Tokyo: Something's Not Quite Right About This Role-Playing Game

After reading Chapter 21, does the author have an outline? How long do you plan to write? Full time? If you just plan to write for fun, it doesn't matter whether it's long or short, and you don't make a living from it, then the content won't be a big problem. But if you have some ideas, as a pornographic person, I would be happy to read this kind of content, but this platform cannot allow you to take the next step. So it's okay to occasionally watch and play, and everyone can make fun of it If the rest is like this, it would be boring to me, and it can only be viewed as a novelty. The character of Pig's Foot is not outstanding and has no core. He is a gentle and good person - why is he a good person? What about side descriptions and detailed descriptions? (There is no reason to do good things, but as a core character there must be) A good person has experienced rebirth and does not change after life and death. The first part can explain that he just wants to survive in the face of death, but what about the second part? Are there no requirements for healthy lifespan after death? I saw that the author was describing the confusion after the pig's feet were resurrected, but the pig's feet are now like cows and horses trapped in the system, passively accepting arrangements, and even dare not look at the store. They are worse than social animals (social animals can at least choose to leave them rotten), but better than slaves, who can at least decide not to do anything and choose death. This reality determines the attributes of pig's feet tool man. All plots are arranged by the system And other people are just like the characters in the book. Everything that is unreasonable is reasonable, because the readers themselves know what the purpose is. And why the pig's feet in every book have blurred faces is to facilitate readers' interpretation. But can novels do this? I personally feel suspicious. A vague tool-man-pig's foot is confusing. Personal feelings, you can discuss them together if you like.

I really can't help it. To be honest, I feel that the author's writing is good, but I really feel uncomfortable watching the plot of the ex-girlfriend. You haven't really talked to her since you were soul-pierced, so why don't you just live forever and not have any contact with her? Also, when you face the incompetence of your senior, you are still arrogant and embarrassed, which really ruins the perception. This pure princess disease is a ghost of tsundere. I've met girls with princess syndrome before, and we guys ignored her or just yelled at her. I have read this book several times and deleted it every time. I haven't read it for a while and wanted to read it again, but I couldn't stand it when I saw this ex-girlfriend. Alas, let's read the author's next book. Really, I think this is not a tsundere, just a pure princess disease, or a princess disease without the life of a princess.

Tamaki Ryuka

1. Single/Multiple/None? Multiple, 5+ 2. Do you have a knife? I strive for no knife, so that the heroine who has emotional scenes can have a good ending. I am not someone who likes to torture readers. If a knife appears unintentionally, if everyone brings it up, I will try my best to modify it. 3. Will he take over? The ex-girlfriend only held hands with the original owner, so it doesn't count as a takeover. 4. Problems with using Korean comics in fan art (Cover/Ryuka Tamaki) This is just to provide readers with a more intuitive image and is only for temporary use. If the results of this book are acceptable, I will pay an artist to help draw the fan art in the future. 5. The setting of losing Yangshou has been changed. I remember that the few pictures that appeared have been deleted. There may be some omissions. If you find it, please remind me. 6. About Yaze Youchun Many people think that Yaze Youchun is trying to reach a higher level, so he makes the male protagonist stronger. The author did not have this intention when writing it. Seeing what everyone thinks, I can only say: It was my mistake. I accelerated the pace too much in order to rush for a recommendation position for reading on Tuesday, and there were some problems with the arrangement of the well-loved plot. I admit my mistake, and I will try my best to improve the character of Yaze Youchun and make her more plump. (When I wrote the character biography, I set Yaze Youchun as a carefree and sunny girl with a little bit of care but not much. Unfortunately, my writing skills were too weak, and some readers mistakenly thought she was green tea. The author was wronged😭😭😭) 7. Some readers said that the protagonist is a scumbag It is indeed a bit, after all, it is a harem novel with multiple female protagonists, and the three views are too righteous to open a harem later, so the writing is a little scumbag, but the author guarantees that any emotional scenes will be accepted (some characters do not have character cards because the express delivery jammed the author's computer and could not update the character cards)

This cover is from a Korean comic, but everyone knows it. The plot is considered top-notch among Korean comics (no yellow hair, mu ndong), and the painting style also combines the style of Japanese comics. It is a first-rate masterpiece.

At first, Ogawa definitely had a good heart and did not want his wife to accompany the president, but when he saw the protagonist dressed like that at his home, I think Ogawa was probably desperate and thought that his wife had betrayed him, so he agreed to the matter. Mrs. Ogawa did not realize how much impact what she did had on her husband. Instead, she believed that it was all her husband's fault. In the end, the two reconciled, and then she would definitely give it to the protagonist in the end. I can only say that this kind of plot is outrageous, and before this happened, Mrs. Ogawa had been criticizing the protagonist. I felt that the writing of this paragraph was not in line with my wishes, so I expressed my opinion.

After reading Chapter 9, I feel very disappointed. The only advantage of this author is the introduction and writing of Tianxiu. The content is too plain. In a simple sentence, it can be summarized as "I have taken off my pants. Show me this." That's it! I suggest the author go to the website to write, and I guarantee that it will be all right. 😂

The pine branches are elegant

I seem to have seen this cover somewhere

Original image

The chapters of the Apology Commissioner are too humble, just like licking a dog.

What kind of meritorious deeds, role-playing jobs, falling in love and exchanging merits are inexplicable, can't we just write them as role-playing points?

And there are probably too many female protagonists now. I thought that my ex-girlfriend's best friend was just a tool, but I didn't expect that she would sleep with her right away. Ex-girlfriend, ex-girlfriend's best friend, ex-girlfriend's senior actor, president of my company (to be determined), divorced wife, cousin, beautiful married neighbor, straight black colleague, personal maid, and a little black cat (I don't know if she is one of the previous heroines). Is it possible for so many authors to portray it?

Wow, no wonder the cover and character pictures look familiar to me. Clicking on the comment section is full of Korean comic acquaintances. By the way, my friend can recommend some safe software or websites.

Where did the yellow hair come from? The beautiful girl will not follow you without a green onion.

A very good systematic Tokyo novel with very interesting characters, especially Qing Yi and Aunt Nan 😏

When will the blocked chapters be released?

Hiss! This cover looks a bit familiar

It won't be cold anymore! The author changed his vest and started a new book! Are you planning another book? Don't be a eunuch

Look at what characters you have written since it was released. What you want to see is the interaction with your ex-girlfriend, love, misunderstandings, and daily life, instead of constantly writing new characters. You can make a heroine come to life better than anything else!

Ya Chun doesn't want it? 😭😭😍 Astringent, astringent🙂🙂

Shura Field! Shura Field! Shura Field! The much-loved Shura Field is about to open😏

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Who will steal my first place😡

There has been no update for two days. Did it go away?

There has been no update for several days. What happened?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

To be honest, from the beginning of March to the end of March, I only updated a short chapter. What's going on?