A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Extra Stories

I think "Mortal" is a very good IP. It's a pity that Wangda didn't develop it deeply, but opened a new system. Take a look at Mr. Jin Yong's series of novels. They are all in the same system and have many connections. If Wangda opens a new system, it means giving up a large number of mortal fans. Why can't we always use the same system? For the same plot, don't always think about innovation. Innovation does not necessarily mean success. The Chong Xiu and Puppet that were abandoned in the middle and late stages of "Mortal" can be used to open two new books. As long as the characters and plots are well designed and related to mortals, just like the Jin Yong series of novels, they can attract a large number of mortal fans. In fact, the main thing to read in a book is the plot and story, and Wangda is very capable of telling stories and designing plots.

This author's book is not worth reading. When I reached more than 50 chapters, I commented in the comments that I suspected that the first 40 chapters were written by me, but the rest were not written by me. As a result, I mentioned that I had been banned for fifty years. I finally understood why there were so few bad reviews.

I may not read immortals, but I will definitely read fanfics written by mortals. I think Mortal is a good IP. Dayan Holy Land, Li Feiyu, Xiang Zhili, and many other aspects can be published as separate books. Or write about the mortal world millions of years from now. Or write about Han Li's family or descendants. Or apprentice. Just like Douluo Dalu, you can write a lot in one series. The mortal's cultivation system is deeply rooted in people's hearts. Eighty or ninety percent of the immortality novels on the market use levels based on mortals. There is really no need to bother reopening the book. There is no need to even have anything to do with Han Li. You can write about a stranger in the mortal world or the spiritual world, and someone will read it. It doesn't matter as long as they're in the same universe. Even if you don't practice immortality, just write about the life of an ordinary person doing business and practicing martial arts like his uncle.

There is no extra story, I only hope to rewrite the fairyland chapter 😭

The Immortal World Chapter is a mess, and the logic and IQ are worrying. Rewrite it! The Immortal World chapter ruins mortals!

Make up for the three hundred years when Han Li first entered the immortal world.

Stop writing immortals, fill in some of the pitfalls in the biography of mortals cultivating immortals, and then rewrite the chapter on the immortal world. Isn't this faster than earning money from immortals?

After the collapse of the fairy world, I am speechless again

Wangyu now only has his skin, and he is the same as before. He has gradually become like Jiangnan.

I, Yin Yue, didn't even mention the fairyland with more than four million words, which is outrageous 😭