Reborn: My Legendary Life

Your sister, I can get a hundred times more money from retailers. Don't I need to make money by cooperating with you? Don't they need to open up a relationship?

With modern China as the background, I think this kind of time travel should always have a single female protagonist.

The writing is too exaggerated. Can you be more subtle? The Young and Dangerous in Hong Kong are not so exaggerated. Do you really think that the government runs restaurants?

It's really not that simple to rob people overseas. It's not that everyone has one person, but there are definitely several guns. How can it be so simple in a fire fight? One boy can kill several of them. You write about using fists and knives. It's normal in China. Sometimes people even use guns.

If you have anything to complain about, please comment here. It's a newcomer's new book. Please bear with me if it's not well written. Just enjoy reading it and don't worry too much about some unreasonable things in it [A good start, the story is all made up (to gain popularity)]

Just reading everyone's comments, I know that this book won't be long. This kind of book should not be written at the starting point. If you want to write it, you are referring to the wrong direction. In fact, it is not absolutely impossible to have social elements. What is important is how to deal with it, how to transform it, how to develop it. Mere imitation is of no use. I hope the author can read it.

Why is this chapter being posted repeatedly? Why do you want to show me a repetitive chapter after charging money to read each chapter?

Write less negative words, otherwise you will end up being bullied

It's okay in the front, but in the back the protagonist's tricks are too much and he really can't get far.

Write less emotional dramas, they are becoming more and more watery.