Bringing Talent into the Charnel Ground

Both the novel and the author are quite spiritual, but a little immature and blunt, but the flaws are not hidden. The plot from the fifth chapter to the next 50 chapters is not particularly brainless, and the description is not a big problem. It is a bit poisonous, but it is a good grass. Generally speaking, the treasure novel will depend on how it is written later. It's just a bit messy. It would be nice if there was a core. Everyone has their own preferences in novels. Let's read them later.

It looks good, but unfortunately the biggest problem is that the protagonist cannot be established, just like a castle in the air without roots that cannot withstand scrutiny. The biggest problem with this book now is that the protagonist's past cannot support his having such a correct outlook on life, let alone where he has such a large reserve of knowledge (especially various scriptures)... Unless he is a monk and a Taoist since childhood, normal people may not even be able to remember the names of scriptures, let alone recite the entire text? You can say that the protagonist is mentally mature, which is understandable, but the protagonist is obviously beyond this range... And his Taoist mind has become stable. Moreover, the death of the crow came for no reason, so it can only be said to be a pity.

A classical fairy tale with the same style as yours, which is darker, more serious and has a starting point for writing achievements. Xian Lu, Xian Cage, Xian Chan, and Liaozhai Qiudao were all written by the same person. The author made 45 books, and the last Xian Lu really made money.

The author thinks too much and can write whatever he wants. The probability of being attacked is far greater than the probability of being blocked.

Okay, okay, it has the context of a popular novel.

To be honest, there are really not many books like Qidian. Generally, the authors of Qidian like to come up with new pictures and create a bunch of martial arts systems. Then in order to improve the martial arts level, they will kill here today and kill there tomorrow. There is not even a main plot line. They write a lot of nonsense and then give the martial arts a reason. It's impossible to write a novel without a main plot. You can't write it until you have a good outline. I know that upgrading martial arts is the key to advancing the plot. The key is that there are a lot of them, which make people sick to their stomachs. Anyone who has studied Chinese and knows about the succession and transformation of novels can't figure out why there are so many such things.

It is recommended to change the introduction, otherwise it will only attract readers who like dark streams.

I heard about the dark flow, so I tried the poison.

After reading the second chapter, I finally cleared the path of classical immortals in the classical immortals area. Come on, the author.

Really well written. The story and interest are very attractive, and the main content is unconventional, which is in stark contrast to the brainless "system" that dominates the Qidian channel.

This story is good. It has a fairy-like feel at first glance, and I find it interesting as I continue reading.

Will he also be a deputy goat in the future?

How can I put it this way? I feel like this book has no core. I just know that the protagonist is walking and doesn't know where he is going or what he is going to do.

The previous protagonist was able to escape, which was too childish. It is too lucky that the protagonist is alive.

Overall, the novel is quite interesting and sticky. It just feels a bit weak and gives people a hazy feeling. It feels like I can't find the main line of the story and I don't know what the author is going to say.

Is the author a eunuch? Give me an explanation.

This book is really hard to find any loopholes to complain about.

Is Sun Dequan dead? I should be panicking.