I Practice Immortality in a Deceitful Way

The plot is okay, but the text feels a bit rushed. In some places, I feel that it could be written more and be fuller. It is already very good, but overall it seems a bit uninteresting.

You dare to show beautiful women in your profile, it's really lawless.

The logic is not rigorous enough. In a strange world, the master of the protagonist is from the Demon Slayer Hall. When the protagonist said something was wrong, he said that Senior Brother Qin kept smiling and it felt weird. He wanted to investigate, but he didn't take it to heart. Many people died immediately afterwards and were trained into elixirs. The sense of reading was ruined and I didn't want to continue reading

The book is good, but the protagonist is a person who has traveled through time. His thinking should be different, and his sense of justice is too strong. Don't write it like a holy book.

It's very beautiful, come on

I still like pig torture articles. After all, life is difficult, so at least I won't meddle in other people's business! I don't like nosy pig's feet!

Is there a Shen Nong? How about the book? I don't dare to read it if there is an empress in the introduction.

I felt pretty good after reading the first three chapters. I'll reward you with 10 points 🙂