Space Zerg: Evolution and War

I don't know why my comment from yesterday disappeared, so I'll post it again here. The author's writing style is excellent, but everyone is here to see the bugs, whether they are farming or fighting, and you have already been here for ten small chapters, which are almost irrelevant to the main plot or the background story that does not need to be described in such a long paragraph. The only things related to the protagonist in this paragraph are the public beta, a reaction and a way to get out, and a prophet who only called the protagonist's name, and then disappeared. Anyway, I really can't stand it anymore. I'm waiting for the author to start the main plot again. Please come over and give me a kick. Anyway, I really feel that the current background story will not affect too much if I don't read it.

The writing is very, very, very good. The author is not a graduate student in biology. I like to read about genes, but I don't really want it to be a plot for a public beta game. However, I can barely watch it after writing it. The main reason is that the writing of genes is so good.

I have read a lot of Zerg novels, and this is the only Zerg novel worth reading for me. It's very good, it's unique, it's not the kind of mindless Zerg writing that just explodes troops.

🙂🙂Writing this niche literature is a waste of talent.

Why does the camera always jump? The player who was having a climax earlier is here. The perspective jumps directly afterwards.

Everything else is pretty good, but the artistic atmosphere is too serious, which makes me uncomfortable 🙂

There is a certain threshold for reading this novel. It is too literary and artistic, and it always jumps from perspective to write about the background for more than ten chapters. If you just want to read Zerg and enjoy it, my personal suggestion is to change the book. What I said above is just a rant, sorry.

The atmosphere of literature and art is too strong, and there is no need for this. After a wave of push for mankind, it is time to explode the troops, it is time to break through, and the most important thing is to refine the planet into minerals as soon as possible.

▓This article lays the foundation for the passing of the national uniform▓

Brother, you are too literary and artistic, you are so talented, I really can't stand it.

The book is quite good, but the perspective changes a lot. Also, some of your descriptions are a bit irrelevant to the plot. The main character is barely seen in a few photos.

The subject matter is good and the writing is good, but I came to watch Zerg Battle 😭

I hope to go to the planet of Avatar. If nothing else, I just want to see how these natives who can defeat armed groups die.

In fact, many people have some misunderstandings about Zerg civilization. Zerg civilization does not represent a civilization composed of insects, but refers to a civilization where the productivity is highly concentrated and the entire civilization aims at the will of the master. Therefore, Zerg civilization refers to a form of civilization.

The author's writing is still very good, at least the writing style is very good. But the article is a bit too gorgeous, a bit full of rhetoric, a bit biased towards Xu Zhimo's style, a bit like prose, which is not very popular in novel writing. This style of writing made me read very slowly, which was a bit uncomfortable. I can understand the author's pursuit of elegance and philosophy, but it is a bit inappropriate to express these too much in the novel. I feel that the author is at a bottleneck now. The author may consider reading novels by philosophers such as Calvino to make the whole novel easier to read. I hope the author can balance the relationship between the gorgeous vocabulary and philosophical discussions and the vernacular nature of the novel, so that it will be better

The writing is very good, the various settings are in place, and the free development of sufficient evolution is also well written. This panel makes me feel like I have seen the super god mechanic back then. But there are also shortcomings, that is, it is too literary and artistic, lacks actual data as support, and makes people feel very illusory. For example, the description of the natural disaster machine in Super Mechanic is that it can wash the surface of the planet in a short time, and the horror of natural disasters is proved from Han Xiao's experience and other people's experiences (because the panels are similar, so I use Super Mechanic as an example), and the killing and destruction described by the author will only make people feel a sense of beauty, but it will It makes people lose the sense of reality. I feel that the author is a good hand in writing Western fantasy epics. It is recommended to reduce the artistic description of various aspects and add actual data as comparative support (for example: if this cannonball hits a 5 mm thick titanium alloy steel plate, it can also blow a big hole in it, but when it acts on the Thunder Beast, it can only make the Thunder Beast's footsteps pause; the spread speed of the carpet; the size of the planet, etc.) Personal opinion, I am not deliberately looking for trouble, don't criticize if you don't like it.

It's not that I look down on you, brother author. There are very few books like Zerg that can write more than 2 million words. Either I can't finish it or I'm stuck halfway. Both the evolutionary stream and the system stream are very mediocre in the end. I have read countless books, and my favorite is books like Zerg. Unfortunately, there are not many books that I can read. They are either eye-catching, the number of words is pitiful, or the number is poor. Maybe the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment! I collected it first. The original author brother can write a different kind of Zerg. Don't be limited to the universe and expand your thinking.

You can learn from how the Zerg are made. This book is quite good.

I heard the writing is good. Come and take a look. Here is the eunuch. Let's go.

After looking through the bookshelf, I picked up another book 😭

I like your book very much. This book is just slightly different from traditional online articles, so don't worry about those opinions about being too esoteric. If it is changed to what they say, what is the difference between this book and other books? With your writing style, it's a big deal that you will publish a few popular online articles in the future.

The perspective of the protagonist is the perspective of the protagonist. The author just praised the protagonist like this, which really made me feel 6. The protagonist in the novel is just a character. It would be difficult to empathize with it if it were written with the feeling of a narrator.

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Why is it gone? 🙂

So as for the new book, why haven't you submitted it yet?