Alliance Voice Pack, Become Stronger by Playing a Role

I can't stand the details of team interactions and other plot arrangement issues. Forget it. The recent typos are as fast as picking with my feet. Forget about the typos. I banned Yasuo in the group stage where I played SSG and started to rob Yasuo for a while. It feels like it's completely perfunctory and out of my mind. The setting and early plot of the book are very good. If you really don't want to write, just leave it. Otherwise, it will be more disgusting than the unfinished eunuch and the eunuch.

I don't recommend subscribing at all. There are a lot of typos and chapters are copied and pasted. The more I read it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. Later, I finally got better, but then I started copying and pasting again, just changing the hero and name.

No, it's too shameful. The author should update more 😏

Don't forget women's clothing for winter vacation

Why not let the protagonist start a live broadcast? It feels like it should be quite interesting!

Too invincible, SKT was completely beaten, and Brother Li turned into a person who only knows Xiba. Except that the subject matter is more funny, I said that I have no desire to watch it. League of Legends is not a game for one person, and it is not a game without ups and downs. Being beaten by Brother Li at almost his peak state is equivalent to the invincibility of the protagonist, and there is no cosplay or other status, just reading lines. Like, and Uzi and others are just hugging each other and have no personal sparkle, so I don't think who can push the protagonist one step closer. The novel without plot is equal to death. To put it bluntly, it is inevitable to drop the subscription. I almost guessed the plot after I ordered it. There is no need to continue reading. I hope the author can write better in the future. Goodbye, book friends.

I'll be honest, I don't like "Sister Chen", Yasuo was pretty good before I read this book. Although the Internet makes fun of women's clothing, I really think this is not good.

How should I put it? What I expect is for the protagonist to pronounce the character's lines subjectively and shamefully, instead of entering a state of possession by the character. This is soulless.

It's so disgusting for a man to keep writing about beautiful women.

Why don't you go cosplaying with this system?

I've already ordered it all and would like to make a few suggestions. 1. There are too many typos. It's a bit excessive to see four or five in one chapter. I'll send it out and proofread it a few times. 2'Write a little more detail about the game, at least two to three chapters, but unimportant games can be skipped quickly. 3' I was quite speechless when I saw the game against SKT. After all, the barbecue stall was the runner-up in S7, and let the second team chase the third RNG. There is absolutely nothing to say about the mentality, especially Faker, whose mentality should be one of the best in the league. 4' I don't have a big opinion about the protagonist leading the rhythm, but don't grab the top lane, and then counter-crouch in the middle lane. Occasionally, you can write a jungle invasion and fight, or the opponent grabs and counter-crouches. (Maybe the author plans to write a back-and-forth game in S8?) 5' When writing about the Korean team, you can check the real names of the players. Most LCK teams seem to be called by their real names, which makes it more interesting. 6'Hero Microphone I think this link is very good. I have read several books on the alliance. Yours is the first to write about this link (after all, it is a feature). But don't copy and paste when writing, it will be very uncomfortable to read. In short, I personally think the writing is good. The writing style is relatively new but passable, and the plot is also good. If you have time, you can watch the plot of the Demon King system. If you are the main writer of RNG, you can read it. Don't retire. I recommend that the author can communicate with the latter (if the author is also a royal fan). Also, definitely I definitely don't want TJ, and don't have it cut off. I've read several books with good results in the past few years, but ended up getting cut off. It's too ex. Don't pay too much attention to the opinions of our readers when writing (after all, we didn't write it). But if you feel good about it, you can absorb it and slowly change it. It's best to mention that I want to see the protagonist doge (doge)

The book is quite interesting, but there are too many typos. Many times you have to guess what is written, which affects reading too much. Please proofread it before sending it out!

We are the champions, congratulations to EDG for winning!

To be honest. The quality is very low, so cloud players who don't play games can't watch it. In a team battle or 1v1, you don't write details or operations, and then just write one, like this, this, this, that, that, that, the protagonist is awesome and the protagonist is the strongest. Isn't this water? It's hard to watch

It was quite interesting when I first watched it, but after watching it, it felt like an urban idol drama, with all kinds of embarrassing boasts and boasts about how good-looking the protagonist is. You should write an e-sports article, and instead of adding some weird buffs and special effects to the protagonist, why not spend more time describing the protagonist's daily life and hard training. It is very satisfying to win those celebrities with invincible plug-ins. What happens after that? It's simply fun but it won't last long, and no audience will like to watch a game without any suspense all the time.

The writing is quite interesting, but could the author be more attentive? Your data is almost outrageous in two chapters. It's really unbearable.

There are too many typos, which greatly affects the perception.

I just saw this King's Voice Pack: Play as XXX This can be considered a trend.

Build a typo building, you can post the screenshots with typos below ps: Special for obsessive-compulsive disorder

Although I am a free prostitute, three recommendation tickets are sent out every day. I hope the author can see the last stubbornness of the white prostitute monster. Update, update, update.

It's almost 200 or so and it's no longer fun.

How should I put it? I have been following you from the beginning until now. I haven't subscribed to the Cultivation of Immortality episode and there are still a few that I haven't subscribed to I also see your status From the beginning, I was amazed by the smooth Jia Yasuo, but later it became more and more boring and less interesting This book brought me passion, but it was also disappointing Maybe you were affected by some comments, or Other reasons I don't know exactly what happened, I just want to say If this book is gone, learn a lesson, work hard to improve yourself, and come back to the next book If you write a book to make money, then do your best to compensate readers in the next book If you write a book for yourself, then do your best to satisfy yourself in the next book Come on, I believe you will get better and better.

Order all to see the unfinished product

I've seen 220, I hope the author has more typos, that's it

Let me talk about the typos: Shushu (the author) basically writes in real time every day (I don't know if he secretly saves the manuscript), ten thousand words a day, maybe there are too many typos, and sometimes he forgets to correct the typos (this is why he said he would correct them immediately but didn't). We will try our best to urge him and correct the typos. I hope you can learn more about it. I am very sorry 🥺

Is the voice pack gone now? Have you bought the system? Don't leave any pitfalls.

Too watery

Wow~ It was so sudden,

Hey, it was really good in the early stage, but I didn't grasp the rhythm well. If a game is too long, it will seem very procrastinating. If it were more concise, maybe it wouldn't end like this.

I hope you make more typos! Emmmm