Martial Arts Myth: From the Start, I Had a Perfect Technique

... They are so ridiculous that they are such an embarrassing group. They know clearly that outsiders are unreliable, yet they deliberately irritate them, and then scream, why don't they shed some blood and tears? 😰 Deleted, poisonous

In order to make Pig's trotters become a lonely man, it's a trick that has been used for many years, but it's still used. Pig's trotters become stronger, which is useless. Even if they chase after them and save Xiaohua, why are they chasing after them? Going to a funeral.

Here I am again, with the last extravagant hope of becoming a benevolent person if I don't succeed, I set a goal and try to write five million words: The Taoist Witness, and the post will be the proof!

What kind of ridiculous plot is this? Since you want to write from the humble beginning, then you still want to have it all. Even though you know it's time to moisten, you still want to protect a wretched old man. Laughed. In the end, all your so-called family members died?      ,,,, This is so cool, but you still want to tell him that everything is fine, but we need to moisturize. 🥵What a beast.

Because Chapter 21 of the gathering to persuade people to quit The plot is poisonous, the relationship is poisonous Either let the people around the protagonist be safe Or let the protagonist go out of his way As a result, you wrote about Wang Dachui's brotherly relationship for more than ten years, and Chapter 21 wrote about his whole family to death There is also digging in the front. I wrote several chapters, going to a brothel to dig out, eating to dig out, and then putting it in fried chicken. Who is the author trying to disgust? As for the brothel, the protagonist is as impulsive as if he has never seen a woman before. When he comes to this area, who would be impulsive when passing by a ktv foot washing shop?

The mother and sister of Sledgehammer died, and Sledgehammer was taken away. I saw that this is really poisonous. It's not that he can't die, but it's completely meaningless. There is no turning point for the protagonist. I'm just disgusting readers.

Before Chapter 20, it had always felt natural, including getting along with my brothers and practicing. Until his brother was taken away and his brother's sister and mother were killed. At this point, he really couldn't stand it any longer. It was quite smooth at first, but now it feels very deliberate. The description of the protagonist's reaction to this incident also seems very unclear. If the front paving is good enough. So it's not unacceptable for this kind of incident to happen. The problem is that after writing about ten chapters, the emotional lines of several people are not well laid out. Then the main character is heartbroken It really makes me dream back to ten years ago.

Readers of online novels don't accept this trick, and only express their sorrows in order to compose poems. The reason why predecessors wrote well is not because they wrote about so-and-so who died. What the predecessors wrote about was human nature, reality, and tragedy. What did you write? Do the emotions between people resonate? Have you written about family affection? Did you write that the protagonist's efforts are beyond help? Have you written about society's crushing of individuals? No, you just wrote about an ordinary person who died in the general trend, and you know that readers don't want to read it, but you think it looks good. You write too much and you write too little. There is no convincing at all. Do you think readers will think that the protagonist's transformation is natural? Laughing, modern people's accumulation of philosophy of human nature has completely crushed the ancient people. In the eyes of readers, this awareness is simply superfluous. Otherwise, why would you give the protagonist a golden finger? Why are you still writing a book at Qidian?

After reading more than twenty chapters, I gave up. First of all, the plot arrangement is not good, and the affairs of the Sledgehammer family are pulled back and forth. As readers, we don't care at all about the life or death of a minor supporting character's family, and the conflict is so poorly arranged. Secondly, the writing is not that good either. It is a novel with dialogues. It keeps talking and talking. It is as talkative as a great teacher. He can say a few words about anything. Two or three characters, three or four characters are just one comma. It shows that the author lacks the ability to write long sentences. The plot of a book is not good, and the writing style is not good either. If the Golden Finger article is not enjoyable, what can it be worth seeing?

What you need to pay attention to when reading this book is that the author likes to feed you poison.