Zhutian Yunyang: Beginning from Becoming the Willow God

In the original novel, Liu Shen was originally a woman, and she was also a perfect goddess.

After reading the novel, I was confused. You said it was well written, but I didn't realize how good it was. 😂😂 You said it was poisonous. There was nothing serious about it. Overall, it was a bit boring to me. There were a lot of unnecessary introductions. After introducing a lot of them, I was also confused when talking to anti-inflammatories. Before To be an otaku, he must be at least 20 years old (I remember he was in his 20s and almost 30, I forgot). The dialogue and characterization are really too childish, and too dramatic. If the inner activities of the effeminate Ye Hei can be interpreted as sinister, Liu Shen (a figure who is so magnificent that he can kill in foreign lands) It's a bit unacceptable to me) and I didn't mean that the author didn't write well. It would have been better if it wasn't Liu Shen (after all, it was too dramatic. After reading your novel, the gorgeous Liu Shen in my mind became a joke. Yes, you succeeded in destroying the Liu Shen I imagined in my mind. Now she is in my mind. Haili looks like a loli naughty kid 😂😂). I think the daily lolita style looks better this way. After all, the anti-inflammatory drugs in two lifetimes are worth 4. To put it simply, there is nothing wrong with the plot or anything else. It's just this style... It's too bizarre, but overall it's pretty good. It was quite relaxing but after reading about 20 chapters I felt tired.

The setting is okay, but Xiao Yan doesn't like it very much. As for relationships, a person will never leave you in your peaks and valleys, and you will open up a harem after your talent comes back. It may feel cool to watch, but the more I think about it, the more unacceptable it becomes.

Isn't it the Transcendence Chapter of the Original True Solution? How did it become the Taichu True Solution?

It feels like the protagonist of green tea

Aren't you raising a daughter? Why are they all men?

Finally, if you don't know how to write, don't write. Even though you have traveled through time and become Liu Shen, you can't completely destroy the image in my mind.

Please read it every day. If the title is correct, it will be written with care. Big guys, don't worry about it. Also, if you have any questions about the world you want to go to, anyone can tell me about it.

I don't know if it's because there are two kids in the group, but some of the plots seem so childish.

It's very beautifully written, keep it up

Good guy, after keeping it for a while, I found that the content has changed.

How can there be an Immortal Emperor in the world level of the Tomb of Gods? There is only one Immortal Emperor in the perfect world for countless epochs The talent of No. 10 Also took millions of years The Tomb of Gods did not have many years before and after, and the combat effectiveness is not good either. Look at the description of the boundary sea in the perfect world. A drop of sea water is a big world There are still differences between the two worlds.

I'm a little confused! Can anyone tell me if this is a female protagonist or a male protagonist?

I think after finishing the revision, I read a similar chat group novel, which was very similar to

I think it's time to eat pigeon meat 🌹

Lie down, I want to train Xianyu Shushu 🤭

Since the content has been changed, the name should also be changed, otherwise it will be awkward to read the content and the name together.

Your title says Yunyang, but the content has nothing to do with Yunyang.

Why hasn't the author updated it yet?