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Sure enough, I still can't read this kind of novel that seeks novelty and self-pleasure. I wish you good results. Farewell!

It's time to take out my god Nobita

The protagonist's setting is too high. You should never write a mentally retarded chat group scene where girls are given away. It will ruin the character and make it easy to persuade them to leave.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is a bit awkward. .

It feels a bit poisonous. I'm already a Tom, so don't have sex! Just write about the world and put it in the cup!

It should be this

The supporting characters are a bit imbecile and the support is too forceful.

The protagonist setting is good, but the content is empty and the writing is let down.

There is a problem with the setting from the beginning. If Tom is said to be innately divine and powerful, then why does the pig's foot travel through time and become the god Tom? Especially the pig's feet have nothing on them, which is very strange.

Let me tell you my own point of view. Every time the protagonist appears, everyone will praise him. It's very embarrassing to watch. There are also female characters calling Madara and Baiyue brother, which feels awkward.

I feel like the content of this novel is, I am awesome, my trumpet is awesome, my subordinates are awesome, my trumpet is awesome, I am even better, I can play my trumpet even when my trumpet is awesome, there are people out there who are awesome, but I am still awesome, this person thinks I am awesome, I have to make him awesome too.

Generally, those who write about chat groups will describe strong people from other worlds as ridiculous figures.

In front of you is the pioneer of interstellar development, the slayer of demon kings, the terminator of Atlantis civilization, the pioneer of prehistoric civilization, the sun king, the brave man of dreams, the best marksman in the universe, the promoter of historical civilization, the founder of the cloud kingdom, the mediator of animal and plant civilization, the creator and creator, the biggest black hand of endless time and space.

The characters are too facial, like Madara and Whitebeard, they have their own arrogance, so they shouldn't be awkward.

There is no other meaning. How can I put it? I have never seen the author who wrote about Tom and Jerry, and I am very interested in it, but the writing style is a bit bad. The most speechless thing is that it is written like a cool article, but it is too stiff and looks embarrassing. Besides, why do you use childhood classics to write a cool article? You are so good at Long Aotian, Shilipo Sword God and the like, it is a bit ruined

As soon as I saw the tiers of combat power, I was reminded of a certain free cartoonist 😏

The nanny article slips away. I thought it was an exchange of equal value. There is no real character. Tom's various states and personalities in the anime will be different. When it comes to your god, Tom will directly become a nanny 666. All kinds of characters collapse.

The veteran of the white beard chat group, what chat group has white beard 😅

You can just be a good person when you are in Quanqin, but now you have to be banned even for telling the truth? Your league's book plug-in is not the first of its kind, and I didn't say you plagiarized it, so why are you pretending to be so? Give me an author ID. I don't want to write a book. The author ID was also shared with other fan groups for everyone to play with. You mentioned Hun Quanqin in the alliance book, and you still want everyone to tell you that this book will be a hit and its creativity is unrivaled? There is no shame in eating while kneeling! It's not hurting your self-esteem. Why do you have to have everyone praise you before you can eat it?

Tom can do everything except catch mice

You can refer to Tom the God of Destruction in Dragon Ball, which is available in station b

It's already a wireless multiverse, why do we still use the word plane? You directly say that you create a universe. In a certain universe, the clones are all in a certain universe, not a plane.

Ugh, rubbish nanny story, I just don't like Yakumo Murasaki, a man-eating monster (｀Δ´)! If it were my place, I would definitely kill all these bastards.

Why not write about the protagonist using the chat group to understand the laws of other worlds and construct a complete world, so that he can become a being transcending this world. Wouldn't it be nice for him to roam freely in the endless sea of ​​worlds?

Could you please add Rick Sanchez to the author group?

To be honest, if it were an ordinary Tom Cat, it would be interesting to see when he entered. But when he debuted, he would be at his peak, and there would be no suspense at all.

......... To be honest, those clones might as well be changed into subordinates The protagonist is God who creates the universe, and everyone else is in charge of a universe.

Why is it that starting from chapter 160, the following chapters are like changing to another novel, completely different from the previous ones (,,վ㉨վ,)🤔

I sent the contract today, there is a penguin 🐧 Group: 1142879561

After reading the introduction, no matter how stupid this cat is, it still can't beat a dog.