The Last Glow of the Apocalypse

To be honest, I feel like I can't continue writing this book because FGG has raised Huai Shi too high. The protagonist in the back is completely incomparable. The genealogy of the Kingdom of Heaven is destined to be Huai Shi's. The book of destiny is in hand. He is a born saint. With the abyss and the scorching sun in the background, it is impossible for him to be the protagonist. The writing is not exciting enough and the results will not be very good. You have to satisfy the fans of Apocalypse and have your own ideas. , This is really difficult, because Apocalypse really doesn't have too many regrets. Blindly participating in the Huaishi poem incident will definitely collapse. I would like to give the author a suggestion. If the book collapses and you still write about Apocalypse, you might as well write about the period from the peak of the Republic to the fall of the Kingdom of Heaven, and let the protagonist be with Russell and the others. This is not only refreshing, but also improves the protagonist, and can also be connected with Huaishi.

The characteristic of Apocalypse Forecast is that there are many organizations and many things to do. Originally, it was not a story about one protagonist saving the world. Everyone has their own story, and it can fit in a few more protagonists. As for the old enemy of the Burning Sun of the Abyss, the new king of the Thunder Sea, just treat it as Duan CG and don't need to pay attention to it. But if you enter the Utopia, don't think about grabbing Huai Shi's status. After all, the book of destiny is in Huai Shi's hands. Moreover, the God King Odin will not be stronger than the Soldier Master. In mythology, Taiyi is the origin and essence of the world, which is the Tao, which corresponds to God. Don't even think about surpassing Huai Shi in terms of personal strength. So when you enter the Kingdom of Heaven pedigree, you should be prepared to play a role like the vice principal or Kuafu. A pedigree, especially a declining pedigree like the Kingdom of Heaven pedigree, cannot create two factions. When the protagonist enters the Kingdom of Heaven pedigree, you must be prepared to play the role of a deputy, a thug, or a technician. You can write a protagonist, but at the same time, you have to be a supporting role. I don't know if the author can write it well.

Holy shit, look what kind of apocalypse prediction fanfic I found, my god, what kind of goddamn author is this?

I'm very curious, with the ridiculous level of the scorching sun in the abyss, what kind of thing can be an old enemy with him?

The author is very courageous. Sometimes I can't understand FGG's setting of Apocalypse...

The eighth natural enemy in the current situation? I'm so big, but where's Taichi?

This should be Qidian's first fanfic of Tianqi. Anyway, I haven't seen the others.

To be honest, if you want Odin alone, it is absolutely impossible to match Taiyi. After all, Taiyi is the sum total of the current situation. But if Odin alone is not good, then add other things. This is what I think. The strength and personality of Odin in the true myth are combined with the World Tree and the Law of the Creator. "Country of China" and the seven kingdoms of alchemy, element replacement, spiritual recasting, concept arming, time counterflow, space opening, life creation, and causal separation may add up to a chance with Taiyi. Taiyi is strong because the concepts Taiyi possesses are too strong, so you will definitely lose if you try to fight him in the current situation. , So we need to create a "field" similar to China. The World Tree itself has the concept of "world". If you add the laws owned by the Creator, you should be able to try it. Add the Seven Kingdoms of Alchemy, and you can probably create a situation where you can't kill me and I can't kill you, which is similar to Invincible Dad fights God Yiyi. You can win but it will take a lifetime, or you can just touch Taiyi without being defeated. But the difficulty lies in how to write it, but I don't think it is necessary. After all, Page must be the master of the genealogy, and he is in the same camp as the protagonist, so the protagonist can just be a founding general.

Let me give you some suggestions. The pace can be sped up. It's been forty chapters, but I haven't reached the ivory tower yet, and I haven't encountered a big event like Peggy. It's all about daily life, and the sequence is not very clear. To be honest, I still don't understand how the protagonist Ye and Peggy can become rivals. Both the hardware and software are too different. The Book of Destiny is at Peggy's place. The crow sister over there completely defeated the old bastard in terms of queues. In terms of sequence, the Road to Heaven is the only stigmata that has not been studied clearly in the Utopia. In the end, it can become Taiyi. To be honest, the protagonist's God King Odin is just like that. Moreover, the original text of Road to Dusk says that it is necessary to cooperate with the Ring of the Nibelungs to maximize its abilities. But is it possible for the protagonist to get it? The most important thing is that the main character is doing well now because Huaishi hasn't come yet. Once Huaishi comes out and Sister Ya is there, the master of the genealogy will definitely still be Huaishi in the end. Finally, I hope the author can explain in the article how Dusk Road is better than the stigmata that best matches the protagonist, otherwise some readers (including me) may feel that it is a pity not to choose that stigmata.

First of all, is it possible that the timeline of the Abyss's blazing sun solidified and became the Will of the Abyss? . The burning sun in the abyss is the only thing that cannot be burned. Then we restart the timeline with Abyss Burning Sun. In this case, the old enemies and background characters will come out.