One tailed beast and four kaleidoscopes. Don't leave Susan Also, the author's description of fighting is too weak. The fighting description needs to be strengthened. You can read more similar novels. Or maybe fantasy. How to say it. Fighting can also be a good word count! The premise is that your description is wonderful! Just like when we watch movies. I often jump to watch it. But if it's really exciting. There are also some blush-inducing dialogues. We won't fast forward for more than 100 minutes. I am even afraid that I will deliver the goods ahead of schedule.

Is it still possible to make jokes about women cooking dark dishes? This joke is already bad, okay?

I remember that there were a lot of fierce Uchiha during the Warring States Period, and there were six or seven pairs of Kaleidoscopes guaranteed. After all, the fighting during the Warring States Period was so intense, it was a perfect environment for eye-opening. When Madara was the leader of the clan, there should have been seven or eight couples. Unfortunately, when he met Ozhu, a strong man from the sky, he defeated the Uchiha in a daze, and probably not many of the kaleidoscope owners were killed. Forced Madara to lower his head and let go of the hatred of his younger brother's murder to join hands with the Senju to found Konoha. After all, if he didn't bow his head, this ruthless man like Ozhu would really kill the Uchiha clan. Madara was really frustrated.

Let's change the title of the book. It's a waste of time. It's been assassinated all the time. Then fight back. It's better to upgrade your monster-fighting style.

So far, things are good, the main body is relaxed and happy, and there is no private goods involved. The author's writing style is mature and easy. Come on

What did I say? Every one of his books is bad. If one of his books is bad, he will develop a habit, so there is no need to go. What to expect

Don't brag about the Eight Gate Dungeon. That's what Kishimoto did to delay time. It's similar to the effect of the Tianjin Rice Qigong Cannon to suppress Cell. It's all for plot service. The Eight Gate Kai can kill Kai instantly against Madara. Without the Yondaime and Kakashi to transfer the fairway jade, Kai would have died without even being able to touch Madara's hair.

In the second chapter, I felt like I was in conflict with the "salted fish". A protagonist explains his abilities to his enemies. Although it is meant to be explained to the readers, I feel that it is not necessary for the protagonist to say it himself. It can be said through other people or Madara's mouth. Also, for an enemy, you can either hide and wait for Madara to deal with it, or you are stronger than him, deal with it directly, and then take advantage of it. Don't write like a cat playing with a mouse. They are not evenly matched enemies and need to be consumed

How come the jounin exam is so similar to the chuunin exam in the original book? This is not attractive at all! I feel that promotion to Jonin should be directly based on actual combat assessment or outstanding performance in completing tasks, and direct promotion to Jonin after senior management review. Madara probably didn't like war when he was a child, right? And the Uchiha clan leader should be more old-fashioned, taking his son to force Madara to kill Hashirama. I only saw the second round of the Jonin Exam! All I can say is that the protagonist is not salty at all. He's so damn strong at seven years old!

Just-_-|| Forget it, come on! I hope this book does better

Naruto and Sengoku children all go to the battlefield to become jounin. Shouldn't they rely on tests to complete tasks or merit in battle? Do you actually have the energy to hold exams?

The protagonist is an Uchiha, so he probably won't follow the original work and let the night of genocide happen again. I've read some fan fiction, but I don't know if it's because of the author's lack of writing skills or a poor grasp of the plot. Although he is the protagonist of Uchiha, he still sits back and watches the genocide happen. He has gone through a lonely time. I hope this book will not

The writing is very good so far, the writing is smooth and unique, the characters are successfully created, and the future development is worth looking forward to. Like it Personally, I think there are relatively few shortcomings. For example, the protagonist is only 7 years old and can use super-standard Yang escape and ninjutsu to drain a lake. . . He has reached the ceiling of his combat power too early. No matter how fast he is, he will not reach the Six Paths Sage level at the age of ten, which is a little worrying.

…………I was kicked because I was late in replying to the message? I didn't see any notice saying that diving is refused...

How should I put it? I can only say that you are worthy of being the author.

Why hasn't it been updated after a year?